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山西阳泉市2016高考英语二轮短文改错基础练习（1）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线 （）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。as a senior three student, it wont take long after i graduate. now, i have much to share with my fellow student. firstly, id like to show my appreciation to those stand by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. without their help or advice, my life will be different. secondly, its high time for i to say sorry to the classmates whom i hurt or misunderstood. i firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. thirdly, ive made my mind to make every effort to study, so hard work is the key to a success. finally i want to express my hope which all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no man. 【参考答案】1. after-before 2. student-students 3. stand前加who或 standing 4. will-would 5. i-me 6. firm-firmly 7. my前加up 8. so- because/for/ as 9. success前a去掉 10. which-that 【2014界黑龙江省哈三中高三上第三次验收考试】 短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。as is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies. most large town in florida and california have already run particularly lessons for babies. the idea has quickly spread to europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old. the first step is to have child get rid of the fear with water. next, he is teaching to float in water. once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water. 【参考答案】改错：第一句：去掉that第二句：towns第三句：particular 第四句：which改成where第五句：were改成are第六句：have与child之间加a第七句：with water 改成 of water第八句：taught第九句：without第十句：himself【由四川省资阳市2014模拟改编】短文改错。请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. he told the artist he didnt want toany shadows in picture, just sunshine. when the king saw the finish picture, he wasdisappointed. without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. the point of thestory was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as weneed both rain and sun to have a living world. people, too, needs both sadness and happiness.we often learn important lesson during sad times. so when we feel sad, we should try to thinkabout that we might learn from the experience.【参考答案】一、参考答案once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. he told the artist he didnt want to forany shadows in picture, just sunshine. when the king saw the finish picture, he was the finisheddisappointed. without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. the point of the andstory was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we is completeneed both rain and sun to have a living world. people, too, needs both sadness and happiness. needwe often learn important lesson during sad times. so when we feel sad, we should try to think lessonsabout that we might learn from the experience. what二、评分意见 1. 未标注符号或符号标注不规范一律不给分。2. 答题位置（需修改的词下方或需添加位置的下方）不对（如答在上方或相距甚远的位置）一律不给分。【由浙江省2014高考英语模拟冲刺卷改编】短文改错。下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如: it was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. luckily i was the am completely free then, so ill to say “yes”. ill arrive in bristol at around 8 p.m. in friday evening. onlast week our class voted what to do for our class outing: visit the singapore zoo or go to the night safari(夜间动物园). our girls wanted to go to the zoo, and since we were in the minority, we lose to the boys, who all wanted to the safari. we got the admission rate for students, which was greatly since i still had enough money to buy a brochure about the park as well as anything at the souvenir shops. the safari was scary but a really fun. as we took the ride through the parks dark jungle, we could see the eye of many creatures looked out at us. most of the animals there sleep when there is sunlight and waked up at night.【参考答案】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）last week our class voted what to do for our class outing: visit the singapore zoo or go to onthe night safari(夜间动物园). our girls wanted to go to the zoo, and since we were in the we butminority, we lose to the boys, who all wanted to the safari. we got the admission rate for students, lost which was greatly since i still had enough money to buy a brochure about the park as well as greatanything at the souvenir shops. the safari was scary but a really fun. as we took the ride throughsomething the parks dark jungle, we could see the eye of many creatures looked out at us. most of the eyes looking animals there sleep when there is sunlight and waked up at night. wake2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错短文改错。i first met li meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. then i invited li meng over in my place. we listen to my cds together and soon became good friends. three years ago, li mengs parents invited i to spend a couple of wonderful week in qingdao with them during the summer holiday. li