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书面表达学生观摩选编（2）书面表达训练最近，你校参加了某英文报纸正在开展的题为“中学生课堂注意力”的专栏讨论，并请你代表学校给该英文报纸投稿。下面的表格为你校的调查结果（表中数据为学生人数百分比）。请你根据所提供的信息做简要说明，并根据提示给出改善的建议。(字数140).中学生课堂注意力集中情况及注意力不能集中的原因： 改善注意力的建议： 能够集中注意力40不能够集中注意力60课堂干扰30睡眠不足与疲劳70教室通风、明亮课堂积极参与课堂活动课间适量活动或适当休息_【参考范文】our school has made a survey about how long middle school students can fix their attention in class during each period. the result shows that only 40% of the students can draw their attention to the class, while the rest of them can not concentrate on the lesson. 30% of the students think the problem is caused by all kinds of noises in the classroom; the other part of students consider the lack of sleep and tiredness as the major causes.therefore, we advise that the classroom be bright and the air inside stay fresh. as for students, they should try their best to be active in class in order not to be disturbed by others. during the breaks, they can take some exercises or have a little rest in the classroom.书面表达训练假定你是李华， 暑假你参加了英国游学活动，住在房东tricia家中， 回国后给房东写一封信表示感谢， 要点如下：1、安全抵家2、回顾英国游学体会3、感谢房东的帮助4、附寄两张合影5、表达愿望注意：1、词数100左右。 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3、结束语已为你写好。dear tricia, looking forward to your reply. yours lihua【参考范文】dear tricia, ive come back home safely . looking back to my stay in britain, i felt so happy and satisfied. the beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot . i also benefited a lot from learning together with local stduents. more importantly , your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of british culturedn adapt to the life there . so im so grateful to you . by the way , attached to the letter are two photos taken with you , which i believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together. you are expected to come to china soon. looking forward to your reply. yours li hua记叙文型基础写作1-1 专题导读记叙文是以叙述为主要表达方式，以写人物的经历和事物发展变化为主要内容的一种文体，包括记人记事方面的故事、日记、游记、新闻、通讯等。记叙文通常要将时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果六个要素交代清楚。通常使用第一人称或第三人称来写，第一人称主要是用于写自传或本人的经历，第三人称是用于写他人的经历或事迹。写作时要注意以下几点：1注意不要漏掉信息点，但也不要为了生动而随意添加信息。2信息点的表述不一定完全按照题目所给的顺序，可能要适当重组。要特别注意故事发展的线索和时间顺序等。3记叙文写作的时态多数是用一般过去时，但也要注意灵活运用其他时态。4高考中记叙文的话题通常是与中学生的生活阅历有关，如校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等，平时要注意积累这些方面的词汇和短语。典例导练【2011湖北卷改编】请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就“与人合作”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork.teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。one possible version：years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me.in fact, i didnt realize its importance until i was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school.at first, i did most of the duties myself while other students cared little about class activities.as a result, i was tired out and depressed so i turned to my teacher, who advised me to cooperate with others.it is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient.新题预测【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 one possible version：yesterday my classmates and i went to west mountain and had a picnic.all of us set off at seven oclock from our school gate and rode to the foot of the mountain. after an hours climbing, we reached the top of the mountain and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. running, singing, dancing, playing chess and taking photos, we had a wonderful time there.after the picnic lunch at three oclock, we felt very tired, so we went down the mountain and came home.请根据以下说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述所给的全部内容。【写作内容】假如你叫孙军，是某市一所中学的学生。老师要求同学们写一篇英文短文，反映学校门前交通拥挤的现象，短文须包括以下要点：【写作要求】必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。one possible version：beside my school there is a primary school and the gates of the two schools both face the main road.in rush hours, there are so many cars, buses and bikes on the main road that the students have to cross it to school.crowds of people often thread their way through the moving cars and buses.whats worse, some pupils are too young to go to school by themselves, so many parents have to go along w