山西省平遥县高考英语一轮起航短文改错（8）.doc

山西省平遥县2015高考英语短文改错（8）及参考答案短文改错下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad news to her friend freddy. she was upsetting about the news herself. in the spring, marias mother had said maria might be allowed bring a friend along on the family two-week vacation at the beach. since then, maria and freddy had been doing nothing and planning all the thing they would do together. by the time august had arrived, marias mother had total forgotten her promise. when maria reminded her, she said that she was sorry but that it wouldnt be enough room for freddy because marias cousin, theresa, would be going to the shore with them. now freddy was in his way to marias house.【参考答案】3.maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad news to her friendthefreddy. she was upsetting about the news herself. in the spring, marias mother hadupsetsaid maria might be allowedbring a friend along on the family two-week vacation atto familysthe beach. since then, maria and freddy had been doing nothing and planning all thebutthing they would do together. by the time august had arrived, marias mother hadthingstotal forgotten her promise. when maria reminded her, she said that she was sorry buttotallythat it wouldnt be enough room for freddy because marias cousin, theresa, wouldtherebe going to the shore with them. now freddy was in his way to marias house.on4.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分,满分15分）文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。修改：在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2、只允许修改10处,多者（从11处起）不计分。i often dream of a teacher. i dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. i teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up. i am always young when i was staying with them. i know there is not easy to be a teacher. you have to learn in order to teach. without enough knowledges, you can never learn well. what is more, you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him. only by this way can you be a good teacher and win respect from them. though i am a student now, i will work as very hard to make my dream come true.【参考答案】4.1.第一句 of 后加being/becoming 2.第二句 give改为giving 3.第三句 but改为and 4,第四句 was 改为am 5. 第五句 there 改为 it 6.第七句 knowledges改为knowledge learn改为 teach 7.第八句 him 改为them 8 .第九句 by 改为in 9.第十句 去掉as4.短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出修改后的单词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错词下面画一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的单词。注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。with the national college entrance examination approach , many students are so worried about the coming exam to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness. its a fairly common phenomena among us students. here is some effective methods for you to adopt.first of all, you should spend a plenty of time preparing for the test. secondly, it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions. i think take a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress. last but not least, you ought to believe yourself and keep a good state of mind. follow my tips, but you will overcome your exam anxiety.【参考答案】4.1. approach改为approaching 2. so改为too 3. mentally改为mental 4. phenomona改为phenomenon 5. is改为are 6.去掉plenty前的a 7.it改为there8. take改为taking 9. believe后加in 10. but改为and5.文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。the siberian tiger is one of the most beautiful animal in the world. it is also one of rarest. today only about 1,000 are left, some of them are in the hunchun nature reserve. the chinese government has created the reserve to help saving the tigers natural habitat. but the siberian tiger is the only endangered species. other famous animal in a danger is the giant panda, whose habitat is in china. the panda was the symbol of the world wide fund for nature. thanks of scientists hard work, the number of the pandas lived in the wild has increased to about 1590.【参考答案】5.the siberian tiger is one of the most beautiful animal in the world. it is also one animalsof rarest. today only about 1,000 are left, some of them are in the hunchun nature the whichreserve. the chinese government has created the reserve to help saving the tigers savenatural habitat. but the siberian tiger isthe only endangered species. other famous not anotheranimal in a danger is the giant panda, whose habitat is in china. the panda was the 删除 issymbol of the world wide fund for nature. thanks of scientists hard work, the tonumber of the pandas lived in the wild has increased to about 1590.living6.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。alexanderwasamilitary genius or great explorer. but he also had a great ambition. he wanted to rule a country that people could live in peace with one another. from 330 to 327 bc, alexander led his soldier east, through afghanistan and into central asia. as he travel, he built more cities. he ordered soldiers, merchants, and scholars from many lands to settle here.in326bc alexanderturned south, into india. but by now his men were tired and weak. they were far home in an unknown land. the soldiers refused to go farther. unwillingly, alexander turned back. by 323 bc, he reached for babylon in iraq. there he caught fever and died at the age of 33. his country was divided between his generals.【参考答案】6.alexanderwasamilitary genius or great explorer. but he also had a great andambition. he wanted to rule a country that people could live in peace with one whereanother. from 330 to 327 bc, alexander led his soldier east, through afghanistan soldiersand into central asia. as he travel, he built more cities. he ordered soldiers, traveled/travelled merchants, and scholars from many lands to settle here.therein326bc alexanderturned south, into india. but by now his men were tired thenand weak. they were far home in an unknown land. the soldiers refused to fromgo farther. unwillingly, alexander turned back. by 323 bc, he reached for 去forbabylon in iraq. there he caught fever and died at the age of 33. his country awas divided between his generals. among 6.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.to celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and i went to fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca colawhen our food comei started walking towards a tablefortunately, i fell over and my dish slipped with my hands and the food landed on a mans white shirti was frightened and unsure how to do next, but just then all i heard was “its ok” after the man disappeared into the restrooma few minute later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it fasti thought he was going to ask for his parents telephone numberinstead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said“buy yourself some new hamburgers”, then he walked away without even finish his food【参考答案】6.to celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and i went to(此处加a)fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca colawhen our food come(came)i started walking towards a tablefortunately(unfortunately), i fell over and my dish slipped with (off 或from) my hands and the food landed on a mans white shirti was frightened and unsure how (what)to do next, but just then all i heard was “its ok” after (before)the man disappeared into the restrooma few minute (minutes)later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it (去掉it)fasti thought he was going to ask for his (my) parents telephone numberinstead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said“buy yourself some new hambu