河北省高邑县高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选编（4）.doc

河北高邑县2016高考英语二轮书面表达选编（4）学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为日常生活中某件物品（如钢笔、书包、鞋子)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“my magic”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的创意。内容：1.说明设计理由 2.介绍新功能。注意:1.词数不少于120个； 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【考点】考察开放性作文【写作指导】本文属于开放性的作文，要求你想为日常生活中某件物品（如钢笔、书包、鞋子)设计添加新功能来参加科技创新大赛。本文的基本时态是一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称相结合。要点：1. 学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为钢笔设计添加新功能来参赛。2.钢笔里面加录音笔，可以在课堂上做广泛使用，可以把老师的课堂内容录下来课后复习巩固。添加mp3功能，休息时间可以听音也来放松等；3.介绍钢笔可以用作录音笔，用作mp3，收音机等。本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。【一句多译】钢笔可以用作录音笔在闲暇的时候还可以作为mp3。 the pen can serve as a tool recording what teachers say in class, used as mp3 to play music when we are free. served as a tool recording what teachers say in class, the pen can be used as mp3 to play music when we are free.【参考范文】（略）2016书面表达训练假设你将作为云阳中学高三毕业生代表，请根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用英文作一个告别演讲:1. 感谢家人，朋友和老师。可举例感谢老师（不用真名，一律使用mr. zheng, 并写出原因）。2. 回顾高中三年的生活。列举出你印象深刻的活动。 3. 展望未来。注意：开头与结尾已经给出，所写部分120字左右。 dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at yunyang senior high school graduation ceremony for the class of 2015! 【参考范文】dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at yunyang senior high school graduation ceremony for the class of 2015! first, let me thank all our families and friends for their love and support on behalf of the graduates. i also want to thank our diligent teachers for guiding us through to this moment. my personal thanks to mr zheng, you got me through math when i had given up hope. graduation is a time to go over enjoyable memories which have been made over the past three years. many events become so vivid in my mind at this moment, military training, soccer and basketball games. however, graduation is also a time to look forward to the future in front of us. no matter what you plan next, i hope you can go about it positively. each of you will create your own unique path. lets remember the saying “attitude determines altitude”. please always keep a smile on your face. finally, best wishes to the class of 2015. thank you very much.【广东省高三考前冲刺卷】 读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。some years ago，leaving the farm to work in the city，three brothers were employed by the same company and on the same pay.but three years later，they received different wages.so their father was confused and decided to pay a visit to the boss，who told him that he would let his sons explain for themselves.the three brothers were asked by the supervisor to go to the airport to get a cargo inventory at different times.jim，who received 500 dollars a month，got the information on the phone instead of going to the airport himself.frank，the 1,000 dollars a month brother with a list of more cargoes.george，the 1,500 dollars a month brother came back with detailed information and also did something extra without being told.写作内容1概括该故事的内容要点，该部分的词数大约30左右。2就“态度决定一切”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的词数大约120左右。 (1)你认为是什么导致三兄弟的薪酬差异；(2)你从这个故事得到什么启示； (3)你对“态度决定一切”如何理解；(4)举一对比事例说明不同的学习态度产生不同的结果。 写作要求 你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。_ 读写任务【参考范文】three brothers，who worked for the same company，received different wages due to their different attitudes towards their work，which shows right attitude is of great help to ones life.their different attitudes towards their work result in their different wages.from the story i can conclude that those who take positive attitude towards work will be rewarded.different attitudes lead to different results.take xiao hua as an example.he is my classmate.not only does he put his heart into study but he is also helpful both to teachers and students.so he has become a top student in our class，even in the grade.with his diligence and concentration，he is bound to succeed in entering his ideal university.however，xiao li，also my classmate，never cares about his study because he is addicted to playing games，and he turns a deaf ear to the teachers advice.as a result，he falls far behind others in his study.in my opinion，attitude is everything.no matter what you do，you must do it well even if you may fail many times.sooner or later you will be rewarded for your positive attitude towards your work or life.2016书面表达训练假如你是李明,你校教师mr. smith邀请你本周六上午去听关于美国历史的讲座，但你因故不能参加。请根据以下提示写一封邮件向mr. smith说明情况。1.表示歉意；2.说明理由：去火车站接来看你的母亲；3.表示遗憾：对美国历史很感兴趣，遗憾错过这次机会；4.希望得到讲座的录像(video)或课件(ppt),以便课下学习。注意：1.字数100字左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.书写整洁。dear mr. smith, _. yours sincerely, li ming【参考范文】dear mr. smith,im so sorry that i wont be able to attend the lecture on the american history this saturday morning, because my mother will come to see me that day. we havent seen each other for quite a long time and i have promised to meet her at the railway station, for she is not familiar with this city.as you know, im deeply interested in the american history, so its really a pity to miss the lecture. but i wonder if i could borrow the video or have a copy of the ppt. it would mean so much to me to watch the video or ppt and learn whats covered in your lecture.best wishes to you.yours sincerely, li ming【广东省高三考前冲刺卷】基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)假设你是李华，是广州白云中学的学生。请你围绕“构建和谐社会”的主题，用英语给全校学生写一封倡议书。写作内容主题构建和谐社会人与社会热爱祖国，关心家乡，积极参与学校活动人与人尊老爱幼，尊敬师长，团结同学，互相帮助，诚实守信人与自然节约能源，保护环境写作要求1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入句子总数。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，语篇连贯。build a harmonious societydear fellow students，our government is going to build a “harmonious society”_lets start right now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day，every hour，and every minute!li huafrom guangzhou baiyun high school基础写作【参考范文】build a harmonious societydear fellow students，our government is going to build a “harmonious s