写作中怎样使用复杂结构和高级词汇(学生卷).doc

写作中怎样使用复杂结构和高级词汇(学生卷)一|、 复杂结构: 1.使用适当的时态 2.适当的语态 3.使用不定式 4.使用过去分词5.使用V.+ing形式 6.使用名词性从句 7.使用状语从句 8.使用定语从句9.使用虚拟语气 10.使用强调句,倒装句,感叹句 11.使用并列句 一）、怎样运用复杂结构：1. 改变时态 The bell is ringing now. (一般) (高级)2. 改变语态 People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般) (高级)3. 使用不定式 He is so kind that he can help me. (一般) (高级)4. 使用过去分词 She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般) (高级) Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten . (一般) (高级)5. 使用v-ing形式 When he arrives please give me an e-mail. (一般) (高级) If the weather permits, Ill come tomorrow. (一般) (高级) Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般) (高级)6. 使用名词性从句 It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up. (一般) (高级) I happened to have met him. (一般) (高级) To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (一般) (高级)7. 使用状语从句 I wont believe what he says. (一般) (高级) If you come back before six oclock, you can go out. (一般) (高级) The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (一般) (高级)8. 使用定语从句 The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般) (高级) I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer at school. (一般) (高级)9. 使用虚拟语气 The ship didnt sink because there were the efforts of the captain. (一般) (高级) I wasnt invited to the party, so I didnt attend it. (一般) (高级)10. 使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句 Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920. (一般) (高级 Though Im weak, I will make the effort. (一般) (高级) We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well. (一般) (高级)11. 使用并列句 If you go through the gate, youll find the entrance to Bear Country. (一般) (高级) When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般) (高级) I got up late this morning. I didnt catch the early bus. (一般) (高级)二）、怎样运用高级词汇： When he heard she had died, he went pale with sorrow. (一般) (高级) She cant correctly pronounce the word. (一般) (高级) Who will be on duty today? (一般) (高级) As a result, the plan was a failure. (一般) (高级) She went to Austria in order to study music. (一般) (高级) Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. (一般) (高级) She doesnt like sports. (一般) . (高级) We had to go home. (一般) . (高级)三）、写作常见错误分析：1. 句子缺谓语1) The building like a match box. 2) He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom. 2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。 1) A worker of the farm lead us to the field.2) All the students like books that was written by Lu Xun.3.时态错误 1) When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to bed.2) What are you doing this time yesterday?4.词性混用 1) She enjoys study English.2) If anyone against the plan, please let me know.5.介词误用 1) In my surprise, he has got the first prize.2) He came here to attend the meeting by a new car.3) Dont read under the sun.6.冠词误用 1) We elected Li Hua the monitor of the Class Five.2) Once upon a time, there was an one-eyed lion.3) The history is actually a very interesting subject.7.名词的数混淆 1) It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing.2) There is always traffic jam.8.动词用法错误 1) Where are you come from?2) When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me.3) He didnt notice the teacher to come into the classroom.4) The accident was happened in 1999.9.习惯用法错误 1) The actor in this movie is very beautiful.2) I and My parents were working in the fields at that time.3) The reason is because he does not know what to do next.10. 句子之间的逻辑关系不清 误：It hit the old man down but the driver, a woman, didnt stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. The old man and I saw the cars number. Its AC864. The old man couldnt move, I decided to help him. 正：It hit the old man down but the driver, who was a woman, didnt stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. Fortunately, I saw the cars number. Its AC864. Noticing the old man couldnt move, I decided to help him.11.画蛇添足 、过多的长句使句子复杂化（语言不简洁） 修改前： A famous sportsman was giving a speech which was rather interesting. 修改后： A famous sportsman was giving an interesting speech.修改前 Nowadays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. The air pollution is becoming more and more serious which is caused by buses and cars. Whats more, so many rivers are polluted by dirty water which is from factory. In addition, sandstorm struck us now and then, from which we suffered a lot.修改后 Nowadays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. As a result, people have to suffer sandstorms now and then. Whats more, as buses and cars give off a lot of poisonous gases, the air is getting dirtier and dirtier. Moreover, there are many rivers polluted by dirty water from factories. The situation is becoming more and more serious. 修改前： As soon as came in, we heard some voice made by instruments. There were some students playing piano violin and so on .修改后： As soon as we came in, we heard a piece of beautiful music played by the students by different instruments, such as, piano, violin and so on.12.过于简单的句子使文章缺少逻辑性，可读性。修改前 Yesterday, there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy.修改后 Yesterday, a policeman stopped a carHonda at the corner of the street, because it nearly knocked down a boy who was riding a two-wheel bicycle on the sidewalk. 修改前 Suddenly, a car run quickly from the third street and turned to the west. The car didnt stop and hit the old man. The driver d