高考话题写作高分句.doc

话题写作高分句话题一 外貌特征1.我的同桌是个衣服从不合身的古怪男孩。(定语从句；odd)(13 湖北书面表达改)My deskmate is an odd boy whose clothes never fit him.2. 萨莉 (Sally) 是个二十岁出头，长发及腰的女孩。(with复合结构)Sally is a girl in her early twenties with long hair reaching the waist.3. 我想知道这么多年玛丽是怎样保持身材的。(宾语从句)(15 福建单选改)I wonder how Mary has kept her figure all these years.4. 他脸上流露着如此严肃的表情，我很害怕。(so . that .; wear)He was wearing so serious an expression / such a serious expression on his face that I was quite frightened / scared.5. 一个人能靠外表吃饭，却 (偏偏) 要靠才华。(liveoff,appearance)One could live off his appearance, but instead lives off his talent.话题二 性格与行为特征1. 他就是这么一个总是挑别人毛病的人。(定语从句；fault)He is such a man who is always finding fault with other people.2. 正是苦干、决心以及温和的天性使她进入了医学院。(强调句；aswellas)(人教U1)It was hard work and determination as well as her gentle nature that got her into medical school.3. 他不但展现出了勇气，还证明了自己是个可以信赖的人。(倒装句；display)Not only has he displayed courage, but also he has proved himself to be a reliable person.4. 不要在意别人说什么，只要我们对自己做过的事充满信心。(宾语从句)(12 北京书面表达改)Dont mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.5. 乔 (Joe) 既骄傲又固执，从不认错且总是找他人担责。(现在分词作状语；admit,blame)(14 浙江单选改)Joe is proud and stubborn, never admitting he is wrong and always looking for someone else to blame.话题三 兴趣与爱好1. 这种硬币品质高，值得收藏。(of +n;worth)(13 福建阅读)The coin is of high quality and worth collecting.2. 养宠物是她的爱好，这极大地抚慰了她孤独的心灵。(非限制性定语从句；comfort)Raising / Keeping pets is her hobby, which comforts her lonely heart greatly.3. 身为一个活跃的年轻人，我喜欢体育和户外活动。(being,fond)(11 辽宁书面表达改)Being an active young person, Im fond of sports and outdoor activities.4. 为了保持健康，退休后他开始把骑自行车作为经常性的锻炼形式。(不定式作目的状语；take up)To keep healthy, he took up cycling as a regular form of exercise after he retired / his retirement.5. 体育运动不但对身体有益还有助于使你的头脑更敏锐。(benefitv, sharp)Sports not only benefit the body, but also help make your mind sharper.话题四 人体与动作1. 在漆黑的房间里他摸索着走到了床边，寻找开关。(feel ones way)He felt his way to the bed in the dark room in search of the switch.2. 约翰正在房间学习突然听到了一声尖叫。(when)(人教U5)John was studying in his room when he heard a scream.3. 我抬头看她的眼睛时，她朝我微笑并伸出双手抓住了我的手。(look up, reach)(14 重庆阅读改)When I looked up into her eyes, she smiled at me and reached out her hands to grasp mine.4. 她紧紧地拥抱着丈夫，眼睛里噙满了感激 (gratituden) 的泪水。(并列句)(10 湖北完形改)She hugged her husband tightly and her eyes (were) filled with tears of gratitude.5. 我不知道小说里到底是什么使他放声痛哭。(强调句)(12 湖北完成句子)I dont know what it was in the novel that made him burst into tears / burst out crying.话题五 生活起居1. 电话又坏了，我得找人把它修好。(have sth done)The phone is out of order / not working again and I have to have it repaired.2. 大部分青少年比较喜欢晚上熬夜，早上睡懒觉。 (08 浙江阅读)Most teenagers prefer to stay up late at night and sleep late in the morning.3. 尽管我很累，但是能帮助父母做家务我很开心。(as)Tired as I was, I was happy that I could help my parents with the housework / do the housework.4. 家具齐全的公寓，9月1日起可供出租。Fully furnished flats are available to rent from 1st September.5. 他们想看到自己的女儿安顿下来，结婚生子。 (17 天津单选改)Theyd like to see their daughter settle down, get married, and have kids.话题六家人、朋友与周围的人1.任何人，无论他是官员还是公交车司机，都应受到同样的尊重。(whether. or .; equally)(12福建单选改)Anyone, whether he is an official or a bus driver, should be equally respected.2.我们拥有的朋友越多，获得的快乐也就越多。(themore . the more)(14全国短文改错改)The more friends we have, the more pleasure we can gain / get.3.无论我们多忙，都该抽时间陪陪父母。(让步状语从句；spare,accompany)However busy we may be, we should spare some time to accompany our parents.4.出生在一个有三个哥哥的家庭里，大卫从小就被培养重视分享的意识。(过去分词作状语；bring up;value)(11福建单选改)Born into a family with three brothers, David was brought up to value the sense of sharing.5.我父母已经结婚20年了，但他们从没有吵过一次架。(倒装句)My parents have been married for 20 years but never once have they quarreled with each other.话题七社交礼仪1.应该鼓励孩子们养成良好的习惯并且守规矩。(被动句；behave)(11浙江书面表达改)Children should be encouraged to develop / form good habits and behave themselves.2.认真倾听可以显示尊重、促进理解、改善人际关系。(promote)(08江苏书面表达改)Good listening can show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.3.当你直视他人时，他们会觉得你(很)欣赏他们正在讲的话。(宾语从句；appreciate)(15安徽任务阅读)When you look people in the eye, they feel you appreciate what they are saying.4.为某人的健康或者成功祝酒时，我们总会碰杯(clink)。(when +现在分词短语)We will clink glasses when drinking to someones health or success.5.我要向你道歉我恐怕误拆了你的信。(apology)(11陕西单词拼写)I have an apology to make to you / I have to make an apology to you Im afraid I opened your letter by mistake.6.你不该打断会议来告诉我那件事，你本可以会后告诉我。(虚拟语气；interrupt)(14湖北完成句子)You shouldnt / oughtnt to have interrupted the meeting to tell me that; you could have come to tell me afterwards.话题八学校生活 (一)1.此课程旨在使学生能胜任护理工作。(bedesigned to, equip . for)The course is designed to equip students for a career in nursing.2.应该鼓励学生将课堂上所学的知识运用到实践中。(被动句)Students should be encouraged to apply what they have learned in class to practice.3.自从她出国深造后就不再和我们联系了。(no longer)(11上海句子翻译)No longer has she / She has no longer kept in touch with us since she went abroad for further education / study.4.不管就业形势如何严峻，对优秀大学毕业生总是有需求的。(让步状语从句；top,indemand)However / No matter how serious the employment situation is, top graduates from universities will always be in demand.5.尽管对破旧的校园和设备简陋的教室感到失望，但我发现老师们很有耐心也很体贴。(as,shabby)(12湖北书面表达改)Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate.6.这个学生没有请假就离校三天。(leave,absent)(12湖北完成句子改)The student was absent from school for three days without asking for leave (first).话题九学校生活 (二)1.通过不断努力，我在学习上取得了平稳进步。(constant)Through my constant efforts, I have made steady progress in my studies.2.下个月就该交论文了，一周七天我都在工作，(而且)常常到深夜。(due)(14浙江单选改)The paper is due next month, and I am working seven days a week, often long into the night.3.为解决我所面对的问题，我通常选择参考相关的学习资料或网页。(relevant)To solve the problems (which / that) Im faced with, I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages.4.我决定专注(学习)英语并且最终我的努力取得了成功。(pay off)(14山东书面表达改)I decided to concentrate on my English and finally my efforts / hard work paid off.或I decided to focus my mind / attention on my English andfinally my efforts / hard work paid off.5.最有益于我们工作的，不是我们做了多少事，而是在所做的事情中我们倾注了多少爱。(强调句；benefit)(11陕西单选改)It is not how much we do but how much love we put into what we do that benefits our work most.话题十语言学习1.为了取得更好的成绩，你应该在考试前再复习一下我们学过的所有内容。(11四川单选改)To get a better grade, you should go over everything that we have learned / covered before the test.2.他法语学得很好，在明年学校组织的法国之旅中将会派上用场。(非限制性定语从句；grasp / knowledge)He has a good grasp / knowledge of French, which will be useful for the school trip to France next year.3.有这么多的单词和短语我能理解，但不能准确使用。(定语从句)There are / were so many words and phrases that I can / could understand but cant / couldnt use accurately.4.我们靠课堂上学到的东西不太可能通过考试。(onthe basis of)We are not likely to pass the exam on the basis of what weve picked up / learned during the classes.5.如果他以前花更多的时间练习说英语，那现在就能说得更好了。(if虚拟条件句)If he had spent more timepractisingspeaking English before, he would be able to speak it much better now.话题十一工作与职业(一)1.毫无疑问，这位候选人符合该职位的要求。(thereis no doubt that; meet the requirements)There is no doubt that the candidate meets the requirements for this position / post.2.虽然很累，但是我不后悔志愿帮助残疾儿童。(as)Tired as I was, I didnt regret volunteering to help the disabled children.3.常言道，不要以貌取人。(judge)(13全国单选改)You cant judge a book by its cover, as the old saying goes.或You cant judge by appearances, as the old saying goes.4.直到大学毕业，我才决定成为一名程序设计师。(not. until .)I didnt make up my mind to become a program designer until I graduated from university.5.护士们不仅要求涨工资，还要求减少工作时间。(倒装句；not onlybut also)(14全国单选改)Not only do the nurses want a pay increase, but also they want reduced working hours.6.警察在我们的社会中起着极其重要的作用。(playa vital role)The police play a vital role in our society.话题十二工作与职业(二)1.我期待您的答复。(11辽宁书面表达改)Im looking forward to your reply.2.我的工作包括招聘与培训新员工。(involve)My work involves employing and training new employees / staff.3.有相关(岗位)工作经验的求职者优先。(relevant, prefer)Applicants with relevant work experience are preferred.4.说实在的，很多人把名和利看得很重要。(attach)(人教U5)To be honest / frank, a lot of people attach great importance to fame and fortune / becoming rich and famous.5.正是他手写的求职信使其从众多的求职者中脱颖而出。(强调句)It was his handwritten application letter that made him stand out from a large number of applicants / candidates.6.吉米(Jimmy)一到就发现排了一条长队的申请者等着面试。(13山东阅读)Upon arrival, Jimmy found a long line of applicants (were) waiting to be interviewed.话题十三工作与职业(三)1.他有潜力成为世界级的音乐家。(potential)He has the potential to become a world-class musician.2.很多难题亟待解决，新升职的经理正面临巨大挑战。(with复合结构)With so many difficult problems to settle / handle / deal with, the newly-promoted manager is facing a great challenge.3.毫无疑问这是你获得工作技能、提高能力的绝佳机会。(同位语从句)There is no doubt that this is an ideal / perfect / golden opportunity for you to acquire work skills and improve your ability.4.尽管我被提升为经理了，我感觉我没有做好承担新责任的准备。(让步状语从句)Although I have been promoted to manager, I dont feel ready to undertake / take on new responsibilities.5.周日是我们不必工作的一天，是我们全身心地投入去享受并庆祝美好事物的时刻。(定语从句；be supposed to, devoteoneself to)(08湖北阅读改)Sunday is a day when we are not supposed to work, a time when we devote ourselves to enjoying and celebratingwhatis beautiful.6.我认为不管发生什么，我们必须保持冷静并找出解决问题的方法。(宾语从句；find a solution to)(09湖南书面表达改)I think / find that whatever / no matter what happens, we must keep calm and find a solution to the problem.话题十四问题与冲突1.我想分享我解决难题的方法.(approach)(11安徽书面表达改)Id like to share my approach to difficulties.2.我们应该学会多沟通并设身处地为他人着想。(place/ position)We should learn to communicate more and put ourselves in others place / position.3.有困难请向警察求助。(祈使句；turn to)(08上海句子翻译)Please turn to the police for help when (you are) in trouble.4.父母的言行对孩子的一生都有影响。(what引导主语从句；effect / influence)What parents say and do has a life-long effect / influence on their children.5.要避免此类冲突，我认为双方保持冷静很有必要。(it作形式宾语；consider)To avoid such conflicts, I consider it necessary for both sides to keep / stay calm.6.从某种程度上讲，是你的消极态度造成了外语学习上的困难。(强调句；attitude)To a (certain) degree /Tosome extent, its your negative attitude that causes difficulties in learning a foreign language.7.在老师的帮助下，我学会了如何分析并解决问题。(settle)With the help of my teacher, I have learned how toanalyseand settle problems.8.就我们班而言，急需解决的问题是有些学生上课偷偷玩手机。(现在分词作定语；表语从句；resolve)(15广东书面表达改)As for our class, the problem requiringto beresolved urgently is that some students play cell phones secretly in class.话题十五成功与失败1.我们应该下苦功夫通过学习来提高自己。(take pains to)(15福建书面表达改)We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning.2.一想到没卖完所有报纸，乔治(George)就觉得沮丧。(sink, failure)(15湖北完形改)Georges heart sank as he thought of / at the thought of his failure to sell all his papers.3.不到万不得已不要承认失败。(not. until .)Dont admit defeat until you really have to.4.是勇气和决心而不是运气保证了他的成功。(强调句；guarantee)It was not luck but courage and determination that guaranteed his success.5.她奋斗了十年来取得成功。(不定式作目的状语；struggle)She struggled for ten years to achieve success.6.要克服如此多的问题需要极大的勇气。(it作形式主语；take)It takes great courage to overcome so many problems.7.他们决心不惜任何代价也要坚持并实现他们的梦想。(cost, stick to)They were determined to stick to andrealise/fulfil/ achieve their dream at all costs / at any cost.8.可能要很多年你的努力才会有回报。(itis / was . before)It may be many years before your hard work pays off / is rewarded.写作十大“加分”句型句型一 分词作状语Moved by the kids, I decided to donate all my money to them.被孩子们感动了，我决定把我所有的钱都捐给他们。Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.看到父亲工作这么辛苦，我忍不住怆然泪下。点评：分词作状语可以用来替代时间、条件、原因等状语从句，让文章显得更加简洁，同时功底更深。分词作状语的用法：当状语从句的主语与主句的主语一样时，可直接省略从句的主语，并把从句的谓语改成分词（主动语态改成现在分词，被动语态改成过去分词），从而构成分词作状语结构。【例1】When I see Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.【例2】Because I was moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them.Moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them.句型二 副词提前Obviously, one of the best ways to keep healthy is to do sports.显然，保持健康最好的方法之一是做运动。Eventually, every child will leave home to lead his own life as a fully independent adult.最终，每一个孩子都会离开家庭去过自己的生活，成为一个完全独立的成年人。点评：如果要选一种最让人心生感触的句型，副词提前的做法即使不是最好，也是之一了。前置的副词让作者还没说出具体的事件，内心的想法已经呼之欲出。这正是这种无比简单的语法现象所焕发出的魅力所在。除了提升情感效果之外，副词提前也是让文章结构清晰的一个非常好的办法。我们常用的firstly, furthermore, finally等等所谓的“逻辑词”都是属于这一种类型，同学们要时刻想着去用它。注意事项：用来提前的必须是副词！除了上面给出来的2个例句之外，再分享一篇作文里一个较难的句子，作文题目是“我最难忘的回忆”。【例】Oddly enough, my most precious memory lies in the days when I was ill in hospital.非常奇怪的是，我最珍贵的回忆发生在我生病住院的那些日子里。句型三 动名词作主语Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.听音乐可以让我们感觉放松。Doing exercise keeps us healthy.做运动让我们保持健康。点评：动名词做主语是最简单的一种加分句型了，非常容易掌握。注意事项：如果主语只有一个动作，谓语动词要用单数第三人称！大家可能觉得上面给出来的两个例句并不是十分精彩，但是动名词作主语只要合理使用，还是会让人眼前一亮的。请看下句：【例】Besides, taking some small sports equipment along with you can help you do exercise whenever you are free.另外，随身携带一些小型运动器械可以让你利用任何空闲的时间来运动。句型四 强调句It is in recent years that people begin to realize the importance of environmental protection.最近这些年人们才开始意识到保护环境的重要性。点评：强调句型是一种规律性极强、非常好用的高级句型，有利于增进文章的感情色彩。强调句型的基本模式：It is / was +句子要强调的部分+ that +句子中剩余的部分。例如，原本我们想写的句子是：Eric found a beautiful vase in the cave.要强调主语Eric，则为It was Eric that found a beautiful vase in the cave.要强调宾语a beautiful vase，则为It was a beautiful vase that Eric found in the cave.句型五 同位语or同位语从句Beijing, the capital of China, has a great many places of interest.北京是中国的首都，有很多的旅游景点。The fact is clear that our planet is becoming warmer and warmer.很显然，地球正在变暖。点评：相比于前几种闪光句型，同位语和同位语从句就要复杂一点了，尤其是同位语从句要复杂一些。当同位语从句被合理使用，尤其是和排比句一起使用的时候，所产生的效果是震撼性的。同位语从句的基本结构是：抽象名词+ that +抽象名词的内容（从句）+主句剩余部分。【例】I have just recieved the message that a serious earthquake struck a county of Taiwan yesterday.我刚收到一个消息：昨天台湾某县发生了严重的地震。关于同位语从句的效果，且看独立宣言中的名句：We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness.我们认为以下事实是不言自明的：人生而平等，并拥有不可分割的权利，包括拥有生命的权利、获得自由的权利以及追求幸福的权利。句型六 经典句型这些句型有三个特点：1.专业。这些句型都是经过验证的在议论文中经常使用的套话，使用这些句型显得比较专业。2.万金油。这些句型经过前人的实践发现非常容易使用，只要往自己写好的句子上硬套就行，甚至对时态语态都无特殊要求，如同万金油一样。3.无意义。这些句型本身并没有什么特殊含义，只是辅助一下预期或让表意更严谨一点，有它无它对语义影响其实不大。这些句型包括：There is no denying that +陈述句不可否认There is no doubt that +陈述句毫无疑问Needless to say,陈述句不用多说，It is widely accepted that +陈述句众所周知As is known to all,陈述句众所周知，From my point of view,陈述句我个人认为，Personally,陈述句我个人认为，As far as I am concerned,陈述句我个人认为，As far as I know,陈述句据我所知，When it comes to，陈述句说到鉴于句型太多，就不一一举例子了，大家只要把自己想说的话放到“陈述句”那一部分就可以了。记住，剩余的部分一点都不要改，包括逗号！举个例子吧。一般我们会说：Mr Zhang is the most handsome teacher in the world.点评：这句显得很普通，但是如果我们使用经典句型的话，就会显得高级一点：【例】As is known to all Mr Zhang is the most handsome teacher in the world.众所周知，张老师是世界上最帅的老师。【例】As far as I am concerned, Mr Zhang is the most handsome teacher in the world.我个人认为，张老师是世界上最帅的老师。句型七 巧用asAs winter comes, more and more leaves fall off the trees, yellow and sad.随着冬天的来临，越来越多悲伤地黄叶从树上落下。The pollution is getting worse as the economy develops.随着经济的发展，污染正在变得更加严重。Moms hair is not as black as it used to be.妈妈的头发不再像过去一样乌黑亮丽。点评：当，随着as time goes by随着时间的流逝作为regard A as B把A当做Bas a result结果是正如，就像as we all know/ as everyone knows正如我们都知道的as we had expected正如我们期待的那样as is know to all众所周知as is mentioned before正如前面所提到的as the saying goes就像谚语说的那样as it turns out正如结果所展示的那样因为比较as . as it used to和过去一样句型八 定语从句The man, w