《书面表达专题讲座》PPT课件.ppt

书面表达专题 一 常见语法错误分析 1 句子缺谓语 1 Thebuildinglikeamatchbox 2 Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom 1 Aworkerofthefarmleadustothefield 2 AllthestudentslikebooksthatwaswrittenbyLuXun 2 主谓不一致 尤其是单数第三人称作主语时 谓语的单复数形式出现错误 3 时态错误 4 词性混用 1 Whenhecameback hefoundthathiswifehasgonetobed 2 Whatareyoudoingthistimeyesterday 1 SheenjoysstudyEnglish 2 Ifanyoneagainsttheplan pleaseletmeknow 5 介词误用 6 冠词误用 1 Inmysurprise hehasgotthefirstprize 2 Hecameheretoattendthemeetingbyanewcar 3 Don treadunderthesun 1 WeelectedLiHuathemonitoroftheClassFive 2 Onceuponatime therewasanone eyedlion 3 Thehistoryisactuallyaveryinterestingsubject 7 名词的数混淆 8 动词用法错误 1 ItisraretoseesuchaniceweatherinBeijing 2 Thereisalwaystrafficjam 1 Whereareyoucomefrom 2 WhenIarrivedHongKong mymotherwastherewaitingforme 3 Hedidn tnoticetheteachertocomeintotheclassroom 4 Theaccidentwashappenedin1999 9 习惯用法错误 1 Theactorinthismovieisverybeautiful 2 IandMyparentswereworkinginthefieldsatthattime 3 Thereasonisbecausehedoesnotknowwhattodonext 二 怎样运用复杂结构 1 改变时态 Thebellisringingnow 一般 2 改变语态 Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff 一般 Theregoesthebell 高级 Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff 高级 3 使用不定式 4 使用过去分词 Heissokindthathecanhelpme 一般 Heissokindastohelpme 高级 Shewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher 一般 Followedbymanystudents she 高级 Onceitisseen itcanneverbeforgotten 一般 Onceseen itcan 高级 5 使用v ing形式 Whenhearrivespleasegivemeane mail 一般 Iftheweatherpermits I llcometomorrow 一般 Onhisarriving arrival pleasegive 高级 Weatherpermitting I llcometomorrow 高级 NowZhangZhuangprimarySchoolhasthreeteachers Theyteach48pupils 一般 NowZhangZhuangPrimaryScholhasthreeteachers teaching48pupils 高级 Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidn tturnup 一般 Ihappenedtohavemethim 一般 6 使用名词性从句 Thefactthathedidn tturnupdisappointedeverybody 高级 IthappenedthatIhadmethim 高级 Tohissurprise thelittlegirlknowssomanythings 一般 Whatsurprisedhimisthatthegirl 高级 7 使用状语从句 Iwon tbelievewhathesays 一般 Ifyoucomebackbeforesixo clock youcangoout 一般 Themealwasverynice Weallenjoyeditverymuch 一般 Nomatterwhathesays Iwon tbelieve 高级 Youcangooutonconditionthatyoucomebackbefore 高级 Themealwassonicethatweall 高级 8 使用定语从句 Thegirlisspokenhighlyof Hercompositionwaswellwritten 一般 Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenwasspokenhighlyof 高级 IstudiedChinese maths English physics chemistryandcomputeratschool 一般 ThesubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese maths English 高级 9 使用虚拟语气 Theshipdidn tsinkwithallonboardbecausethereweretheeffortsofthecaptain 一般 Iwasn tinvitedtotheparty soIdidn tattendit 一般 IfIhadbeeninvitedtotheparty Iwouldhaveattendedit 高级 Butfortheeffortsofthecaptain theshipwouldhavesunkwithallonboard 高级 10 使用强调句 倒装句 感叹句 Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920 一般 Itwasnotuntil1920thatregularradio 高级 WeakasIam I llmaketheeffort 高级 ThoughI mweak Iwillmaketheeffort 一般 Howgladweweretoseethecropsand 高级 Weweregladtoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingverywell 一般 11 使用并列句 Ifyougothroughthegate you llfindtheentrancetoBearCountry 一般 Gothroughthegate andyou llfind 高级 Igotuplatethismorning otherwiseIcouldhavecaughttheearlybus 高级 Igotuplatethismorning Ididn tcatchtheearlybus 一般 Themorehespoke themoreexcitedhefelt 高级 Whenhespoke hefeltmoreandmoreexcited 一般 三 学会使用恰当的关联词 1 表示平行 对等或选择关系 and both and aswellas togetherwith neither nor also notonly butalso either or aswell 2 表示转折关系 but yet however nevertheless 然而 inspiteof although otherwise while afterall 3 表示对比关系 4 表示因果关系 onthecontrary insteadof ononehand ontheotherhand justlike unlike inthesameway atthesametime so for therefore asaresult of because owingto dueto thanksto onaccount 理由 of 5 表示时间 顺序关系 6 表示递进 强调关系 shortlyafterwards first second then next finally foronething foranother intheend eventually 最后 终于 besides furthermore 此外 what smore inaddition moreover 而且 worsestill tomakemattersworse indeed certainly surely aboveall 7 表示解释 说明关系 8 表示结论 namely 也就是 actually suchas forexample forinstance thatistosay inotherwords andsoon totellyouthetruth accordingtothis inshort inbrief inaword ingeneral asyouknow asfarasIknow onthewhole inconclusion atlast finally a Gotoseethedoctoratonce b Yourcoldmaygetworse 2 a Alicewasthefirsttocompleteherpaper b Alicemadequiteafewmistakesinherpaper Gotoseethedoctoratonce oryourcoldmaygetworse Alicewasthefirsttocompleteherpaper butshemadequiteafewmistakesinit Help 3 a Wewereabouttostartofflastnight b Thephoneinthelivingroombegantoring Wewereabouttostartofflastnightwhenthephoneinthelivingroombegantoring 4 a Unfortunately John scarbrokedownonthewayhome b Johnhadtostopacarforalift 5 a Hehasmadegreatprogressinhisstudies b Alltheteacherspraisehim Unfortunately John scarbrokedownonthewayhome sohehadtostopacarforalift Hehasmadesuchgreatprogressinhisstudiesthatalltheteacherspraisehim Help 6 a Somepeoplewastefood b Otherpeoplehaven tenoughfood Somepeoplewastefood whileothershaven tenoughfood 7 a It stoolatetogotothecinemanow b Ihaveanimportantmeetingtoattendafterlunch It stoolatetogothecinemanow Besides Ihaveanimportantmeetingtoattendafterlunch 范文阅读 阅读下面范文 选自1994年英语高考全国卷 MayIhaveyourattention please Ihaveanannouncementtomake TheStudentUnionisgoingtoholdapartyonSaturdayevening August15 towelcomeourfriendsfromtheUnitedStates ThepartywillbeheldintheroofgardenoftheMainBuilding Itwillbeginat7 30pm Therewillbemusic dancing singing gamesandexchangeofgifts Willeverybodypleasebringalongasmallgiftforthispurpose Remembertowrapitup signyournameandwriteafewwordsofgoodwishes Don tforget 7 30 Saturdayevening roofgarden MainBuilding There ssuretobealotoffun Everybodyiswelcome Back 创新演练 2 根据下列内容 模仿范文 写一则书面通知 词数为80 100 1 事宜 关于计算机的用途以及如何利用Internet网络进行学习的讲座2 讲座人 北京大学计算机系王书涵教授3 时间 12月22日 星期六 下午2 004 地点 图书楼204室5 参加对象 电脑爱好者6 要求 参加者准备一些自己在学习过程中遇到的问题7 组织者 校学生会 Thelectureisabouttheuseofcomputer ThelectureisabouthowtolearnthroughtheInternet ThelecturerisProfessorWangShuhan fromtheComputerDepartmentofZhejiangUniversity Thelecturebeginsat2 00pm Saturday onthetwenty secondofDecember ThelecturewillbeheldinRoom204oftheLibraryBuilding Anycomputer loveriswelcome PleasepreparesomequestionsinlearningthroughtheInternet 连句成文 Tohelpstudentslearnmoreaboutcomputers wehavei