高中英语 5年高考3年模拟 专题22 书面表达（浙江专版）.doc

2013届英语科5年高考3年模拟浙江专版专题22 书面表达【备考策略】一、高考英语作文完美行文四步骤step1：确定文章框架，包括：时态、语态、格式、展开方式、开头结尾等。step2：确定内容要点，包括：主要人物、时间地点、重要细节、合理发挥等。step3：正式开始写作，整理思路成篇，行文连贯。step4：检查全文，主要检查语法以及粗心犯下的错误。二、高考英语文章主体段落三法一、举实例思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！inordertoattractmorecustomers,advertisershaveadoptedeverypossiblestimulativefactorinmakingads,suchassound,light,colours,cartoonfilmsandhumanperformance.forinstance,toadvertiseacertainfood,advertiserswillaskanactororactresstositatatableanddevourtheseeminglydeliciousfoodwhiletheyfiindhimorher.更多句型：totakeasanexample,oneexampleis,anotherexampleis,forexample二、做比较方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（throughcomparison）和不同点（throughcontrast）。下面是一些短语：相似的比较：incomparison,likewise,similarly,inthesamemanner相反的比较：ontheotherhand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,incontrast,onthecontrary,comparedwith,三、换言之没话说了,可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字iloveyou!iamenthusiasticaboutyou.thatistosay,iloveyou.iamwildaboutyou.inotherwords,ihavefalleninlovewithyou.或者上面我们举过的例子：icannotbearit.可以用短语表达：icannotputupwithit.因此可以这样说：icannotbearit.thatistosay,icannotputupwithitoriamfedupwithit.更多短语：inmoredifficultlanguage,insimplerwords,putitmoresimply1开头万能公式一：名人名言有人问了，我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？，很好办：编！原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？经典句型：aproberbsays,youareonlyyoungonce.（适用于已记住的名言）itgoeswithoutsayingthatwecannotbeyoungforever.（适用于自编名言）更多经典句型：aseveryoneknows,noonecandenythat2开头万能公式二：数字统计原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：accordingtoarecentsurvey,about78.9ofthecollegestudentswantedtofurthertheirstudyaftertheirgraduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：honesty根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78都是假的。travelbybike根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。youth根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70都是在休闲娱乐。fivedayworkweekbetterthansixdaywork?根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98的人同意每周五天工作日。更多句型：arecentstatisticsshowsthat高考英语作文结尾万能公式1结尾万能公式一：如此结论说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个总而言之之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：obviously（此为过渡短语）,wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers.如果读者很难显而见之，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！更多过渡短语：tosumup,inconclusion,inbrief,onaccountofthis,thus更多句型：thus,itcanbeconcludedthat,therefore,wecanfindthat2结尾万能公式二：如此建议如果说如此结论是结尾最没用的废话，那么如此建议应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！obviously,itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestosolvetheproblem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？更多句型：accordingly,irecommendthatsomemeasuresbetaken.consequently,tosolvetheproblem,somemeasuresshouldbetaken. 考点解析考点一 图表式题型步骤：1.说明图表 2. 引起变化的原因 3. 前景预测 according to the graph presented, it can be observed that there have been great changes in _.there are many reasons explaining the situation. as for me, i consider the followings the important ones. first, _. second, _.besides, _.however, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. i believe _.model 1:changes in chinese professions the year agriculture manufacturing service industry 1980 68% 27% 5% 1990 38% 40% 22% according to the graph presented, it can be observed that there have been great changes in chinese professions. in 1980, more than half of the chinese were engaged in agriculture, about 27% were employed in manufacturing, while only 5% of the people were working in service industry. however, ten years later, in 1990, there was a 38% decrease in the number of people engaged in agriculture and an even bigger increase of 40% and 22% in the number of people involved in manufacturing and service.there are many reasons explaining this situation. as for me, i consider the followings the important ones. first, with the development of economy, a great number of farmers are now working in various small businesses without leaving their homes. second, the economic policies result in a great improvement in the chinese peoples living standard, which creates a huge demand for service and thus enables the service industries to flourish and absorbs more and more people into these fields. however, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. i believe, as a result of chinas open-door and economic reform policies, a bright tomorrow for all people will be achieved through efforts of every person.practice1write an english composition in about 120 words, according to the situation given:food 1979 1984 1989 1994 1999 grain 90% 85% 75% 60% 60% fruit, vegetable 5% 7% 10% 15% 20% milk, meat 5% 8% 15% 25% 20% total 100% 100% 100% 100% 100% according to the graph presented, it can be observed that there have been great changers in peoples diet over the period from 1986 to 1990. the consumption of grain is decreasing year by year, while that of some high-energy good, such as mild and meant, is increasing steadily.there are many reasons explaining this situation. as for me, i consider the followings the important ones. first, nowadays people can afford to buy much more expensive food with better nutrition. second, people now pay more attention to the quality of it, because they know it is of great benefit to their health to diet in a scientific way. therefore they try their best to improve the structure of their food.model 2car accidents declining in walton according to the graph presented, we can observe the changing rate of car accidents in walton city in 1990. we can see an increasing trend in the first two months. then at the beginning of march the rate came to a peak point of 32. but in june, it fell to 26. in the next two months, it was rising again and in august, reached 39. from august it declined, and continually dropped to the lowest point of 16 at the end of the year.there are many reasons explaining this situation. as for me, i consider the followings the important ones. first, that the rate of car accidents reached the highest point in august is due to weather conditions. we all know that hot weather sometimes makes us lose patience, so drivers want to finish their job earlier by driving fast, which easily leads too more accidents. in winter, the snow, which makes drivers more careful in their driving, and the decreasing number of cars, resulting form a fewer number of people taking cars. both of these accordingly made the rate of cart accidents droop. as in spring, slippery roads attritutable to(归根于) the rain again leads to more car accidents.however, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. i believe, this trend will be changed this year. once the driving conditions are improved, the rate of car accidents will be reduced.model 3film is giving way to tvaccording to the graph presented , it can be observed that there were great changes of the number of film-goers and tv-watchers .the number of people going to cinema decreased sharply, while , the number of television viewers increased almost twenty times. obviously, film is giving way to tv, but why?there are many reasons explaining this situation. as for me, i consider the followings the important ones. first, people are becoming richer and richer, tv sets can be afforded in almost every household. besides, people can watch tv at home quite comfortable, while such comfort can not enjoyed if they go to the cinema. whats more, people dont need to pay anything for watching tv, while they have to buy tickets if they prefer the cinema.however the graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. i believe there are, and will always be, a number of film fans who prefer to visit cinemas. it is quite clear that no matter how good tv programs might be, people could not get so much pleasure as they sit in cinemas enjoying films on wide screens.较点二说明利弊题型步骤：1. 说明事物现状 2事物本身的优缺点 3你对现状或前景的看法格式1： nowadays, it is common to see _. many people like _because _. besides, _.however, aaa, just like anything else, has its negative side as well. it has also given rise to a series of problems. for example. _. the worst of all, _for the reason that_.through above analysis, we can see that the positive aspects outweigh the negative ones. therefore, i am in favor of _. aaa 的现状 人们对待aaa的态度 aaa 的优点之一 优点之二 aaa 的缺点 进一步指出aaa 的缺点 原因 aaa格式2：today, _play(s) a very important part of our life.just as people often say that everything has both is good and bad aspects, its good sides are as follows:for one thing, _.for another, _.however, every coin has two sides. there are also some unfavorable aspects. first, _. second, _.but for me, i think what is more important is its positive side. because _. 事物现状 理由一 理由二 可能有的危害之一 危害之二 作者认为利大于弊的理由model 1advantages and disadvantages of access to the internettoday, the internet play(s) a very important part of our life.just as people often say that everything has both is good and bad aspects, its good sides are as follows:for one thing, it greatly improves the efficiency of scientific research, allows scientists quick access to data and research findings in their specific areas. those who have access to the internet have an advantage in business over those who dont .for another, the internet has made personal communication both more convenient and more rapid.however, every coin has two sides. there are also some unfavorable aspects,.first, some people like to chat with others through the internet, which will cost them a lot of money. second, not all information on the internet is useful. some of it will do harm to young people.but for me, i think what is more important is its positive side. because it holds the key to success in the 21st century if properly used.model 2advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad nowadays, it is common to see more and more young people are going to study abroad. many people like to study abroad because they think by attending a college in a foreign country they can learn not lonely useful knowledge of science but also the culture and customs of other nations. besides, they can take advantage of this opportunity to gain a good command of language very quickly. moreover they can meet different people and enjoy different culture, which may help to broaden their views.however, studying abroad, just like anything else, has its negative side as well. it has also given rise to a series of problems. for example, the costs are much higher than those in their native country. most overseas students have to work for a living, which cant allow them to pay all their attention to study. the worst of all, they may feel very lonely for the reason that their relatives and friends are not with them. through above analysis, we can see that the positive aspects outweigh the negative ones. therefore, i am in favor of going abroad to study.model 3advantages and disadvantages of the development of science and technologytoday, science and technology plays a very important part of our life.just as people often say that everything has both is good and bad aspects, its good sides are as follows:for one thing, with the development of science and technology, we can make computers do many things, so our life will be made easier.for another, better medicine will be invented and people can live a longer life. hundreds of people will live in homes that will seem like palace to their parents and grandparents.besides, brought together by telecommunications, people around the world will work together more efficiently than ever before.however, every coin has two sides. there are also some unfavorable aspects. first, if man-made intelligent robots were put into use, what would these clever “people” do to their producers? second, the automation would result in growing jobless population.but for me, i think what is more important is its positive side. so i believe we all have a bright future.考点三解决方法题型步骤：1.问题现状 2怎样解决（解决方案的优缺点）格式 1：nowadays, we have to face a problem that _.people had figured out many ways to solve this problem. first _. though this method has its good sides like it can _, one of its bad sides it brings about is that it can _.second, _is another means. but it also has its advantages and disadvantages. on the one hand, _. on the other hand, _.all in all, the solutions may not bring the perfect result, but as long as we do it with our brains and hands, we will one day resolve the problem. 说明问题现状 解决方法一 带来的好处 带来的坏处 解决方法二 好处 坏处格式2nowadays, _which has aroused our close attention.aaa is very harmful _ . in addition _.there are ways to get rid of aaa. first ,_ second ,_ _.last but not least, _. all in all , the solutions may not bring the perfect result ,but as long as we do it with our brains and hands, we will one day resolve the problem.aaaaaa 的危害危害二第一种解决办法第二种办法第三种 mode ihow to solve housing problems in big citiesnowadays, we have to face a housing problem that its difficult for a large number of people to find a small place to live and rest.people had figured out many ways to solve this problem. first, some suggest building satellite cities in the suburbs. though this method has its good sides like it can meet peoples desire to live in the open air and enjoy the beautiful scenery in the suburbs. one of its bad sides it brings about is that it is not convenient for people to go to work in the city center.second, utilizing underground space is another means. but it also has its advantages and disadvantages. on the one hand, more space can be spared. on the other hand, people will live underground without the bright sunshine and the fresh air and the realization of this idea will cost us too much time and money which we cannot afford.all in all, the solutions may not bring the perfect result, but as long as we do it with our brains and hands, we will one day resolve the problem.model 2 nowadays cheating in exams is popular in almost every school ,which has aroused our close attention. some students cheat because they usually dont study hard enough, so they have no confidence in themselves while taking exams.aaa is very harmful. the purpose of a test is to show what a student has leaned about a subject and what he needs to spend more time studying. those who always commit cheating in exams are surely missing this point.there are many ways to get rid of the bad habit of cheating in exams. first ,school may help students realize cheating in exams is really cheating themselves .to survive and succeed in the 21-century ,we students should study hard and gain a comprehensive know knowledge .second, those who still cheat , once found , should be severely punished. all in all, the solutions may not bring the perfect result, but as long as we do it with our brains and hands. we will one day resolve the problem.model 3heavy trafficnowadays, we have to face a problem that the traffic is heavy. people have to spend more time to go to work and go back home and sometimes they might be involved in road accidents. buses are crowed especially in hot summer when bicycle riders dont enjoy their trips in the sun. they would rather squeeze into crowded busespeople had figured out many ways to solve this problem. first , lay down more one-way street , which can relieve the pressure of busy streets. second, to set up lanes specially for public transportation is another means .this can help buses run faster on the road and the passengers can spend less time in bus. third , open up more bus lines and increase the number of buses. all in all, the solutions may not bring the perfect result, but as long as we do it with our brains and hands, we will one day resolve the problem. nowadays, we have to face a problem that our environment is being destroyed. in the past century peo