山东省胶州市高考英语二轮复习 写作赏析精编（2）.doc

山东省胶州市2016高考英语（二轮）写作赏析精编（2）书面表达训练最近，你校参加了某英文报纸正在开展的题为“中学生课堂注意力”的专栏讨论，并请你代表学校给该英文报纸投稿。下面的表格为你校的调查结果（表中数据为学生人数百分比）。请你根据所提供的信息做简要说明，并根据提示给出改善的建议。(字数140).中学生课堂注意力集中情况及注意力不能集中的原因： 改善注意力的建议： 能够集中注意力40不能够集中注意力60课堂干扰30睡眠不足与疲劳70教室通风、明亮课堂积极参与课堂活动课间适量活动或适当休息_【参考范文】our school has made a survey about how long middle school students can fix their attention in class during each period. the result shows that only 40% of the students can draw their attention to the class, while the rest of them can not concentrate on the lesson. 30% of the students think the problem is caused by all kinds of noises in the classroom; the other part of students consider the lack of sleep and tiredness as the major causes.therefore, we advise that the classroom be bright and the air inside stay fresh. as for students, they should try their best to be active in class in order not to be disturbed by others. during the breaks, they can take some exercises or have a little rest in the classroom.书面表达训练假定你是李华， 暑假你参加了英国游学活动，住在房东tricia家中， 回国后给房东写一封信表示感谢， 要点如下：1、安全抵家2、回顾英国游学体会3、感谢房东的帮助4、附寄两张合影5、表达愿望注意：1、词数100左右。 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3、结束语已为你写好。dear tricia, looking forward to your reply. yours lihua【参考范文】dear tricia, ive come back home safely . looking back to my stay in britain, i felt so happy and satisfied. the beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot . i also benefited a lot from learning together with local stduents. more importantly , your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of british culturedn adapt to the life there . so im so grateful to you . by the way , attached to the letter are two photos taken with you , which i believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together. you are expected to come to china soon. looking forward to your reply. yours li hua2016书面表达训练假定你是高一1班学生李华，在新的学校学习已一个月有余，请根据下列提示，用英语给你的朋友jane写封电子邮件，谈一谈你的高中生活。1. 介绍你的学校和班级2. 你的作息时间3. 你的同学4. 你最喜欢的老师（请将你最喜欢的老师化名为ms. wang）注意：100词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；开头已给出，不计入总词数。dear jane,ive been at senior high school for more than a month. im writing down my thoughts about my new school life._ yours li hua 【参考范文】dear jane,ive been at senior high school for more than a month. im writing down my thoughts about my new school life.my new school is a well-known school with a long history. there are 50 classes, more than 300 teachers and over 3,500 students in my school. the classrooms are amazing. every room has a computer with a special screen, almost as big as a cinema screen. and there are sixty students in my class, who are all hard-working. im getting on very well with my classmates. my favorite teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called ms. wang, whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers. she has many ways to make her classes lively and interesting. i dont think i will be bored in her class.we usually get up at 5:30 and our class starts at 7:45. i always take part in colorful after-class activities and we go to bed at ten.i am looking forward to hearing from you soon. yours li hua【广东省深圳高级中学】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）假设你参加了你校组织的中学生社会实践活动，请你根据以下信息，以“井冈山之旅”(a tour to the jinggang mountian) 为题，叙述其活动情况。【写作内容】时间： 5月1日5日交通工具：火车活动内容：（1）参观“希望小学”(the hope primary school), 了解学生的学习条件；（2）与村民同吃住，了解生活状况；（3）参加田间劳动，体验农民生活。感受：（1）农民的生活条件改善了；（2）因为政府免学费，众多好心人资助，没有失学学生。【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】2016书面表达训练假设你是银川希望中学学生李华，得知2015年香港大学要在大陆进行自主招生的消息后，有意向香港大学申请，参加自主招生考试。请用英语写一封自荐信，主要包括：1. 个人信息2. 性格、爱好与特长3. 学习情况注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 信的开头已为你写好 (不计入总词数)；3. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4. 参考词汇：自主招生 independent recruitment dear sir，my name is li hua, from hope high school in yinchuan. yours, sincerely， li hua【参考范文】dear editor,im writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether or not it is good for families to own cars.with the improvement of peoples living conditions, more and more families have their own cars. some of us think its good to own a car, as a car provides convenient, fast and comfortable transport. also, the increase in the number of car owners shows that people are becoming richer, and that the country is becoming stronger. thirdly, the fact that people buy cars makes other industries develop faster.however, some other students have a different opinion. they think that cars give off waste gas and make the air polluted. they also said that too many cars would cause traffic jams, lead to more accidents and endanger peoples lives. finally, they said that parking is another big problem.in short, people should think twice before buying a car.yours zhao kai【广东省深圳高级中学】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文i have a friend monty roberts who owns a horse ranch (牧马场) in san ysidro. when he was a senior, he was asked to write a paper about what he wanted to be and do when he grew up.the next day he handed it in to the teacher. but when the teacher returned it, he found on the front was a large red f. the boy with the dream asked, “why did i receive an f?”the best part of the story is that two summers ago that same schoolteacher brought 30 kids to camp out on his ranch for a week. when the teacher was leaving, he said, “look, monty. i can tell you this now. when i was your teacher, i was something of a dream stealer. during those years i stole a lot of kids dreams. fortunately you had enough belief not to give up yours.”【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括monty roberts的成长故事。2. 以约120个词谈谈你对信念的看法，内容包括：（1） 坚守信念对一个人成长的重要性；（2） 举例去论证“坚守信念能改变人的命运：（3） 你的感想。【写作要求】1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.