高考英语一轮复习 写作技法点拨系列8 揣摩内涵, 从容掌控图画作文课件 外研版.ppt

写作技法点拨系列八 揣摩内涵 从容掌控图画作文 核心点拨 常用句型1 用于描述图画或引入话题的句式 1 asisdescribedinthepicture 2 fromthepicturewecanseethat 3 thepurposeofthepictureisto 4 thepictureindicates conveysthemeaning 2 用于记叙事件经过或分析现象 1 atfirst then fiveminuteslater finally intheend atlast 2 some some others 3 was weredoing whensuddenlysb sth did 3 发表议论或总结 1 ifsuchmeasureswerenottaken theproblemof wouldhavebeenmoreserious 如果没有采取这样的措施 的问题会更加严重 2 unlessthereisacommonrealizationof itisverylikelythat 除非达成共识 否则 将会 3 wecanconcludefromthispicturethat 由这幅图画我们可以推断出 4 ashasbeenstatedabove wemustattachmoreimportanceto 如上所述 我们必须更加重视 典题示例 2016 北京高考 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华 你班同学参加了学校的 地球日 系列活动 请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序 以 actionsforagreenerearth 为题 给校刊 英语角 写一篇英文稿件 介绍活动的全过程 审题谋篇 词句构建 1 词汇 callup comeupwith share with 2 句式 学校里到处贴满了海报 要求我们加入 地球日 活动 一般表达 ourschoolputupposterseverywhereandaskedustojoinintheactionsforagreenerearth 高级表达 aroundourschool tojoinintheactionsforagreenerearth 用被动语态代替主动语态 动词 ing形式作状语 posterswereputup callinguponus 我们班想出了利用废弃材料的主意 一般表达 ourclassthoughtoftheideatouseusedmaterials 高级表达 ourclass theideato usedmaterials 用高级词汇代替thinkof use cameupwith make betteruseof 我们做得很出色 所以被邀请和学校的其他学生交流观点和经验 一般表达 wedidverywell sowewereinvitedtochangeourideasandexperienceswithallthestudentsofourschool 高级表达 wedid wewereinvitedtoshareourideasandexperienceswithallthestudentsofourschool 用结果状语从句 sowellthat 连句成篇 actionsforagreenerearthaweekbeforeearthday posterswereputuparoundourschool callinguponustojoinintheactionsforagreenerearth ourclasscameupwiththeideatomakebetteruseofusedmaterials webroughtworn outclothes piecesofcardboardandemptyplasticbottlestoourclassroom andturnedthoseintodolls handbags tissueboxesandsmallvases thatweekend wewenttoanearbyneighborhoodandgavethemawaytothepeoplethere allwereveryhappywiththose unexpectedgifts especiallylittlekidsandelderlypeople wedidsowellthatwewereinvitedtoshareourideasandexperienceswithallthestudentsofourschool weareveryproudofourselvesandbelievewecandomoreforabetterworld 即时应用 这幅漫画展现了城市停车难的状况 请根据你对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文 你的短文应包含以下内容 1 简要描述漫画内容 2 谈谈你的感想 3 如何改善停车难的状况 novacancy 注意 1 可根据下面文章开头所给提示 做必要的发挥想象 2 词数100个左右 开头已经写好 不计入总词数 withthedevelopmentofeconomy moreandmorefamilieshavetheirowncars whichmakesitdifficultforpeopletoparktheircarsinpublicplaces 参考范文 withthedevelopmentofeconomy moreandmorefamilieshavetheirowncars whichmakesitdifficultforpeopletoparktheircarsinpublicplaces ascanbeseenfromthecartoon adriverbecomesannoyedwhenseeingthenoticesaying novacancy thereisnodoubtthatit sveryconvenientforpeopletogotoworkortaketheirchildrentoschoolbycar despitetheadvantagescarshave carparkingproblemsarebecomingincreasinglyfamiliartothe generalpublic iholdtheopinionthatthesevereshortageofparkinglotsisinfluencingthelivingenvironmentofthosewholiveincities tosolvecarparkingproblems variousmeasuresshouldbetakenbythegovernment inmyview it shightimethatmoreparkinglotsshouldbeconstructedtoreducetheproblem