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e单元短文改错目录e单元短文改错1e1 短文改错记叙文1e2 短文改错应用文9e3 短文改错议论文12e4 短文改错说明文15 e1 短文改错记叙文【英语卷解析2015届河北省唐山一中高三上学期期中考试（201411）】第三节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 today is sunday. the sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. at about 9:00 a.m., i go to the bookstore with my friends. there was a lot of new books. i didnt know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. at 10:00, we went to cinema. the film was called the earthquake of tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. it took us about two hours to see it. having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. some of my friends even burst into tear. thats a really wonderful film. it is very worth seeing. what a happy day! i hope tomorrow i will be even happier.【答案】【知识点】e1 短文改错记叙文【文章综述】 本文讲述作者一天的生活 【答案解析】1. does改为is the sky is full of sunshine,这里用的is，所以后面也用is2. go改为went 表示过去发生的事，故用一般过去时，所以go改为went3. was改为were 根据a lot of new books，谓语动词用复数，所以was改为were 4. what改为which句意：我不知道要买哪一本，所以what改为which5. cinema前加the go to the cinema是固定用法，意思是去了电影院 6. but改为and 这里表示并列关系，所以but改为and7.去掉been 看电影”和其逻辑主语“每个人”是主动关系，所以用现在分词的主动式。8. moving改为moved -ing形式修饰物，-ed形式修饰人，这里主语是everyone，所以moving 改为moved 9. tear改为tears burst into tears是固定用法，意思是突然大哭起来 10. very改为well be well worth doing是固定用法，意思是值得做某事。【英语卷(解析)2015届辽宁省沈阳二中高三上学期期中考试（201411）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分,满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除；把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。dear mary,our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. however, many families have got car of their own. the peoples life here has become rich or colorful. people can enjoy themselves travelling on the holiday. to my delighted, i can taste delicious food of different countries. and now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for i can email you in my office. yours, christine【答案】【知识点】e1 短文改错记叙文【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。【答案解析】1.hadhas。 根据句中in the past 5 years是与现在完成时连用的时间状语，故hadhas。2. thatwhich that前有逗号，说明是非限制性定语从句，代表主句所表述的这件事只能用which引导。3. have后加been 该句的主语many overpasses是set up的动作承受者，故have后加been。4. besides/moreover/furthermore/additionally 根据前后句的关系修改，它们之间是递进关系，故改为besides/moreover/furthermore/additionally。5.carcars或car前加a 单数可数名词不可单独使用，故car改为cars或者car前加不定冠词a。6. orand rich和colourful是并列关系，故orand。7.the去掉。 on holiday在度假，固定短语，故去掉the。8.delighteddelight。 to ones delight令某人高兴的是，to为介词，ones为形容词性物主代词，故应用delight的名词形式。9. easyeasier 此处与下文的有了email的联系方式相比较，应改为easier。10. keep后加in。keep in touch with保持联系，为固定短语，故keep后加in。【英语卷（解析）2015届辽宁师大附中高三上学期期中考试（201411）】第五部分： 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）patience is of great importance in our daily life. once i waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. both upset and annoyed, i decided to walkon feet. but no sooner had i left when the bus arrived. i thought if i had waited for one more minute, i would have caught it. if i chose to take a next bus, i would have to wait for other 30 minutes. only then do i realize my problem. being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. now whenever i am close to lose my patience, ill think of this experience.【答案】【知识点】e1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】1. waited 和 a 之间加for; wait for等待2. past passed;minitues主语，需要动词作谓语.3. feet foot;固定搭配“步行”walk on foot4. whenthan;固定搭配no soonerthan 一就5. a the; 下一辆车 ，特指6. other another other 别的，其他的；another另一个，再一个，我还得再等一个30分钟。7. do did;only位于句首，句子半倒装，then要用一般过去时，借助助动词did。8. possible possibly;要用副词修饰动词。9. 去掉it;all the effort that we have put it in.这是一个定语从句，先行词effort，故从句中不能再出现。10. lose losing be close to 接近，to为介词,后面跟动词ing。【英语卷（解析）2015届宁夏银川一中高三第三次月考（201410）】第一节：短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。 two years before, i traveled to brazil and i rented for a car. unfortunate, i had an accident and hit another car, and i needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. i called my parents, so i did not tell them what had happened. i knew that they will be worried about myself because i was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. therefore, i told them interested stories and how i was enjoying brazil. as a result, nobody knew truth. i still think that it was the right thing to do.【答案】【知识点】e1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】two years before, i traveled to brazil and i rented for a car. unfortunate, i had an accident and ago unfortunatelyhit another car, and i needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week . i called my parents, so i weeks butdid not tell them what had happened . i knew that they will be worried about myself because i would mewas so farther away , and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. therefore , i told them farinterested stories and how i was enjoying brazil. as a result , nobody knew truth. i still thinkinteresting thethat it was the right thing to do .1. before 在.前, 引导的是时间状语从句，这里只是说“两年前”用ago。2.rent 及物动词，后面直接跟物做宾语。 rent sth. 租某物3. 用副词来对整个句子进行修饰或说明，因此，第二句开头处的ufortunate应改为副词unfortunately.4. week 是可数名词，可数名词被two修饰，要用复数。5. 根据句意：我打了电话给父母，但没有告诉发生的车祸。因此，把连词so改成but。6. 宾语从句的时态应该和主句保持一致。主句用一般过去时，宾语从句也应该用一般过去时，把will该为would。7. be worried about sb. 介词后要用人称代词的宾格。8. so farther away中的farther应改为far，因为此处不存在比较。9. “给父母讲有趣的故事”，因此要把interested改为interesting。牢记-ing修饰物，-ed修饰人。10. 因此，没有人知道真相。这里是特指，要用the truth。【英语卷（解析）2015届浙江省重点中学协作体高三第一次适应性测试（201411）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。i am glad to hear of you again. you want to know that everything is going in our school. in shortly, all has been improving since the school had began to carry on new policies. in the past,teachers always keep on explaining the points in class. our students just listened and took note.but now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising by the teachers or ourselves. before class, we enjoy different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. for example, we can read what we are interested in. we can go to the library or surf internet for various kinds of information. we are now masters of study, and we are happy.【答案】【知识点】e1短文改错记叙文【思路点拨】此题考察的内容大多数是基础知识，一般不会太难。做此题需要注意：按要求改；确定了再做改动；不会出现一个词改成多个词或多个词改成一个词；需要耐心反复阅读等。考查的内容从词性角度来看：名词的单复数；动词的时态、语态，主谓一致，非谓语动词形式等；冠词和介词的有无及使用错误；形容词和副词的转换；人称代词的单复数或使用混乱，替代词、指示代词的使用错误及其他一些情况，要让学生了解这些考点，平时加强基础知识的掌握，考前练习几道试题找感觉，一般能顺利完成这个题型。【答案解析】i am glad to hear of you again. you want to know that everything is going in our from howschool. in shortly , all has been improving since the school had began to carry on new shortpolicies. in the past, teachers always keep on explaining the points in class. our students kept wejust listened and took note . but now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising notes raisedby the teachers or ourselves. before class, we enjoy different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. for afterexample, we can read what we are interested in. we can go to the library or surf internet for thevarious kinds of information. we are now masters of study, and we are happy. 【英语卷（解析）2015届四川省绵阳南山实验高中高三一诊模拟考试（201410）】第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。dear manager, im one of your customer. the day before yesterday i bought a walkman in yourshop. before i left, i do check it carefully and everything was all right. when i got home, therefore, i found a fault with it. the problem is what the “play” doesnt work at all. probable its not your fault and so is mine. anyhow, i cant solve the problem in person. you see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn english and i cannot waitfor too long before this problem is solved. hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter. hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time! your sincerely, li hua【答案】【知识点】e1 短文改错记叙文【文章综述】本文讲述顾客对于购买的随身听有问题的投诉。 【答案解析】1. customer-customers 考查名词的复数形式。one of 名词复数形式。2.dodid 考查动词的时态。句意：当我离开时，我仔细检查，一切都好。left用一般过去时，与其保持一致。3.thereforehowever 考查副词。句意：然而我发现一个问题。4.what -that 考查表语从句。句意：问题是，这个播放键不管用。表语从句不缺少主干成分，用that来引导。5.probableprobably 考查副词。句意：不可能是你的错误，也不是我的错误。副词来修饰整个句子。6. soneither 考查否定词。句意：不可能是你的错误，也不是我的错误7.usefuluse 考查固定结构。be of 名词 等于be adj ,故用use.8.for去掉 考查动词短语。句意：在这个问题解决之前我等了太久。wait for sth ,等待某人/某物，没有宾语，故去掉for9. accept 考查动词辨析。句意：当你收到这封信时，希望能尽快处理这个问题， accept 表示主观接受。receive表示客观接受。10.offrom 考查动词短语辨析。hear of 听说。hear from收到某人来信。【英语卷（解析）2015届山西省太原五中高三10月月考（201410）】第一节 完型填空（共20小题；每小题2分，满分40分）阅读下面短文， 从短文后所给各题的四个选项（a、b、c和d）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。 jazzy is a lovely pug(哈巴狗) who always seems to be smiling. you cant help but 41when you look at jazzy now, because you would never guess the horrible situation she was rescued from and the 42 this little dog had. jazzy was taken from her 43 owners, who were immediately 44 with animal cruelty. why? because neighbors had 45 seeing little jazzyy moving around her back yard with two broken front legs. her owners, who were supposed to 46 her most, did absolutely nothing about it. they had never sought any kind of 47 for poor jazzy. nobody knew how it 48 and it was believed that she was hit by a car, or that someone had done this to her. 49 jazzys cruel owners didnt take her to the veterinarian, her condition went from bad to worse. over time her front right leg 50 loosely, and her left leg was permanently bent at a sharp angle. the pain must have been astonishing. she moved around like a baby seal. she needed 51 . in a los angeles animal shelter, things got even 52 . the shelter could not provide the costly operations that could be 53 to restore jazzys ability to 54 and lead a normal life, and it was impossible to find a family who would be able to 55 a dog in this condition. the difficult 56 was made to euthanize（使安乐死）sweet jazzy. all 57 was lost. then a miracle happened. a volunteer from dogs without borders saw jazzy. jazzy was pulled out of the 58 and rescuers got busy working on a plan to ensure that jazzy would get treatment. for months, dogs without borders cared for jazzy, while 59 enough money for her operations. donations came in. finally in december 2013 the money was enough and it was time to get her operations 60 ! by the spring of 2014, jazzy had fully recovered.41.a. complainb. forgive c. celebrate d. laugh42.a. painb. shock c. happiness d. responsibility43.a. lazyb. original c. angry d. new44.a. combinedb. charged c. compared d. provided45.a. reportedb. imagined c. regretted d. avoided46.a. care forb. depend on c. look ford. talk about47.a. foodb. contactc. treatment d. information 48.a. fellb. felt c. improved d. happened49.a. ifb. until c. although d. since50.a. steppedb. stood c. hung d. waved51.a. instructionb.encouragementc. help d. discipline52.a. harderb. worse c. safer d. clearer53.a. preventedb. required c. released d. checked54.a. breatheb. bark c. walk d. listen55.a. adoptb. buy c. watchd. catch56.a. promiseb. decisionc. appointmentd. experiment57.a. hopeb. wealthc. medicine d. connection58.a. hospital b. yard c. shelter d. home59.a. borrowingb. savingc. earning d. raising60.a. correctedb. done c. fed d. developed【答案】【知识点】e1 短文改错记叙文【文章综述】文章讲述了志愿者为一只遭受苦难的小狗筹钱做手术的事。【答案解析】41.d a. complain 抱怨b. forgive原谅c. celebrate 庆祝d. laugh笑；根据上文的smiling,可知，这里是忍不住发笑。42.a a. pain疼痛b. shock 震惊c. happiness 幸福d. responsibility责任；你不能想象它被救出时的可怕情况，也不能想象它所遭受的痛苦。43.b a. lazy懒惰的b. original 最初的c. angry 生气的d. new新的；它被原来的主人带走。44.b a. combinedb. charged 要价，谴责 c. compared 与.比较d. provided提供；be charged with 被谴责45.a a. reported报道；报告b. imagined 想象c. regretted 后悔d. avoided避免；因为他的邻居报告说看到它拖着两条受伤的腿在后院转。46.a a. care for关心b. depend on依靠，依赖c. look for寻找d. talk about谈论；它的主人应该很关心它。47.c a. food食物b. contactc. treatment对待，治疗d. information 信息；他们也没有给可怜的jaccy任何治疗。48.d a. fell掉b. felt 感觉c. improved 提高 d. happened发生；没有人知道是怎样发生的。49.d a. if如果b. until 直到.c. although 尽管d. since因为；因为它的主人没有带它去看兽医，他的情况越来越糟糕。50.c a. stepped迈入b. stood 站 c. hung 挂着d. waved挥手；它的右前腿松松垮垮地挂在前面，左脚像直角一样弯曲着。51.c a. instruction说明b.encouragement鼓励c. help 帮助d. discipline纪律；它需要帮助。52.b a. harder努力b. worse 糟糕的 c. safer更安全 d. clearer更清楚；在洛杉矶的一个动物收容所里，事情变得更糟了。53.b a. prevented阻止b. required 需要 c. released 释放d. checked检查；be required to do sth.被要求做某事 收容所里不能按照要求提供昂贵的手术来恢复它的行走能力。54.c a. breathe呼吸b. bark 咬 c. walk 步行 d. listen听；上文提到的是它的腿。55.a a. adopt收养b. buy 买c. watch看d. catch抓住；找到一个好家庭是不太可能的。56.b a. promise许诺b. decision决定c. appointment约会d. experiment实验；给他注射安乐死是个很难的决定。57.a a. hope希望b. wealth财富c. medicine 药d. connection联系；没有希望了。58.c a. hospital 医院 b. yard院子c. shelter 避难所d. home家；根据上文提到in a los angeles animal shelter。59.d a. borrowing借b. saving节省c. earning 挣d. raising raise money筹钱60.b a. corrected改正b. done 做 c. fed 喂 d. developed发展；do operation做手术e2 短文改错应用文【英语卷(解析)2015届西藏拉萨中学高三上学期第二次月考（期中考试）（201411）】第一节短文改错（共10 小题。 每小题1分， 满分10分）答题要求增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（）， 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改： 在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。dear jim, i am so exciting that you will come to china. i will free from december 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. ill meet you at the airport and then you will take no.8 bus for my home. you worry about the weather here in your email. in fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. it isnt very cold, but you neednt bring many clothes with you. during your stay here, ill take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. i am sure we will have greatly fun together.im looking forward to meeting you soon.yours john【答案】【知识点】e2 短文改错应用文 【思路点拨】短文改错中的错误都是学生们经常犯的错误，修改时应考虑语法和词法知识，如动词、名词、形容词等形式的变化等。【答案解析】1.excitingexcitedexcited感到兴奋的，i做主语，应用该形式。2.will freewill be free free此处是形容词，will后应加be，构成系表结构。3.have a plentyhave plentyplenty of足够的，充足的，为固定短语，不加冠词。4.youwe前文是i，碰头见面一起去，you应改为we。5.take no 8 fortake no 8 totake a bus to sp乘公共汽车去哪里6.worry aboutworried about此处worry的动作发生在过去，worry改为worried。7.different from itdifferent from thatthat代指前文的the weather的同类，“你城市的天气”8.butand/or but前后是并列关系，故将but改为and或then。9.places of interestsplaces of interestplaces of interest名胜，其中的interest是不可数名词，不可用复数形式。10.greatlygreat have great fun玩地高兴，great为形容词，作fun的定语。【英语卷(解析)2015届贵州省遵义航天高级中学高三上学期第三次模拟考试（201411）】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。dear miss li, im one of your student in class six, senior three. nowadays i meet a great many difficulties when studied english. to begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. in addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my english writing seriously. and my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. would you provide me with some effectively approaches? secondly, i believe that i will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. there is no doubt whether i will achieve great progress in english learning with your assistance.thank you.yours,wang min【答案】【知识点】e2 短文改错应用文 【思路点拨】短文改错中的错误都是学生们经常犯的错误，修改时应考虑语法和词法知识，如动词、名词、形容词等形式的变化等。【答案解析】1.studentstudents one of + 限定词 + 名词复数，故student改为students。2.studiedstudying when后应加从句或分词，studied前没有主语，应将其改为现在分词短语结构。3.offor 根据句型it is difficult for sb to do sth修改。4.thatwhich that前有逗号，饮食非限制定语从句，故that应该为which。5.areis 主语为performance，谓语动词必须用单三形式。6.youi 根据前文判断you应改为i。7.effectivelyeffective 修饰名词approaches应用形容词形式。8.good前加a have a good command of熟练掌握。故good前需加a。9.w