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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均限一词。 2只允许修改1 0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Passage1From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, dont keep your eyes work for a long time. Youd better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Dont read under the sun or in a poorly light; dont read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.【小题1】students后加whothat或去are【小题2】which改为it【小题3】work改为working【小题4】have后加a【小题5】under改为in【小题6】poorly-poor【小题7】moved改为moving【小题8】eye-exercise改为eye-exercise【小题9】But-And【小题10】Only后加if /when【小题1】学生是先行词，在定语从句中做主语，不能省略，用whothat。也可以去掉are改成非谓语动词，表示主动关系。因此students后加whothat或去are。【小题2】众所周知是定语从句，后面应该用主句，关系代词which改为普通代词it，it is +形容词+ to do句型。因此which改为it。【小题3】保持眼部工作很长时间，keep+宾语+宾补，宾补可以用形容词或非谓语动词，眼睛和工作是主动关系，因此work改为working。【小题4】固定短语“休息一下”have a rest，因此have后加a。【小题5】“在太阳下”应该用介词in，in the sun，因此under改为in。【小题6】也不要在光线差的地方，形容词修饰名词，因此-poorly-poor。【小题7】移动中的车辆，表示主动，正在；而moved表示被动，完成，因此moved改为moving。【小题8】做眼部练习，多次练习，应该用名词复数形式，因此eye-exercise改为eye-exercises。【小题9】最后一条建议与上文中的三条建议是并列关系，因此But-And。【小题10】Only后加if /when从句+部分倒装构成倒装句结构，因此Only后加if /when。Passage2I feltsadlyyesterday when our teacher told us something about Project Hope in class. Ithasset up to help the children in the countryside who cantpayto go to school. After school I came home. I was wondering if I could do something for the ProjectthenI caught sight ofmoney-collecting boxon the table. Then I made up mymindsto send my pocket money which I had saved for nearly one yearforthe children whowantedto go to school. I wrote a letter tohimand hurried to the post office. Together with the letter I posted the money and sentwithmy best wishes to them.1. sadlysad2. has后加been3. payafford4. thenwhen5. of后加my或the6. mindsmind7.第二个forto 8. wantedwant 9. him-them 10.去掉withPassage3Dear Bob,Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher,1. _Miss Fang. Id like to your penfriend, and get to know2. _more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself3. _My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the4. _capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School.5. _We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese,6. _English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot7. _in my spare time, but now I am interesting in8. _football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite9. _sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.10. _Yours,Li Hualear nlearnedto后加be第二个more去掉wherewhichsubjectsubjectsuseusedinterestinginterestedwhatwhat ishearhearingPassage4In my hometown there used to have a temple with a history of over eight hundredsyears. It lies in a valley with green hills around it. It was such beautiful and famous that many tourists came to visit to it every day. They took photo; they wrote down their names on the walls; they brought foods, drinks andleaverubbish everywhere. One day some touristsmadea fire to cook food near the temple.Suddenly, strong wind blew. The wooden temple was caught fire. Soon the whole temple was burned out but only a few walls remained. The beautiful temple disappeared.havebe hundredshundred lieslay suchso去掉to photophotos leaveleft stronga strong去掉was butandPassage5My classmate Liu Hui looks tired this week. This morning, I asked him if he had trouble in fall asleep. He said no and explained how he looked tired. “I want to do well on mystudies, so I have been stayed up these days,” he said. Hearing that, I became worrying. “Staying up may not help you at all. If you want to study well, you should have had agood sleep every night,” I said. Though he disagreed with me. He believed that if he studied for two more hour every night, he would catch up others. I said nothing more but Im sure he will realize what I told them is true one day.fall-fallingHow-whyOn-inStayed-stayingWorrying-worriedHad去掉ThoughbutHour-hoursOthers前加withThem-himPassage5When my father bought me a computer as birthday gift in last year, I felt very excited.Aswe all know, computers are getting more and more usefully now. Much informations can be storedin them. We can also learn that has lately happened in the world on the internet. In the past, peoplehave to do the work which was very dangerous. Now, but, computers can do it instead. When anexam is coming, I often did some exercises on my computer. After correct them , it will tellthem right answers. In this way it is very convenient for me to prepare for the exam than before.The computer has become my real friends.as后加aBirthday去掉UsefulusefullyInformationinformationsThatwhatHavehadBut-howeverCorrectcorrectingThemmeVery-more Passage7A few months after returning the US from Germany , I took1._part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to2._speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be3._interested to begin studying another language. At the first4._class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise,5._in it he would say a word or two in French, and each6._student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he7._kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him8._why. “I find it great funs.Its the first time Ive heard an9._American speak French with a German accent.” he explained it.10._1.returningto2. have-had3. good-well4. interested-interesting 5.6.it-which7. their-his8. to9. funs-fun10. ItPassage 8Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulation on the 5th anniversary of your newspaper! Im regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much main for the following two reason. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turn the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive were the success stories of world-famous people, which helps me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.As a young student, I suggest that your newspaper will carry articles to guide you in English learning, but I hope that it will become even more popular.Sincerely yours,Li Hua1.Congratulation改为Congratulations; 2. regular前加a; 3.main改为mainly; 4. reason改为reasons; 5.turn改为turning; 6.were改为are; 7.helps-help; 8.carry前will改为should或删掉will; 9.you改为us; 10.but改为and较易题 第3页完 第4页开始1.She protected her eye