山西省平遥县高考英语一轮起航短文改错（7）.doc

山西省平遥县2015高考英语短文改错（7）及参考答案1.短文改错are you looking for something interested? would you like to give a hand to other people in your spare time? then joining us and be a volunteer! we have job for people of all ages. anyone from students to old people can become ours members. you can help people in many ways. some schools need volunteers to help take the care of children. volunteers are needed in hospitals help the patients. animal lovers can help save dogs and cats without homes. there is nothing for everyone. “i often played computer games when i was freely before. now i help old people learn to use computers,” said a volunteer aged 18. unless everyone helps out a lot, well all have better and warmer world to live in.【参考答案】1.1. interesting 2. join 3. jobs 4. our 5. the去掉 6. to help 7. nothing something 8. free 9. unless if 10. have a2.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;a frenchman is once visiting london. he wished to take a walk to see a city. but he was afraid he might get being lost because he knew no words of english. so after he left his hotel, he stopped on the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street where he was staying.then he walked on.at last, he got lost.in several hours he found a policeman .the frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didnt know the name of his hotel, however he knew the name of the street. he then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook. it was read : “one-way street”. 【参考答案】2.1.is- was, 2.a-the, 3.being 去掉， 4.on - at, 5.names- name, 6.in-after, 7.explain 后加to, 8.however-yet/but, 9.that-what, 10.was去掉短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。time fly like an arrow. im already in senior grade 3 before i realized it. it will be only a little more than eight months before i graduate middle school. at the present, im busy review my lessons in order to take the college entrance examination. i hope to go to beijing university, that is one of the best university not only in china but also in the world. ill try my best to turn your dream into reality. most of my classmates are also studying very hardly to realize their dreams. i do believe everyone will be able to enter an university or college.【参考答案】6.:1.fly-flies 2.realized-realize 3.graduate后加from 4. the去掉 5.review-reviewing 6.that-which 7.university-universties 8.your-my 9. hardly-hard 10. an-a /an去掉 1.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜钱（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。today i can still remember how i became good table tennis player.the first day i went to high school, i saw some of my classmate playing table tennis. amazing at how skillful they were, i was determined to be just as good. later on, i often watched them carefully to learn our techniques. then i kept practicing while i became confidently enough to challenge the good players. at the end of the term i became one of the best players of my class.i really take proud in this experience, because it helped me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve to our goals through hard work. it also helps me better understand the proverb practice makes perfect.”【参考答案】1.today i can still remember how i became (加a) good table tennis player.the first day i went to high school, i saw some of my classmate (classmates) playing table tennis. amazing (amazed) at how skillful they were, i was determined to be just as good. later on, i often watched them carefully to learn our (their) techniques. then i kept practicing while (until) i became confidently (confident) enough to challenge the good players. at the end of the term i became one of the best players of (in) my class.i really take proud (pride) in this experience, because it helped (helps) me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve to(去掉to) our goals through hard work. it also helps me better understand the proverb practice makes perfect.”2.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 my school has taken on a new look since it moved into a new place. it is quite different of the old one. there used to be have only one classroom building and the playground is not large enough for all the students to have sports. sometimes we had to practise run along the streets outside. the teaching conditions were even worst. our teachers used to teach with only a blackboard, but the experiments could only be done in the classroom. but now besides the classroom building, a modern lab building has put into use, which all kinds of experiments can be done. we have not only a large playground and also a gym. classes can be given with the help of computers and multimedia. what great changes! i feel proudly of my school.【参考答案】2.my school has taken on a new look since it moved into a new place. it is quite different of the old one. there used to be have only one classroom building and fromthe playground is not large enough for all the students to have sports. sometimes waswe had to practise run along the streets outside. the teaching conditions were runningeven worst. our teachers used to teach with only a blackboard, but the experiments worse andcould only be done in the classroom. but now besides the classroom building, amodern lab building hasput into use, which all kinds of experiments can be done. been wherewe have not only a large playground and also a gym. classes can be given with butthe help of computers and multimedia. what great changes! i feel proudly of my proudschool.3.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及修改均限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。 when i first learned to write in english, i run into many difficulty. the main problem was in that i always thought in chinese and tried to translate everything into chinese. my teacher advised me to keep diaries. i followed her advices. happily it worked. soon i began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as i was learning to express me in simple english. one day i wrote a short story showed it to my teacher. she liked it very much that she read it to the class. everyone said the story was the good one. i was great encouraged by their words. 【参考答案】3.when i first learned to write in english, i run into many difficulty. theran difficultiesmain problem was in that i always thought in chinese and tried to translate 去掉everything into chinese. my teacher advised me to keep diaries. i followed heradvices. happily it worked. soon i began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as i advice talkingwas learning to express me in simple english. one day i wrote a short story myself andshowed it to my teacher. she liked it very much that she read it to the class. soeveryone said the story was the good one. i was great encouraged by their words. a greatly 4.短文改错文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。in modern society, competition is everywhere. no wonder a english philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. in my opinion, all are important and necessary.lets take the competition at school for example. even a gifted student wont make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. thats because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. on the other hand, if we dont cooperate with each other, its impossible for us learn from each other. and thats why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.to conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.【参考答案】4.in modern society, competition is everywhere. no wonder a english philosopher considers ancompetition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. therefore, if weproblems howeverstress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. in my opinion, all are important and stressed bothnecessary.lets take the competition at school for example. even a gifted student wont make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. thats because competition, and orrather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. on the other hand, if 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