【创新设计 简易通】（江苏专用）高考英语二轮复习 第二部分 阅读理解专题专练 专题20 第3讲 (半)开放类书面表达体验高考（1）.doc

第三部分写 作专题二十书面表达第三讲(半)开放类书面表达passage 1(2013北京)请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。you are discussing the following picture with your english friend jim.now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so. 【思路点拨】图画的寓意：梦想不等于现实。【范文赏读】i think the picture is telling us that there is usually a difference between ones dream and reality.people need to learn to face it.everyone has his dream.however，it is not so easy for people to realize their dreams every time.just like the man in the picture，instead of the big fish he wishes for，he actually catches a small one.in my opinion，people need to learn to accept the reality and keep on trying.with another try，they may gain what they dream of.【亮点揭示】作者开门见山，直抒胸臆，观点明确，激励人生斗志，内容连贯，行文流畅，句式优美，值得学习。passage 2(2013浙江)请以“one thing im proud of”为题，用英语写一篇100120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1记述事情经过；2简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。注意：文章的标题已给出(不计词数)。one thing im proud of 【思路点拨】从文章体裁分析，这是较典型的开放式记叙文写作，主要让考生就“one thing im proud of”展开叙述，同时写出自豪的原因或从中得到的启示。所以考生要根据自己的经历，先详细叙述事件经过，然后补充一定的自我原因剖析或对此的看法和评述等。文章可以从三方面入手来写；第一部分简要叙述自豪的事情；第二部分重点讲述事件的经过，可以按照事件发展的顺序来写；第三部分则要说明自豪的理由或从中得到的启示。【范文赏读】one thing im proud ofi still remember how i became a good table tennis player.the first day i went to high school，i saw some of my classmates playing table tennis.amazed at how skillful they were，i was determined to be just as good.later on，i often watched them carefully to learn their techniques.then i kept practising until i became confident enough to challenge the good players.at the end of the term i became one of the best players in my class.i am really proud of this experience，because it helps me realise that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work.it also helps me better understand the proverb “practice makes perfect”【亮点揭示】本文的好词好句很丰富，如remember，amazed at，be determined to do，learn their techniques，keep practising，at the end of，be proud of，fulfil ones potential，achieve ones goals等。句式多样，如名词性从句、状语从句、非谓语动词结构等。passage 3(2013湖北)请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。we all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”， but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.注意：1.无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；2除诗歌外，文体不限；3词数120左右。 【思路点拨】这是一篇较开放的作文，但文章主题很明确，就是“话可以伤人”，以此展开文章的话题，可写成议论文，也可以写成夹叙夹议文体。【范文赏读】my deskmate admires my fluent english very much and i usually feel encouraged by his compliments.one day, when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. i volunteered to do it by saying “my deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.”hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmates face turned red. after class，i learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadnt been helped by others. my mindless words must have hurt him deeply.not until then did i realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways. we should avoid hurting others if we cant always be encouraging when we speak.【亮点揭示】文篇行文流畅，语言地道，句式多变灵活，如：whose引导的定语从句；hearing this.分词短语，not until then did i realize.倒装句式等。passage 4(2012浙江卷)你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句(quote)并相互交流，以下是某同学摘录的句子：“your future depends on many things，but mostly on you”。请按下列要求用英语写一篇100120左右的短文：1针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；2举例说明理由；注意：短文的开头已给出(不计词数)。in the english reading week，one of my classmates recommended a quote to us，which goes like this：“your future depends on many things，but mostly on you.” .【范文赏读】in the english reading week，one of my classmates recommended a quote to us，which goes like this：“your future depends on many things，but mostly on you.”i cant agree more with this view.its true that our future is determined by many things，such as opportunities and help from others，but our own attitude，determination，and hard work play a more important role.in other words，we are the master of our own future.take abraham lincoln，for example.he was born in a poor family，and only received a limited education in his childhood.yet through his painstaking efforts，he changed not only his own fate but also the history of america.even to this day，lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world.therefore，i firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.passage 5(2011安徽卷)体裁：议论文某校英文报开辟了一个专栏：experience。本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“my approach to difficulties in learning”为题，用英语写一篇短文。谈谈自己的一些做法。注意：1.词数100左右；2短文中不能出现本人相关信息。 【范文赏读】my approach to difficulties in learningas high school students，we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning.everyone has their own way to deal with them.here i would like to share mine.when i am faced with a difficulty，i usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages.in this way，i can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.however，when it is something beyond my competence，i turn to my classmates or teachers for help.sometimes i also ask my parents for advice.as a result，i have made steady progress in my studies.passage 6(2011湖北卷)体裁：应用文请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork.teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group，and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.注意：1.无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；2除诗歌外，文体不限；3内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；4文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；5词数为100左右。 【范文赏读】years of school life has taught me a lot of things，of which teamwork is the most important for me.in fact，i didnt realize its importance until i was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school.at first，i did most of the duties myself while other students cared little about class activities.as a result，i was tir