句子的统一性和连惯性.doc

句子的统一性和连惯性句子的统一性和连贯性是相辅相成的，最简单的解释是：意思完整、主次分明、前后连贯。从语义上看，句子各部分应该是精密联系在一起，表达一个完整的意思；从语法角度来看，正确的句子应该是结构严谨、关系一致、语序正确；从修辞角度来看，好的句子应该是中心突出，逻辑性强，准确简练。如果一个句子表达的意思不完整，主次关系不明确，逻辑关系混乱，那么这个句子的统一性和连贯性就遭到破坏，句子就有语病，读者也就无法了解作者的本意。如下列句子在统一性和逻辑性方面就存在问题：1. My uncle is a heavy smoker and he owns a large company in Nanjing.2. We ate our breakfast and we went to the classroom.3. We work very hard because we are students.4. The rain stopped when Jane died.5. The car slowly rumbled to a halt as I realized we had run out of gas.6. Three hours were too long for a film.7. We have been living in Beijing for 20 years before we moved to Nanjing.8. Our school team played very hard and the rival team was beaten by us.9. If one works hard, they will not fail.10. We went to the library and the seats were already taken.11. Come in and take a look and you must find something to your need.12. Being very poor and not want to trouble anyone else, Mary goes to class without breakfast.13. My wife is thirty, very kind, very beautiful and a very good mother.14. She is not only a triple-A student, but also respects her teachers.15. We should all be conscious and sensitive to our environmental deterioration.二、好句子的标准1、 完整完整是好句子的第一要点。1. Li Bai was one of the greatest poets.2. According to the requirement, writing a composition.2、 连惯连惯是指句子各部分之间清楚而合理的联系。不连贯的句子通常有以下几种毛病：平行结构有缺点、代词指代不清楚、逻辑主语和句子主语不一致、以及人称、数、语态、时态或语气上有混乱之处。1. A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds.2. He fell down stairs, but it was not serious. 3. In order to give his wife a pleasant surprise, a bouquet of red roses was ready.4. Come early and youll see him.5. Those who wish to take CET-6 tests are expected to sign his name on this sheet of paper.6. Students should learn to analyze and solve problems independently. Dont rely on your teachers help.7. We reviewed the lesson taught last week and all the exercises assigned by the teacher were done.3、 简洁1. In my opinion, I think the plan is feasible.2. My mother is a kind and pretty women.3. Girls usually like all kinds of theatrical make ups or cosmetics that are produced in France.4. LiMing, who was monitor of our class, would go to the library everyday in the evening. He would borrow a novel from the librarian. In the library, he would find a seat in the corner and read it. 三、句式的多样性1、 名词：1.Time, place and activity should be arranged first while we plan for a picnic.2、 形容词：1 Clever ideas are always welcome.3、 副词：1. Slowly, slowly, he approached to catch the monkey.2. How can we turn a blind eye to our ever worsening environment?3. Where are we if we cant differentiate shame from honor?4、 代词：1. That is my English teacher, a man of humor as well as principles.2. That being the case, we had to accept it.5、 动名词：1. Learning English well needs time and effort.6、 动词不定式：1. To begin with, Id like to thank all those who were kind to me when I fell into dark days.2. To err is human, to forgive, divine.7、 分词短语：1. Exhausted and discouraged, I threw myself into a chair.2. Laughing and screaming, the kids were chasing and playing noisily in the park.8、 介词短语：1 From my point of view, this problem can only be solved through cooperated efforts.2 In retrospect, we could have done better between economic development and environmental protection.9、 副词短语：1. Ahead of us are opportunities and difficulties that lie shoulder to shoulder.二、丛句1、 状语丛句：（1） Wherever you go, whatever you do, I will be right here waiting for you.（2） As has been mentioned above, the best solution to the present problem is education.2、 名词从句：（1） What I want to advocate here is we should all adhere to the long established principlehonesty.（2） Whoever has made such a mistake should be severely punished.3、 祈使句：（1） Think twice before we take an action.（2） Look before you leap.三、 其它1、 倒装：（1） Gone are days when we could enjoy clean air and clear water.（2） Lying ahead of us are two choiceshealth or wealth?（3） Difficult as it may be, we have to pluck up our courage to deal with it.2、 独立主格结构：（1） It being fine, we went out for an excursion.（2） A general agreement should be reached first, the details to be discussed later.（3） The job done, the worker began to collect his tools.（4） The criminal finally came out the house, his hands up.3、 同位语：（1） An ambitious person, Tom wants to finish his Ph.D. in two years.（2） The green house effect, a close concern with scientists and government officials, must be dealt with seriously.4、 插入语：（1） The problem of environmental contamination is, in the real sense of the meaning, a problem of sense and responsibility.（2） Mercy killing, new and strange fifty tears ago, is being accepted by more and more people even in China. 四、避免Chinglish / pigeon English(1) Good is good, but is no use.(2) His characteristic is to be helpful.(3) Our duty is very big.(4) I want more some tickets.(5) His all book are on the desk. (6) My that dictionary was bought last year.(7) Chinese films are more and more welcomed by the people of South-east Asia.(8) He is wearing a chicken-hearted sweater. (9) If you are not convenient, Ill come at two.(10) If we everyone all take actions, then no unsolvable problems.(11) With the deep in of our open and reform policy.(12) With the practise of opening and reform policy, the rate of unemployment is on the up.(13) Job hopping is good for them because they could show their abilities as much as possibl