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限时测试(20)专题特训(短文改错)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。last week i went to visit to my former neighbor，mr.yang.he and i used to living next to each other for many years.about half a year ago，an order came which the old building，along with many other similar ones，were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street.so i had to move apart.mr.yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park.his new apartment is much big than before.the only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area.therefore，mr.yang doesnt seem to worry about the long distance.he says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.答案last week i went to visit my former neighbor，mr.yang.he and i used to livinglive next to each other for many years.about half a year ago，an order came whichthat the old building，along with many other similar ones，werewas going to be pulled down to make room for a main street.so iwe had to move apart.mr.yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park.his new apartment is much bigbigger than before.the only problem is that it tooktakes quite a long time to get to the downtown area.thereforehowever ，mr.yang doesnt seem to worry about the long distance.he says that a new subway line is to be built in a few yearyears and he is sure life will be better in the future.yesterday i went to the park.i happened to see a touched event.at that time，some people were boating of the lake.a happy family was taking photos when suddenly the girl falls off the boat into the water.the girl could swim and was struggling，so her parents cried out，“help! help！” it was obviously that they could not swim，either.hearing the cry，the young man immediately rushed to the lake.without taking away his clothes，he jumped into the water and swam towards the girl，that was already tired out.at last he had carried her to the bank.she were saved!答案yesterday i went to the park.i happened to see a touchedtouching event.at that time，some people were boating ofon the lake.a happy family was taking photos when suddenly the girl fallsfell off the boat into the water.the girl could not couldcouldnt swim and was struggling，so her parents cried out，“help! help！” it was obviouslyobvious that they could not swim，either.hearing the cry，thea young man immediately rushed to the lake.without taking awayoff his clothes，he jumped into the water and swam towards the girl，thatwho was already tired out.at last he carried her to the bank.she werewas saved!my friendship with yang qing began when we meet in our schools photo club.from then on we became good friend.we had common interest in basketball and often shared their experience about photographing.on weekends we rode to play the basketball together.now in senior 3，we seldom play together，or still keep in touch and encourage each other.with the entrance exam comes near，im worried about what my life will like as we may go to different universities.but now what doesnt worry me any more.because i know just as the old saying goes: truly friendship will always live on no matter where far apart we are.答案my friendship with yang qing began when we meetmet in our schools photo club.from then on we became good friendfriends .we had common interest in basketball and often shared theirour experience about photographing.on weekends we rode to play basketball together.now in senior 3，we seldom play together，orbut still keep in touch and encourage each other.with the entrance exam comescoming near，im worried about what my life will be like as we may go to different universities.but now whatit doesnt worry me any more.because i know just as the old saying goes: trulytrue friendship will always live on no matter wherehow far apart we are.my neighbors children love playing hideandseek as other children do，but everybody had imagined the game they played themselves last week would be reported in the local newspaper.one afternoon，they are playing at the street corner.paul，only five year old，hid and locked himself in a mailbox in accident.his sister，nancy，heard his cries and realized what had happened，so she immediately asked a mailman open the metal door.paul was free，but he had such heavy a scare that he could not stop cry.the mailman told him that next time he wanted to hide in a mailbox，he should remember to put the stamp on himself.when he heard that，paul burst into laughing.答案my neighbors children love playing hideandseek as other children do，but everybodynobody had imagined the game they played last week would be reported in the local newspaper.one afternoon，they arewere playing at the street corner.paul，only five yearyears old，hid and locked himself in a mailbox inby accident.his sister，nancy，heard his cries and realized what had happened，so she immediately asked a mailman to open the metal door.paul was free，but he had suchso heavy a scare that he could not stop crycrying .the mailman told him that next time he wanted to hide in a mailbox，he should remember to put thea stamp on himself.when he heard that，paul burst intoout laughinglaughter .in order to make best of learning materials，the students union of our school is planning an activity.the schoolleavers are called on to give away our used books，newspapers or magazines to the student in the lower grades.the idea，that is intended to promote friendship and encourage a lowcarbon lifestyle，are highly praised and supported by the teachers and students alike.the activity will be hold on the first floor of the school library and so it will last eleven days，from june 10 to 20.as a student，i am strong for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful.i hope that this kind of activity would continue every year for the future.答案in order to make the best of learning materials，the students union of our school is planning an activity.the schoolleavers are called on to give away ourtheir used books，newspapers or magazines to the studentstudents in the lower grades.the idea，thatwhich is intended to promote friendship and encourage a lowcarbon lifestyle，areis highly praised and supported by the teachers and students alike.the activity will be holdheld on the first floor of the school library and it will last eleven days，from june 10 to 20.as a student，i am strongstrongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful.i hope that this kind of activity wouldwill continue every year forin the future.last evening，i went to a teahouse with my best friends susan.before the tea was serving，we talked to each other happily.when the waiter came to us with the tea，we didnt see him.unfortunately，susan raises her hand to comb her hair just when the waiter bent to put the plate on the table.her hand hit on the cup，and the tea was spattered(溅洒) on her trousers.in my surprise，instead complaining，susan smiled，“so lucky that its not on my white shirt，and i cant even clean it.” his words were very inspired.we couldnt foresee what would happen，but looking at it in a positive way could make we always happy.答案last evening，i went to a teahouse with my best friendsfriend susan.before the tea was servingserved ，we talked to each other happily.when the waiter came to us with the tea，we didnt see him.unfortunately，susan raisesraised her hand to comb her hair just when the waiter bent to put the plate on the table.her hand hit the cup，and the tea was spattered(溅洒) on her trousers.into my surprise，insteadof complaining，susan smiled，“so lucky that its not on my white shirt，andor i cant even clean it.” hisher words were very inspiredinspiring .we couldnt foresee what would happen，but looking at it in a positive way could make weus always happy.i am sad to hear of mr tian will lose his job for ever.he had taught me three years before i was took out of the mountains.i still remember him carry us on his back across the river.and he has been an only teacher in the school ever since i could remember.yet，the government wants he to go home now.thats to say，they dont allow him to be a teacher any longer.why? thats unfair of all the teachers like mr tian.cities have many good teachers，and few wants to work in a remote mountain school.the government has once sent some teachers there，but nobody of them stayed.what will happen to the little friends there once mr tian away?i love mr tian.best wishes to him!答案i am sad to hear ofthat mr tian will lose his job for ever.he had taught me three years before i was tooktaken out of the mountains.i still remember him carrycarrying us on his back across the river.and he has been anthe only teacher in the school ever since i could remember.yet，the government wants hehim to go home now.thats to say，they dont allow him to be a teacher any longer.why? thats unfair offor all the teachers like mr tian.cities have many good teachers，andbut few wants to work in a remote mountain school.the government hashad once sent some teachers there，but nobodynone of them stayed.what will happen to the little friends there once mr tian is away?i love mr tian.best wishes to him!when we were in primary school，we were required to read english every morning.now we are college students，and keep reading english every morning is still very much important.for one thing，it is wellknown that our memory in the morning is better than any other period of the day.otherwise，reading english in the morning is definitely good for us to remember what we had learned.in addition，keeping reading english every morning is a good way to practice your oral english，correct our pronunciations and foster our sense of language.for another，reading english in the morning is a good start for a new day.if we read english in the morning，we have high enthusiasm to do other things.in short，it is still important to read english every morning as though we are in universities，especially for those who are english major.答案when we were in primary school，we were required to read english every morning.now we are college students，and keepkeeping reading english every morning is still very important.for one thing，it is wellknown that our memory in the morning is better than any other period of the day.otherwisetherefore ，reading english in the morning is definitely good for us to remember what we hadhave learned.in addition，keeping reading english every morning is a good way to practice yourour oral english，correct our pronunciationspronunciation and foster our sense of language.for another，reading english in the morning is a good start forof a new day.if we read english in the morning，we will have high enthusiasm to do other things.in short，it is still important to read english every morning aseven though we are in universities，especially for those who are english majormajors .nowadays，there is a increasing number of people joining in the activities of volunteering.its wellknown that volunteering jobs are making contribution to society with something in return.its as the leifeng spirit.however，knowing this，there are still many people would like to devote themselves in this trend.for instance，the 2014 world cup has such many volunteers.they make lots of contributions to the success of the world cup.moreover，we can often see many students go to visit the old to bring warmth to them.even though some peoples career is a volunteer.they are ready to helping others.although the volunteers are much more common，we still need to thank they for devoting themselves to society.答案nowadays，there is aan increasing number of people joining in the activities of volunteering.its wellknown that volunteering jobs are making contributioncontributions to society with somethingnothing in return.its aslike the leifeng spirit.however，knowing this，there are still many people who/that would like to devote themselves in this trend.for instance，the 2014 world cup has suchso many volunteers.they makemade lots of contributions to the success of the world cup.moreover，we can often see many students go to visit the old to bring warmth to them.even some peoples career is a volunteer.they are ready to helpinghelp others.although the volunteers are much more common，we still need to thank theythem for devoting themselves to society.recently the issue of students study has brought to public attention.students are anxious about what to improve their scores.some work very hard.they spend all their time in study.they do nothing except to study.as far as im concerned，it is not a good way to study.alternating work with rest was the best way to study well.students should try their best to learn knowledges as francis bacon said，“knowledge is power”therefore，students should have other recreational activities to relax themselves，because people can do things more efficient after relaxing themselves.whats more，people can obtain knowledge from many sources besides books，that is beneficial for study.thus，combining exertion and rest are the best to study.答案recently the issue of students study has been brought to public attention.students are anxious about whathow to improve their scores.some work very hard.they spend all their time inon study.they do nothing except study.as far as im concerned，it is not a good way to study.alternating work with rest wasis the best way to study well.students should try their best to learn knowledgesknowledge as francis bacon said，“knowledge is power”thereforehowever ，students should have other recreational activities to relax themselves，because people can do things more efficientefficiently after relaxing themselves.whats more，people can obtain knowledge from many sources besides books，thatwhich is beneficial for study.thus，combining exertion and rest areis the best to study.what is your favorite kind of music? do you like jazz，popular music，classical music，folk songs，blues，and so on? in high school i took one course calling music appreciation which i great enjoyed.this was not only to learn how to play a specific instrument but learn how to read and listen to music as an art form.we read the stories about the life of many composers and the history of the music instruments themselves.sometimes we listen to tapes in the language laboratory or concerts.music is sometimes called an universal language.a composer whom cannot speak a single word of our language can make us feel joy and pride，excitement and despair，peace and mystery along his music.答案what is your favorite kind of music? do you like jazz，popular music，classical music，folk songs，blues，and so on? in high school i took one course callingcalled music appreciation which i greatgreatly enjoyed.this was not to learn how to play a specific instrument but to learn how to read and listen to music as an art form.we read the stories about the lifelives of many composers and the history of the musicmusical instruments themselves.sometimes we listenlistened to tapes in the language laboratory or concerts.music is sometimes called ana universal lan