山西省大同市高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选编（4）.doc

山西大同市2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】选编（4）【高考英语模拟试题】写作（满分30分）michael是一名美国中学生，在学校里选修汉语。他利用暑假到中国进修，希望进一步了解中国文化。有一天，他看到下面有关成语的漫画，不大明白其中的意思。请你用英语把漫画所表达的故事和寓意写成一篇短文，向他解释。注意：1、词数：801202、参考词汇：撞上bump into;锄头 hoe 【参考范文】写作（满分30分）one possible version:once upon a time there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields every day.one day, while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a bumping sound. he saw a rabbit lying by the trunk. he picked it up and found that it was a fat rabbit. he thought to himself,since it is so easy to get a rabbit like that, why should i work so hard all daylong?! he threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreaming for more rabbits to come. when he finally realized his foolishness and returned to his fields, he found that all his crops were dead. the story tells us that we should not wait for unexpected gains by trusting chance and luck. or, we should not hope to get rewards without hard work.一、评分原则1本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3词数少于120和多于150的，从总分中减去2分。4评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点观点正确，态度积极向上，文体不限。三、各档次的给分范围和要求第一档：（2125分）很好地完成了试题规定的任务。对题中所提供的信息进行了恰当的描述，清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证。语法结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第二档：（1620分）较好地完成了试题规定的任务。对题中所提供的信息进行了描述，表达了自己的观点并进行了论证。应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第三档：（1115分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。能描述题目中的信息，表达了自己的观点并尝试进行论证。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。第四档；（610分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。能涉及到题目所提供的信息，体现了对问题的看法及其原因。语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第五档：（15分）未完成试题规定的任务很少涉及题目中所提供的信息，个人观点表达不清，而且没有阐述原因。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。0分信息未能传达给读者。未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；所写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法辨认。【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（2）】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 以下是一场关于学生十八岁成人礼报道的主要内容。【写作内容】 请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯。时间2013年5月4日，五四青年节活动地点与参加人员你校体育馆，高三全体学生倡议的责任与要求对自己负责：已长大，不是小孩；对家庭负责：感恩父母，因为他们艰辛地把我们抚养大；对社会负责：身为社会一份子。意义让学生懂得成人后承担的责任更重；在做决定的时候要考虑周全成人礼growing-up ceremony; 五四青年节chinese youth day【写作要求】1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作(one possible version)on chinese youth day, may 4th, 2013, a growing-up ceremony was held in our school gym to help us recognize our duty for ourselves, our families and the society. taking part in the ceremony, we senior three students realize that we are grown-ups rather than children. therefore, it is important to show our appreciation for our parents who have gone through hardships to bring us up. furthermore, as a member of society, we must fulfill our duty to our country. in a word, as adults, we have more responsibilities on our shoulders and should take more into consideration when making decisions. 【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（2）】读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。these are the two simple words, if and what. these two words can be used in many sentences and questions by them, selves, but if you put them together, it forms a serious question, what if.? this question will bring you back to a certain time in your life when you made a choice. you may not be happy with that choice today and often think about why you did it, but you made the decision because it was the best choice at that specific moment m your life. now, years later, you start to think about that specific choice you made. you mentally struggle with yourself and consider if you could choose again, what would you do? would it be totally different? i truly believe if you want something very much, you can do it and achieve it, because where there is a will, there is-a way. you can correct the mistakes of your decisions for the past, go out and find happiness in the right decisions for your future. it is never too late to do anything in life.【写作内容】1以约30词概括上文的主要内容。2以约120个词就“人生努力永不晚”谈一谈你的看法，内容包括：(1)你对人生努力的理解；(2)举一个“大器晚成”的例子；(3)你对实例的评价或看法。【写作要求】1在作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。_【参考范文】读写任务 (one possible version)this passage mainly tells us it is never too late to achieve our dreams so long as we have the determination, even though some wrong decisions may have been made before. as for me, i believe in the old saying “nothing is impossible”. no matter how many difficulties we might go through, we can overcome them if we dont give up. harland sanders, who quitted school and worked on a farm at 14, became a cook and dishwasher later. he didnt achieve anything until he retired and used his small retirement check to start a new business at the age of 65. now harlands business, kentucky fried chicken, has expanded to all over the world. that m