广东省揭阳市高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（3）.doc

揭阳市2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（3）附参考范文短文改错- (2010河北部分重点联考)dear anish，here are the information about manchester university.1._it is about 200 miles far away from london, and it 2._has a very big schoolyard. you can live in the school3._or near the school. they have all sorts of course.4._im sure you will find one you like it. i know you5._are particular interested in human rights. so i will 6._see that there is anything on their website(网址).7._ill send my friend charlie meet you at the airport8._when you arrived. you met him a few years ago, but he 9._has changed a lot since then. both your aunt or i look10._forward to seeing you again.see you soon.peter答案与解析：1areisinformation是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式。2去掉farfar通常不与表示具体距离的数词连用。34coursecourses根据句中的all sorts of可知，这里要表示的是各种各样的课程，因此应用复数形式。5去掉it“(that) you like”是定语从句，修饰先行词one。在从句中，关系代词that作like的宾语，所以it多余。6particularparticularlyinterested是形容词，应使用副词修饰。7thatif/whether根据上一句中的内容可知这里的意思是看网络上“是否”有相关信息。8meet前加to此处是不定式表示目的。9arrivedarrive如果主句是一般将来时，时间状语从句通常用一般现在时。10orand此处是“both.and.”结构，表示“两者都”。*结束短文改错-多余词多词一般为：冠词/连词/介词/系词be 助词等。【1】连词多余：*they did not want breakfast because that they were going out early in the morning.解析：连词多余，故此去掉 (that)，原句是状语从句。【2】介词多余：*the crowd waiting for to greet them in england was very surprised.(for)解析：没有宾语，所以去掉for。【3】冠词多余：*suddenly i caught a sight of my english teacher in the crowd.解析：固定短语，catch sight of :偶然看见。【4】系词/助词多余：*my mother was asked : “have you taken medicine ?”解析：根据句意，是妈妈问：故为主动语态。短文改错-缺词缺词一般为：冠词/连词/介词/系词be 助词/【1】缺介词*he was looking for a glass the cupboard (in)解析：根据句意，in the cupboard 做状语。【2】缺冠词*however, the popular teacher is at same time the one who should be strict with students.(the)解析：形容词same 和the 搭配使用,故给same前加 the。【3】缺连接词*in one class, i learned it rained (why)解析：根据句子意思可知，缺连接词，句意为：“在一节课上，我知道了下雨的原因”。【4】缺系词*what your favorite sport ? (is)解析：句子中缺系词，在what加is.*结束高考英语书面表达讲义：要点作文(3)(25 min.)(2012益阳一中月考)假如你是李明，你同学李华来信说自己每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封回信， 信的内容应包括下列要点： 焦虑症状： 头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等建议：1. 考前制定好合适的复习计划；2. 考试期间正常作息；3. 睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠；4. 其他建议(内容由考生自己拟定)。注意：1. 根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。2. 要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；3. 词数： 不少于120。参考词汇： 头晕dizzy(adj.)_【参考范文】one possible version：dear li hua, thanks for your letter. i am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.most of us feel nervous whenever were taking an important exam. some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and others will lose their appetite. in fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.first of all, in my opinion, its important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. they are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. in this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. we can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which might help us to have a sound sleep.wed better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.*结束第*套第一节：短文改错(共10小题)假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。i saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. a girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. the young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. he hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. the girl was bad hurt and couldnt move. the young man didnt know how to do. i ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. soon the police arrived. they send her to the nearest hospital at once. one of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. i think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.参考答案、 短文改错(共10小题)i saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. a girl was crossing the street on a zebrahappen 去掉tocrossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. the young man saw the girl but tried to stop, when andbut he drove too fast to stop. he hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. the girl was bad hurt and couldnt his badlymove. the young man didnt know how to do. i ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. soon the policewhatarrived. they send her to the nearest hospital at once. one of the policeman talked to the young man and sent policemenwrote something down while was talking. i think it is very dangerous to drive very fast. 加he或去掉was*结束 （2） 最近，你班试行在课间播放音乐，同学们对此私下议论，看法不一。请你根据下表的信息，给你班的班主任mr edward 写一封信，客观地介绍大家的看法。 大多数同学认为部分同学认为1.播放音乐能活跃气氛1.课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期效果2.能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳2.课间需要的是安静，而不是嘈杂的声音3.它能给大家带来欢乐和美的享受3.有时上课后还沉浸在课间的音乐中 参考范文one possible version: dear mr edward, recently we have carried out the practice to play music during the class break, and the students have had many private talks about it. their opinions mainly fall into two groups. most of us agree that music should be played. as we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. besides, music brings us relaxation after hard study, which reduces the tiredness. listening to music also makes us feel happy and nice. on the other hand, some students dont think so. in their opinion, they cant get the expected result by playing music, as the break between classes is too short. what is needed during the break is peace instead of noise produced by the music. in addition, in class some students are still lost in the music they have heard during the break.*结束高考英语作文（经典好句）（三）结尾句1.the most effective means to solve this problem is that _. in that case, _.解决这个问题的最有效的方法是。如果那样的话 2. everything has its own two sides, no exception with aaa. for one thing, _. for another, _.任何事情都有它的两个方面，aaa也不除外，一方面另一方面 3. my experience tells me that to _ need a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.我的经验告诉我需要一个细心而又坚持不懈的过程，并且在这个过程中你最好遵守这其中涉及的规则。 4. on the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of _.总体上来说，这是我们认识到的重要性的紧急时刻了。 5. as a result, we should take some effective methods to _.因此，我们应该对采取许多有效的措施 6. judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that _.通过分析这些数据，我们可以得到那样一个的结论 7. in a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of _. only in this way can _ in the future.一句话来说，整个社会应当对的问题给予密切的关注。只有以这种方式才能在将来 8. in my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of _.以我的观点来看，我们应当对的重要性给予重视 9. but _ and _ have their own advantages. for example, _, while _. comparing those two, however, i prefer to _.但是和具有它们自己的优势。举个例子，然而。对比这两者，我更喜欢 10. in my opinion, _ is just as common as _. if _, it may be very useful. whatever _, the key point (of) lies in _.以我的观点来看，就像如果，它将非常有效。无论重点在于 11. are their opinions correct? to my mind, the first idea seems _. as for the second idea, _.他们的观点正确吗？我认为，第一个观点看起来。对于第二个观点， 12. as a popular saying goes, _. in my opinion what really counts is not _, but _. i believe that as long as _, we will _. so i am for the opinion that _.一个普遍的说法是。依我来看真正的观点不是而是我相信只要我们将会所以我的观点是 13. in my opinion, both sides are partly right. when we _, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.以我的观点来看，所有方面都部分正确。当我们时，我们应当考虑问题的所有方面，并且做出正确的决定。 14. personally, i believe that _. consequently, im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because _.一己之见，我认为。作为结果，我相信一个光明的未来在等待着我们，因为 15. people are coming to realize the importance of _. they have begun to try their best to _. we believe that _.人们逐渐认识到的重要性，他们开始付出最大努力来我们相信 16. all in all, we cannot live without _. but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.总之，我们不可能离开来生活。但是同时对于即将出现的问题我们必须寻找新的方法来解决。 17. with the development of society, _. so its urgent and necessary to _. if every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.随着社会的发展，所以是急切并且必要的。如果每个人心甘情愿的为社会做出贡献，这将会好上加好。 18. it is difficult to say whether _ is good or not ，in general as it depends very much on the situation of _. however, from a personal point of view i find _.很难说是好还是坏，一般情况下，它在很大程度上取决于的情形。然而，从个人观点来看我发现 19. it is essential that effective actions should be taken to end for the situation.对于这样的情形将有效的行动坚持到底是必要的。 20. it is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of _.毋庸置疑的，对于的问题我们必须给予特别的关注 21. but both _ and _ have disadvantages. for example, _. which to choose, _ or _? careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.但是和都有缺点，举例说选择哪一个？或什么？在做出自己的决定时细心的考虑是必要的。 22. from what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that _.通过上面的讨论，我们将理智的得到的结论。 23. no doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that _ will be put in danger.毋庸置疑，如果我们忽视这个问题，无论怎样将会将给我们置于危险之中。 24. we need to take a second look at the matter from a wider standpoint, otherwise, we wont _.我们应该从一个更宽广的角度出发以另一种眼光看待这个问题，否则，我们不能 25. in conclusion, we should know about the problem of _, and object to _. only in this way _.作为结论，我们应当了解的问题，并且反对只有以这种方法 26. although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can make the situation better. the most import is _. another way is _. still another one is _.虽然它受很多方面的影响，仍然有许多方法可以使情形变好。最重要的是另一种方法是另一种方法是 27. many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. the problem should be studied in depth.许多情形已经别提供在这里了，它们都有一定意义，但是所有的都不够充分，这个问题应当更进一步的研究。 28. it is clear, therefore, that the task of _ demands great attention.很清楚的，完成的任务需要很多的精力。 29. we may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. but once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.在我们达到最终目标前我们还有很长的路要走。但是一旦我们走上了路，到达这个目标的机会是很大的。 30. but for me, i would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way, because i believe _.但是对于我，我更愿意以积极的方式看待这个问题。因为我相信 31. if we cant take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is _.如果我们不能采取有效的方法，我们将无法控制这种趋势，并且一些不理想的结果将会不加预料的到来，所以我们必须做的是 32. however, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. i believe _.然而，这个图表可能不能预料未来的全部情形。我相信 33. from the graph it is evident that _.从这个图表中我们可以看出是显然的。 34. taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _.将所有的因素考虑进来，我们将得到的结论。 35. for the reasons given above, i strongly recommend that _.通过上述的原因，我强烈的推荐 36. given the factors i have just outlined, i believe that _.通过对这些我刚刚概述的因素的研究，我相信 37. therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that _.因此，不难得出的结论。 38. recognizing the fact that _ should lead us to conclude that _.认识到的事实，将引导我们得出的结论。 39. in short, i support the statement that it is better to _ because _.长话短说，我建议这个状态对于是更好的因为 40. after pondering this question on many occasions, i have finally reached the conclusion that _ is som