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2012届高考英语考前冲刺精选专题分类汇编书面表达【山东省烟台市2012届高三第一次模拟考试】第二节 写作（30分）假设你是李华。近日，你的英语笔友Jack听说你们学校正在开展“建设节约型社会（Construction of an energy-saving society）”主题活动，来邮件请你介绍一下你对活动的看法和建议。请你结合以下要点，用英语给Jack回复邮件。1. 不浪费粮食和纸张； 2. 尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋；3. 毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用；4. 其他建议注意： 1. 不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节； 2. 词数：120-150。开头已经为你写了，不计入总词数；3. 参考词汇：方便筷disposable chopsticksDear Jack, Glad to receive your E-mail.【答案】Glad to receive you E-mail. As you know, there has been an activity of“Construction of an energy-saving society”in our school recently. I think it is of vital importance because our society is facing the increasing danger of lack of energy. Many reasonable suggestions are given during the activity. In my opinion, therere many things we can do. In our daily life, we shouldnt waste any food or paper. It is also advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, I think the government should make it a rule that those used textbooks should not be thrown away when we graduate from school, because most of the books are in good condition and can be rccycled. Actually, there are quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to take buses or. ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to construct an energy-saving society.Yours, Li Hua 【山东省单县第二中学2012届高三下学期模拟】2012届高三第一次模拟考试】 假如你叫李华，是北京某外国语学校学生会主席。学校将组织你们参观故宫博物院。请根据下面表格中的内容用英语给学校播音室写一个口头通知。故宫简介世界上最大的皇宫(royal palace)，始建于明代，约600年历史参观时间下周日9:0016:00 交通方式上午8:00校门口集合乘坐校车前往;下午16:00在故宫北门乘车返回。注意事项 1.自备午餐;2.文明参观注意: 1.词数:约120-150; 2.开头己为你写好，不计入总词数。Attention please, everyone, This is an announcement from the Students Union。 【答案】One possible version: Attention please, everyone,This is an announcement from the Students Union. Next Sunday all students will be given a chance to visit the Palace Museum，which used to be Chinas royal palace，It was established during the Ming Dynasty and then passed on to the Qing Dynasty, and its the largest one in the world. The whole visit will last 8 hours till 4 oclock in the afternoon ，so you must take a packed lunch with you. At 8 oclock Sunday morning, you are required to get on the buses at the school gate, so that youll have enough time to get there before nine. And your tickets will be given out on the buses. While visiting, be sure not to make any loud noises or throw things about，or do anything against the rules. And at 4 oclock the school buses will be waiting for you at the north entrance. Dont be late.Wish you a pleasant visit. Thank you.【山东省青岛市2012届高三第一次模拟考试】 假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友David发来E-mail说，他想利用暑假来中国学习汉语和武术，可父母不同意，他对此拿不定主意。请你给他回E-mail，谈谈你的观点并说明理由。 注意：1. 词数120-150； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear david,i am glad to here from your e-mail and you are always so considerate to care about my engliah learning. recently,i have made a great progress with the help of our english teacher and she always be very kind and pacient when explaining the quesstion for me. i also appreciate your suggestion that getting up early to practise my spoken english. my parents and i are very happy about the progress that i have made but i often get confused about the grammar. could you give me some advice? thank you very much. i am waitng for your reply. yous Li huaTow possible version：Dear David, thanks for your last letter and you wanna know about my english studying. now, in the following i am going to talk about it in three aspects. by now i have learnt english for almost10 years, and i have recorded a large number vacabularies and practice my oral english every day. meanwhile, i read china daily every day, ithink its a good way for english learner. i like seeing engilsh movies and singing english songs.but the problem is there is no foreigner here and i can not talk with the native speaker. and i wanna have a face to face chance to check my english.yours,LI Hua 山东省东营市2012届高三第一次模拟考试】假设你是李华，今天去找外教Mr Smith，但他不在，于是你给他留下一封信，内容如下：1询问他对昨晚的京剧演出印象如何；2告知他给你网购的图书存在质量问题，需要调换；3提醒他参加周末的英语角活动。注意：1. 词数：120-150。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2. 可适当增节细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr Smith，I have come to your apartment, but Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Mr Smith， I have come to your apartment，hut its a pity that you happen to be out. What do you think of the performances of Beijing Opera last night? Judging from the content expression on your face，it must have been an unforgettable experience for youIm very glad that you like itAs you know，Beijing Opera is a kind of traditional Chinese opera and many foreigners like it very much And I regret to tell you there is something wrong with the book you purchased for me onlineIts front cover is missing on its deliverySo Im afraid a complaint has to be made to the shop owner to get it changed before the deadlineBesidesId like to remind you to attend the English corner at 8：00 am this SundayYour presence will be greatly appreciated Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua【山东省济宁市2012届高三第一次模拟考试】假如你叫朱文，你的美国笔友Rick欲了解中国学生“学雷锋小组(Learn-from-Lei Feng Group)”是怎么回事儿。请按下列要点用英语写一封120150词的电子邮件。(1)简要介绍雷锋其人。(2)中学生学雷锋小组的情况：人数不等，自主结合，志愿做好事。(3)你对此类活动的看法。【答案】高考资源网【山东省枣庄市2012届高三第一次模拟考试】假设你叫李华，是我市第三中学高一学生。最近你听到了一个消息：自2014年起，山东省高考英语不再进行听力测试请你用英语给21世纪（英语）报的编辑写一封信，谈谈你对这一变化的看法注意：1词数120150；2参考词汇：高考-the college entrance examinationDear Editor, Yours Sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to inquire you about some information on 询问的某方面。 I would be very grateful if you could reply as soon as possible. Thank you very much in advance.I shall be grateful if you could have details concerning it available. I appreciate you for any further information you may be able to give me about 询问的方面 in the meanwhile. Thank you again for your help to me. I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.Yours faithfully, Liming (人名)【山东省淄博市2012届高三第一次模拟考试】写作（满分30分）3月1日下午（星期四），一个美国中学生代表团到校访问，师生一行十几人参观了学校，之后在你们班举行了一个小型座谈会，历时约一小时。事后，英语老师要求就当天的活动写一篇120-150词的英语日记。座谈会主要内容：相互介绍；中方学生代表谈传统节日文化；美方学生代表谈兴趣爱好；自由交流。注意：可适当增加细节，使文章内容连贯，语言流畅。日记格式已给出，不计入总词数。FineThursday March 1, 2012【答案】A Possible VersionThursday Marchl, 2012 FineThis afternoon an American high school delegation, consisting of 10 students and 5 teachers came to visit our school. Our headmaster showed them around some parts of the school, such as the library, the lab and the gym.Fortunately, our class was chosen to have an informal discussion with the visitors, which was a good opportunity for us to practice our English. Everyone at present was active to introduce themselves one by me. Our monitor, Zhanghua,made a brief introduction of the Chinese traditional festivals, especially the Chinese Spring Festival.Soon after that Tom, an American student, who was a great fan of Yaoming and Jeremy Shu-How Lin, said something about NBA and some other hobbies. Then we talked about some other topics that we were concerned with.Almost an hour had passed before we realized it. Its really amazing to talk with the American teachers and students in English, which helps us a lot with our English.【山东省潍坊市2012届高三第一次模拟考试】【答案】 Dear Mr Smith, I have come to your apartment, but its a pity that you happen to be out. what do you think of the performances of Beijing Opera last night? Judging from the content expression on you face, it must have been an unforgettable experience for you. Im very glad that you like it. As you know, Beijing Opera is a kind of traditional Chinese opera and many foreigners like it very much. And I regret to tell you there is something wrong with the book you purchased for me online. Its front cover is missing on its delivery. So Im afraid a complaint has to be made to the shop owner to get it changed before the deadline. Besides, Id like to remind you to attend the English corner at 8:00 am this Sunday. Your presence will be greatly appreciated. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua第二节：写作（满分30分）近年来选秀类的电视节目（TV shows） 吸引了很多人的注意力。有的在校学生为了实现自己的明星梦辍学参加。请谈谈你对这一现象的观点。注意：1词数120150； 2可适当增加细节。_【答案】One possible version: Nowadays TV shows are popular in China and have attracted many peopleSome teenagers even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnightSome people think these shows provide young people more chances to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young peopleAs for me, I prefer to the latter opinionIt should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants, but that doesnt mean attending the shows is a good way to become successful for young peopleThe following reasons can support my viewFirstly, some young people hunt after fame at whatever costSecondly, TV shows can subvert the youngsters valuesThey think attending the shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard workFinally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalanceIn a word, entering for TV shows is not a good way for young people to make a successI suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend shows【山东省冠县一中2012届高三下学期第三次模拟】请根据下列表格的内容提示， 写一篇题为SAVE EARTH, SAVE US的公益广告解说词。污染的原因人类的生产和生活活动（请自行列举）污染类型1空气污染 2. 噪音污染 3.水污染造成后果1.物种减少 2.人类健康受损 3 .环境恶化建议措施(请自己列出若干条)注意：1. 词数：150左右； 2内容要涵盖上面所列的几条。【答案】书面表达:SAVE EARTH, SAVE USWith the development of modern society, pollution caused by human activities is becoming a more and more serious problem.Smoke from factories and gases from vehicles are the main reasons for air pollution. Rivers are polluted when people throw waste into them, or when factories pour waste water into them. Modern lifestyle and modern ways of production also cause noise pollution. As a result, many species are dying out. More and more people are suffering from health problems.Enough attention should be paid to this problem and measures should be taken. Firstly, we should make laws to prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers and sending smoke into the air without being dealt with. Secondly, we should raise peoples awareness of the serious problem and call on more people to protect the environment. Only by working together can we help the environment!【山东省莱芜市第一中学2012届高三4月自主检测】2012年春季，我国一些省区特别是西南地区遭遇历史罕见的特大旱灾，给人民群众带来很大影响，为此共青团号召同学们每人捐献一瓶饮用水。请根据下列提示写一篇120-150词的倡议书。简单介绍旱灾情况号召同学每人捐献一瓶饮用水（或捐献相当于一瓶水价值的一元钱）帮助灾区群众度过难关参考词汇：共青团the communist youth league【答案】Qne possible versionHello,everyone， This spring some parts of our country, especially the southwestern part, were struck by severe drought, which greatly inconvenienced peoples life and work. For most of us, a drink of water is just a matter of turning on a tap. But for those in drought-stricken southwestern China, water cant be taken for granted. Its present shortage is a matter of life and death to them.So the Communist youth League is calling on us students to do something for those in need . We are supposed to donate one bottle of water or one yuan to help them. Even though the help we offer is little, it will help those who are suffering to live through the disaster Be united, and we can do a lot more . Thank you for your help【山东省莱州一中2012届高三下学期第五次质量检测】写作（满分30分）例如你叫朱文，你的美国笔友Rick欲了解中国学生“学雷锋小组（Learn-from-Lei Feng Group）是怎么回事儿。请按下列要点用英语写一封120150词的电子邮件。（1）简要介绍雷锋其人。（2）中学生学雷锋小组的情况：人数不等，自主结合，志愿做好事。（3）你对此类活动的看法。 【答案】One possible version:Dear Rick，Im glad you are interested in our Learn-from-Lei Feng Groups. First of all，you might need to know who Lei Feng is. Born in Wangcheng，Hunan，Lei Feng lived a short life of only 22 years.As a soldier in the Peoples Liberation Army，he worked hard and was aways ready to help others. He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a national hero and moral model for every citizen.There are lots of Learn-from-Lei Feng Groups in Chinas middle shools，all of which are formed voluntarily and are usually small in size：in threes or fours or more. The groups carry out various activities such as cleaning up streets or parks，helping out in homes for the elderly，and so on.I believe such activities are of great value in educating the people and building a harmonious so-ciety.YoursZhu Wen【山东省聊城一中2012届高三3月模拟考试】3月1日下午（星期四），一个美国中学生代表团到校访问，师生一行十几人参观了学校，之后在你们班举行了一个小型座谈会，历时约一小时。事后，英语老师要求就当天的活动写一篇120150词的英语日记。座谈会主要内容：相互介绍；中方学生代表谈传统节日文化；美方学生代表谈兴趣爱好；自由交流。注意：1.可适当增加细节，使文章内容连贯，语言流畅。2.日记格式已给出，不计入总词数。Thursday March 1 , 2012 Fine【答案】A Possible VersionThis afternoon an American high school delegation，consisting of 10 students and 5 teachers came to visit our school. Our headmaster showed them around some parts of the school，such as the libary，the lab and the gym.Fortunately ,our class was chosen to have an informal discussion with the visitorswhich was a good opportunity for us to practice our EnglishEveryone at present was active to introduce themselves one by one. Our monitor，Zhanghua，made a brief introduction of the Chinese traditional festivals, especially the Chinese Spring FestivalSoon after that Tom, an American student，who was a great fan of Yaoming and Jeremy Shu-How Lin，said something about NBA and some other hobbiesThen we talked about some other topics that we were concerned withAlmost an hour had passed before we realized itIts really amazing to talk with the American teachers and students in English，which helps【山东省青岛二中2012届高三下学期期中考试】假如你叫李华,是一位高中生。最近，中学生英语报就“中学生对考试的态度”进行讨论。作为中学生，你肯定经历过多次考试。请你：1）简要概述中学生中普遍存在的对考试失利的两种态度： 消极态度：当考试失利时 积极态度：当考试不尽如人意时2）结合自身实际，说明你的观点。要求：词数：120-150。 【答案】略。【山东省实验中学2012届高三第四次诊断考试】写作（满分30分）假设你是李华，下学期要去美国寄宿制高中Lakeside High School做交换生（exchange student）。你收到了该校联系人（liaison）的电子邮件，请根据其内容回一封邮件。注意做出选择时要说明理由。Dear Li Hua Im Tom Smith， the school liaison of the Exchange Student Program. We are very pleased that you are to join us next semester. In fact， we have several other Chinese exchange students in our school. They are doing fine， but do have problems from time to time. Right now we are about to arrange your accommodation， and would like to know whether you want to live in the dormitory with a roommate on the campus， or prefer to choose a host family near the school. Besides， could you let us know how you will get along with your roommate or host family？What if you had a problem?Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely Tom注意：1.字数：120-150；2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【答案】.写作评分标准评分原则本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分时应注意的主要内容：内容要点、上下文的流畅与连贯性以及词汇和语法结构应用的数量和准确性。词数少于120，从总分中减去2分。如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。异色笔、铅笔答题的，一律判0分。2.内容要点感谢来信 第一个问题做出选择后要说明理由。第二个问题回答两问，内容要较为充实。3.各档次的给分范围和要求第一档：（2530分）很好地完成了试题规定的任务。对题中所提供的信息进行了恰当的描述，清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证。来源:学#科#网语法结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第二档：（1924分）较好地完成了试题规定的任务。对题中所提供的信息进行了描述，表达了自己的观点并进行了论证。应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第三档：（1318分） 基本完成了试题规定的任务。能描述题目中的信息，表达了自己的观点并尝试进行论证。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。第四档：（712分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。能涉及到题目所提供的信息，体现了对问题的看法及其原因。语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 第五档：（16分）未完成试题规定的任务 很少涉及题目中所提供的信息，个人观点表达不清，而且没有阐述原因。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 0分信息未能传达给读者。未能传达给读者任务信息：内容太少，无法评判；所写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法辨认。【山东省潍坊市重点中学2012届高三2月月考】假设你是李华，你的朋友Jack来信询问你对高校自主招生考试面试环节的看法。请你根据下面的提示，从正反两个角度写一封回信谈谈你的观点。1、面试可以全面综合地评价一个学生；鼓励学生发展个性和特长；社会需要一种更加开放和有效的录取方式。2、面试带有主观性、片面性，可能不公正；并非所有学生都擅长在面试中展示自己；不可能在3-5分钟内评价一个人。注意：1.开头已为你写好，不计人总词数。 2.词数：120-150左右。3.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：comprehensive综合的 subjective主观的one-sided片面的 enroll students 招生Dear Jack,You want to know my opinion on Yours , Li Hua 【答案】One possible version:Dear Jack, You want to know my opinion on whether it is reasonable for the universities to enroll students through interviews. Id like to share my ideas with you.As we all know, every coin has two sides. On one hand, I think, interviews can evaluate a student in a more thorough and comprehensive way. In addition , it can encourage students to develop their own interests and personalities. Whats more, with the development of society, a more o