英语书面表达漫画写作指导.ppt

英语书面表达漫画写作指导 Tasks 1 Todealwithdifficultyinwritingaboutcartoons2 Tolearnthebasicstructureofcartoonwriting3 Tolearnsomeusefulexpressionsofcartoonwriting 2010年江苏省高考说明 writing 漫画类 Difficulties 1 读图2 解意3 谋篇 读图 1 漫画的题目眼睛2 漫画的画面细节3 漫画的文字观点4 漫画的夸张寓意 读图 题目画面文字夸张 读图 Theunderwear shortsformenandpantiesforladies isafunnywaytolookathowdesperateparentsget tryingtopreventchildrenfromseeingthingstheyshouldnot andmaybeunderwearisn tagoodthingtoseeeitherbutalotbetterthansomeofthematerialsontheInternet 夸张 解意 1 辨明褒贬 找准角度 夸奖褒扬or批评讽喻 解意 联系生活 明晰主旨 Imagination 解意 注意 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息 clues 切记要认真阅读 谋篇 3parts 1 describethepicture2 interpretitsmeaning3 giveyouropinionsaboutthephenomenon Part1Describethepicture Thepictureistalkingabout shows Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenon Thepicturedescribesaninterestingphenomenon Inthepicture thereare is are doing Thepictureaboveisabout Let slookatthepictureabove first Part2Interpretthepicture Itseemsveryridiculousthat However thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere Thepictureshowsthat Itistheexactreflectionof Thepictureindicatethatwe Nowadays itisacommonphenomenonthat Thisisasatirical 讽刺的 cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong Part3Giveyouropinions Ithink believethatAsfarasI mconcerned Inmyopinion Frommypointofview shouldItisbetter advisableto Iconsideritnecessary Onlyinthiswaycan musthavetoDo Don t 注意点 保证三要素 体裁 时态 人称正确 体裁 议论文时态 一般现在时人称 第三人称 Practice Practice Polishupyourarticle 1 Touselinkingwordsifnecessary2 Tousecomplicatedstructuresifpossible Onepossibleversion Formostoftheparents it snoeasyjobtokeeptheirchildrenawayfromthePCmonitor Let slookatthepictureabove Twopeoplearestandinginfrontofacomputer whosemonitoriswearingunderwear Thewomanisstaringatthecomputer thinkingwhilethemanistellinghimthattherearethreewaystomaketheInternetsaferforherchildren hardware softwareandunderwear ItmayberidiculoustocoverthePCmonitorwithsomeone sunderwear butitdescribesvividlyparents distressandfeelingsofhelplessnesswhentheyarefacedwiththeproblem Concernedabouttheirchildren ssecurity someofthemjustcutofftheaccesstotheInternetathome thehardwaresolution somechoosetouseacertainsoftwareprogramtopreventtheirkidsfromgettingonline thesoftwaresolution othersmaymakesomerulestolimitthetimetheirchildrenspendontheInternet theunderwearsolution Frommypointofview thisphenomenoncallsfortheattentionofthewholesociety Ononehand thegovernmentshouldmakelawstocensortheInternetandblockinappropriatesites makingitasaferplaceforallteenagers Ontheotherhand itisbetterforparentstogivetheirchildrenaproperguideinsteadofjustprevention Teenagersneedtobetaughthowtotellandresistbadinformationconsciously OnlyinthiswaycantheInternetbemadesaferforthechildren 注意点 1 保证三要素 体裁 时态 人称正确 体裁 议论文时态 一般现在时人称 第三人称 你不是父母 人称混乱 注意点 1 保证三要素 体裁 时态 人称正确 体裁 议论文时态 一般现在时人称 第三人称 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误 1 误解图意 2 企图幽默 3 不明寓意 4 中心不明 注意点 1 保证三要素 体裁 人称 时态正确 体裁 议论文人称 第三人称时态 一般现在时 避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误 控制字数 结尾精炼 Tooshort Toolong 一篇好的英语漫画作文 仔细审题准确立义规范行文整洁书写 Notgood Worse Neat Thankyou Practice Ascanbeseenfromthecartoon twoladieslivingintheoppositeflatsay hello whentheyhappentomeeteachother Thetwowomendon tknoweachothereveniftheyhavebeenneighborsforyears Itistheexactreflectionofinterpersonalrelationshipsinthemodernworld Asweallknow mostpeopleliveinapartments Theydon tliketogooutafterwork andtheywillstayathomewatchingTVorplayingcomputergames Theydon thaveanyconnectionsevenwiththeirclosestneighbors whoseemnodifferentfrompeopletheymeeteverydayinthestreet Inmyview thisphenomenonisnogoodtous nortooursociety It stimethatwetooksomemeasurestoimproveit Peoplelivingin