广东省肇庆市高考英语二轮复习 书面表达借鉴集（6）.doc

广东肇庆市2016高考英语二轮书面表达借鉴集（6）（2014广东卷）第一节 基础习作你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。写作内容请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道，内容包括：人物：英国人查理德阿维斯（richard avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义相关信息： 借助当地媒体寻找 迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家 职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等 计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人 打算根据此经历写一本书 同年同月同日生的人：time twin写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【考点】考察提纲类短文【写作指导】本文属于提纲类短文，叙述寻找同年同月同日生的人的richard avis所做事情的具体信息。使用第三人称和一般现在时为主（在叙述过去发生的事情时使用一般过去时）。要点：人物：英国人查理德阿维斯（richard avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日；时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人；目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义：借助当地媒体寻找；迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家；职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等；计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人；打算根据此经历写一本书提纲类书面表达主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体，贴近生活，易于动笔。此类试题中有较多的文字说明，实际上规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了较为明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避。考生极易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和语汇上的单调，因此平时要多练习，活用语言，使文章流畅。【一句多译】借助当地媒体寻找；迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家；职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等；（1）with the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on.（2）with the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females, including government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on.【参考范文】richard avis, a british, was born on december 1st, 1974. in order to understand the meaning of successful life in different cultures, richard, from 2011, began to seek time twins around the world. with the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on. richard intends to find 40 time twins before his birthday and he is going to write a book based on this experience.2016书面表达训练假定你叫李华,最近你校在为一批来自美国的交流生征询寄宿家庭。你作为一名申请者，需要提交一份英文申请材料，内容要点包括：1. 家里有一间客卧；父亲可以开车，外出方便。2. 母亲是英语教师，便于沟通交流。3. 自己有过在美国游学的经历。注意：1、词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。dear sir,my parents and i would like to apply for the chance to provide homestay service for the exchange students. _【参考范文】test 5dear sir,my parents and i would like to apply for the chance to provide homestay service for the exchange students. we are quite sure that we are qualified for the program:first of all, there is a spare bedroom in our house, so the exchange student will have his or her own room to live in. secondly, my parents can do their bit. dad can drive us wherever we want to go, and meanwhile mum, an english teacher, can communicate freely with foreign friends. whats more, i once studied as an exchange student in america for several months, which enables me to know more about american culture. therefore, i can get along well with an american student.look forward to your reply.yours li hua书面表达（b）（20分钟）请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应该包括以下内容：1. 这幅漫画描述了什么2. 这幅漫画想要告诉我们什么3. 发表你个人的看法注意：1. 可参照图示作必要的发挥想象。2. 词数150左右。3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。参考词汇：温室greenhouse_【参考范文】a possible versionas is shown in the first drawing, it is windy and rainy outside, and yet the flower in the greenhouse is at its best. in the second drawing, however, things are quite different. when exposed to the outside, the flower appears weak and fails to stand against the bad weather. based on the above drawings, we can see that one can hardly challenge possible difficulties if he stays in a comfortable surrounding too long a time. similarly, with living standards improving, people tend to provide their children with material comfort and as a result, children are often spoiled. they may possibly succeed with the protection of the comfort. but what if they leave the so-called comfort? theyll probably be destroyed by the tough reality as what happens to the flower. it is obvious that the education of the young is vital to the nation. dont let them grow up in the greenhouse all the time. if exposed to the outside surroundings, theyll be stronger and better prepared for their future.2016书面表达训练假如你是李华, 你班的留学生charles即将结束三周的假期从美国返回。你想委托他为你代购一个剃须刀, 作为生日礼物送给爸爸。请按照以下要求给他写一封电子邮件: 1. 品牌: gillette. 2. 价格: 30美元左右。 参考词汇: 剃须刀shaver注意: 1. 词数100左右: 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯: 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好, 不计入总词数。dear charles, _【参考范文】dear charles,i havent seen you for over three weeks. how have you been doing these days? i miss you so much! but it wont be long before we meet again, isnt it?charles, could you do me a favor, please? my fathers birthday is coming, and i want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift. just buy me a gillette about 30 dollars. it is a very famous brand around the world. you can bring it back when you come back, and i will pay you back for that. thank you very much.looking forward to your coming soon.yours, li hua【浙江省宁波市八校联考】书面表达（满分30分）请你以“the world is getting smaller”为题，写一篇短文。要点：1. 我们都感觉到现在的世界变得越来越小。 2. 分析这种感觉的原因。注意：词数100-120。【参考范文】作文（共30分）2016书面表达训练假设你是新华中学的李华。下周六是外教mr. smith的生日，你们班同学准备给他举办一个生日晚会。请给外教写一封邀请函，内容包含以下要点：1感谢mr. smith对你们英语学习的帮助；2说明晚会的内容。（时间：下午六点；地点：本班教室。学生们会准备蛋糕、各种中国特色食品等。同学们还将表演节目。）要求：1不要逐条翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2词数100左右。dear mr. smith,i am li hua. i am writing to _best wishesyours ever,lihua【参考范文】i am li hua. i am writing to invite you to attend the party we will hold to celebrate your birthday next saturday.since you became our english teacher, we have made great progress in english. your teaching is so well organized and your wonderful teaching skills greatly arouse our interest in english. besides, you are patient, humorous and easygoing, which makes you one of our favorite teachers.your birthday is coming. to show our sincere gratitude for your help, our class will hold a party in the classroom to celebrate your birthday at 6pm. well bring a cake,