Unit 4 composition(give advice).ppt

Unit4Writing Whensomestudentsarewriting Mymomwillneverworryabout 担心 mywriting Task Writing 你的好朋友给你写了一封信 跟你说他最近遇到了问题 感到压力很大 晚上睡不着觉 请你用英语给他回信 给他一些适当的建议 字数60 80个字 Howdoyouwriteacomposition BeforeWriting WhileWriting AfterWriting 一想 二提 三扩 四改 审题 思考 提纲 结构 扩句 连接 修改 誊写 Task1 Howtowrite BeforeWriting 1 Readandunderstandtherequest 2 Determinethetenseandpeson 3 Determinethestructure 你的好朋友给你写了一封信 跟你说他最近遇到了问题 感到压力很大 晚上睡不着觉 请你用英语给他回信 给他一些适当的建议 字数60 80个字 Let sgiveagoodstructure 结构 toyourwriting Howtowrite Structure Whichoneisbetter AorB A B Beginning Body Summary 三段式B B S 开头 topicsentence主题句 主体 有层次的展开 总结 主题再现 Notes 1 playsports 2 hangoutwithfriends 3 talktoyourfriendsoryourteachers 4 spendtimealone 5 playcomputergames6 readbooks7 eatfood sleep8 watchmovies outline Pairwork Puttheideasintocorrectplaces MindmapOutline 提纲 Outlinewriting 写提纲 Beginning Body Summary 三段式B B S outline It snormaltohavesuchproblems letmegiveyousomeadvice 1 Youshouldplaysports 3 Youcouldspendtimealone 2 You dbettertalkwithyourfriends 4 Whynotreadinterestingbooks 5 Whydon tyouwatchmovies 6 It sthebestforyoutohaveagoodsleep Hopethingsworkout Canyoumakethesentencemorebeautiful Task2 Howtowrite II Whilewriting 1 Andyoucaneatsomefood too 2 What smore youcaneatsomedeliciousandhealthyfoodwithyourfriendseveryweekendthere too Modifiedwords 修饰词 adj adv 5w1h Connectivewords 连接词 Whichoneisbetter what who where when why how e g 1 Iliketoseethetrees IliketoseethebigtreescarefullywithmygoodfriendsonYueluMountaineverySundaymorningbecauseIthinkit sreallyinteresting who where why when how adj adv 5W1H 扩句 Youshouldplaysports Youshouldplaysportswithyourfriendsafterschoolbeausesportscanloweryourstress Practicemakesperfect 熟能生巧 2 You dbettertalkwithyourbestfriends Whenyouarestressedout you dbettertalkwithyourbestfriends 3 Whynotreadsomeinterestingbooks Inmyopinion readingsomeinterestingbooksyoulikebesthelpsalot Isthisgood Iliketo Iliketo Iliketo Iliketo Allinall Iliketo Don talwaysusethesamewordorphrase 不要总是重复使用词或短语 Connectivewords 连接词 并列关系 and with aswellas转折关系 but however though although因果关系 so because顺承关系 firstly secondly thirdly then what smore 除此之外 inaword 总之 allinall 总的来说 Notes Let sstartwriting 假如你是Mike 你的朋友刘勇给你写了一封邮件 说他最近学习压力特别大 晚上总是睡不好 请你就这个问题给他写一封电子邮件 内容包括 1 提出具体的建议 2 提出希望 字数60 80字 文章中不能出现你的真实的姓名 学校和地名 1 Canyourevise 修改 thewriting Task3 Howtowrite AfterWriting DearLiuYong Iamsorrytohearthatyouaresoanxiousrecently Infactitisverycommonamongmiddleschoolstudents sopleasedon tworry Now Iwillgiveyousomeadvice Firstly Ithinkyou dbetterlistentomusic dosomesportsandreadsomeinterestingbookstorelaxyourselfandrelieveyourstress Secondly communicatingwithyourclassmatesisoftenverynecessaryforyou What smore Ithelpsalottoaskyourteachersforsomeadvice whichcanmakeyoulessstressed Inaword pleasedon tregardyourproblem