广西马山县高考英语二轮复习 语短文改错练习（7）.doc

广西马山县2016高考英语短文改错二轮练习1.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。when l was in high school, i had an awful experienceat that time l was so brave and outgoing as the othersbecause of that, a boy name big tom would do all kinds of bad things to mei was scaring to see himso yesterday, a friend told me that big tom wanted to see me and invited me to dine outi agreedwe met in a bar and i was so happy that nothing went wellby the end of that night, big tom apologized for what he has done to menow we have become close friendsin our life, everyone may make mistakeswhat counts most are that we have the courage to correct them【参考答案】1.when i was in high school, i had an awful experience. at that time i was notso brave and outgoing as the others. because of that, a boy name big tom namedwould do all kinds of bad things to me. i was scaring to see him. scaredso yesterday, a friend told me that big tom wanted to see me and invited but inviteme to dine out. i agreed. we met in a bar and i was so happy that nothing went everythingwell. by the end of that night, big tom apologized for what he has done to me. at hadnow we have become close friends.in our life, everyone may make mistakes. what counts most are that we ishave the courage to correct them.短文改错 假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 the other day i happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. i found it prettily good. one who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. sometimes it is the details in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what were doing. we should form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. whats more, we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality. when facing with lots of work, the faster we do them, the more mistakes we usually make. in that case we are possible to neglect the details. so we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no importance.【参考答案】2.the other day i happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. i found it prettily good. happened prettyone who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. sometimes it is the attentiondetails in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what were doing. we should 去掉in form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. whats more, we becauseshould learn to keepbalance of quantity and quality. when facing with lots of work, the faster the faced或把with去掉we do them , the more mistakes we usually make .in that case we are possible to neglect the it likelydetails. so we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no whichimportance.短文改错this morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. at the noon we had a picnic on the grass. i eat too much, so i couldnt finish my sandwich. as i didnt know what to do with it, i asked my sister for advices. she pointed at the notice, that said, “ no litter.” and she asked me throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. just then i saw an elephant coming slow towards us. suddenly an idea came into her mind. i could feed the elephant by my sandwich and i did so in the end. seen this, my sister smiled and said, “what clever you are!”【参考答案】3.第一处： 去掉第二个the 第二处： eatate 第三处： advices-advice 第四处： that-which 第五处： throw前加 to 第六处： slow-slowly 第七处： her-my 第八处： by-with/on第九处： seen-seeing 第十处： what-how短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 although all the students seem very happily at our school, as 66_far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful67_if the school could be decorated. we students thought the school68_looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in69_a rainy day. we would be much happier and are able to study70_better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, 71_photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons72_and enrich our lives. original art work are too expensive, but 73_unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. using only a74_little money, it can make our school a nicer place. 75_参考答案、短文改错66. happilyhappy 67. we后加are 68. thoughtthink69. inon 70 去are或arebe 71.正确 72.thatwhich73.workworks 74. unlessif 75. itwe（*）smoking which is a widespread habit even among school children.76. the number of young smokers are increasing. it is reported that77. over two-fifth of the students in a certain school smoke, and78. some of whom even steal money to buy cigarettes. this is terrible. 79. as we all know, smoking is harmful to our health. so its80. even harmful to middle school students for it does great harm not81. only to their health but also for their mind. middle school students82. are future builders of the country. they should spend their time83. learning useful knowledges. so its really time that these young84. smokers made up their minds give up smoking. 85. 【参考答案】(五)76去掉which 77.are is 78. two- fifth two-fifths 79. whom them 80.so but 81. harmful more 82.for to83. 84.knowledges knowledge 85. minds to 短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。i was born in a farmer family in suizhong county, liaoning province in june, in 1965 when i was a child, i dreamed of flyingin the sky i joined the arm