山东省潍坊市高考英语课外训练（5）(1).doc

山东省潍坊市2014高考英语课外训练（5）及答案短文改错now i have taken more than ten years at school. as 63. _a child，i regarded my school a beautiful garden. i 64. _went to school happily and excitedly with a small bag. time flew very fast. now im studying at a senior 65. _middle school. every day morning i go to school early. 66. _in the evening， i do a lot of exercises， just like a farmer 67. _working hard， expect a good harvest. during breaks 68. _between class， i often go out to enjoy myself. im 69. _sure ill never forget wonderful time i spent at school. 70. _【参考答案】63.takenbeen 64.school后加as 65.flewflies 66.去掉day67. 68. expectexpecting 69. classclasses 70. wonderful后加the短文改错-12013新课标i 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。i hardly remember my grandmother. she used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. i was only four when she passes away. she is just a distant memory for me now.i remember my grandfather very much. he was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. he had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. in a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. however, he was the gentlest man i have never known.i hardly remember my grandmother. she used to holding me on her knees and sing hold old songs. i was only four when she passes away. she is just a distant memory for me passed now.i remember my grandfather very much. he was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard well/clearly shouldersthat turned from black toward gray over the years. he had a deep voice, which set himself to/ into himapart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. in a fact, he even andscared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. when however, he was the gentlest man i have never known. ever (乌鲁木齐三诊)rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. in my mind，it is real positive in our life. on one hand，it is great exercise. it not only build up our strength and endurance and it also helps increase our balance and determination. on the other hands, it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. for those of them who spend our days outside working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshed. for conclusion, it is a good to go climbing at least once a month. working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.答案：rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. in my mind，it is positive in our life. on one hand，it is great exercise. it not only up our strength and endurance it also helps increase our balance and determination. on the other ， it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. for those of who spend our days working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite . conclusion, it is good to go climbing at least once a month. working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.短文改错-1i am worker at the tap water company. i find that 76._people were becoming more and more careful about 77._health .if the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78._and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79._fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80._protection of water resources .for the sake of our 81._health ,we should take good care our water resources 82._and environment .there is a saying “whether we do 83._not careful protect our environment the last drops 84._of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85._【参考答案-】改错:i am worker at the tap water company. i find that 76._a _people were becoming more and more careful about 77._are_health .if the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78._appears_and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79._or_fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80._unfortunately_protection of water resources .for the sake of our 81._ _health ,we should take good care our water resources 82._of_and environment .there is a saying “whether we do 83._if_not careful protect our environment the last drops 84._careful_of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85. them 短文改错i used to love science classall of them1. _biology, chemistry ,geography, physics. i think i 2. _liked those classes because i felt that it helped me 3. _understand what the world works. for example, when4. _i was a child , the rain was a mystery (奥秘). in one5. _class, i learned it rained. i think science classes 6. _clear up mysteries. but then there is always more 7. _mysteries look into. what was my least favorite class? 8. _that was maths. after learn the basics of the subject, 9. _nothing else seemed very practically to me . i never 10._saw how i could use it in my daily life.答案及解析1. class 改为 classes。class 为可数名词， 根据下文， 这里 class 为复数， 故改为 classes。2. 此行无错。3. it 改为 they。这里指代上文的 those classes。4. what 改为 how。work 此处为不及物动词， 不可用连接代词 what 作宾语， 只可用连接副词 how 作状语。5. 删去 rain 前的 the。此处 rain 为泛指。6. it 前加 why。根据上下文逻辑， 此处意为“在课上， 我明白了天为什么会下雨”。7. is 改为 are。8. look 前加 to。需用不定式作定语。9. learn 改为 learning。此处 after 为介词， 后需用动名词作宾语。10. practically 改为 practical。seem 在此句中作系动词， 其后应用形容词作表语。短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 although all the students seem very happily at our school, as 66_far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful67_if the school could be decorated. we students thought the school68_looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in69_a rainy day. we would be much happier and are able to study70_better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, 71_photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons72_and enrich our lives. original art work are too expensive, but 73_unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. using only a74_little money, it can make our school a nicer place. 75_参考答案、短文改错66. happilyhappy 67. we后加are 68. thoughtthink69. inon 70 去are或arebe 71.正确 72.thatwhich73.workworks 74. unlessif 75. itwe（*）smoking which is a widespread habit even among school children.76. the number of young smokers are increasing. it is reported that77. over two-fifth of the students in a certain school smoke, and78. some of whom even steal money to buy cigarettes. this is terrible. 79. as we all know, smoking is harmful to our health. so its80. even harmful to middle school students for it does great harm not81. only to their health but also for their mind. middle school students82. are future builders of the country. they should spend their time83. learning useful knowledges. so its really time that these young84. smokers made up their minds give up smoking. 85. 【参考答案】(五)76去掉which 77.are is 78. two- fifth two-fifths 79. whom them 80.so but 81. harmful more 82.for to83. 84.knowledges knowledge 85. minds to 短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2