河北省衡水市2018届高三英语专项练习专题十一短文改错说明类专练.docx

专题十一短文改错说明类专练考试范围：xxx；考试时间：100分钟；命题人：xxx学校：_姓名：_班级：_考号：_ 题号一二总分得分注意事项：1、答题前填写好自己的姓名、班级、考号等信息 2、请将答案正确填写在答题卡上 第1卷 评卷人得分一、语法填空1、阅读下面材料,在空白处填入恰当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。 Sweet wormwood (青蒿) is a common plant in China, it has the power to cure the deadly disease called malaria (疟疾). Tu Youyou(be) the woman who uses the plants special power to save millions of lives. The Chinese scientist won a Nobel Prize because of her great contribution. On October 5, Tu was awarded the 2015 Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine. She shared the prize with two other scientists from the US and Japan. Tu is the first native Chinese person(receive) a Nobel Prize in natural sciences. Tu was modest about receiving the award:“Its a success for the whole research team.”She also thinksis scientists duty to fight for the health of all humans. When Tu joined the national research team to find the medicinecould fight against malaria in the 1960s and 1970s, things were hard. The team didnt have advanced equipment back then. Tu used to test(medicine) by eating them herself. Her teamsearched old Chinese medicine bookshand and tested over 2,000 traditional recipes. Once Tu (return) home after traveling for six months.Her little daughter didnt recognize her and hid from the “strange woman”. To do research,Tu also had to move around a lot. Finally,Tu found (青蒿素) in sweet wormwood in1971. She spent the next decades ( try) to improve themedicine. According to World Health Organization, about 200 million people suffer malaria around the world, and about half a million die each year. Artemisinin is still the most effective treatment against malaria known today. Tu never complains about how hard she works. I feel more rewarded when I see so many cured patients, ”she said. 2、阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Starting a new school term is always exciting .It is a chance (see) your friends again. But most exciting of all,the new term lets you take up new hobbies. In Britain it is common for students to take up new hobbies after the Christmas holidays. Promising to learn something new is a common New Years resolution.Most schools offer different kindshobby classes. Students (usual) take them in their free periods or after school. Some classes you have to pay for but some (be) free. For example, I once took a free Wednesday evening gymnastics classis offered by my school. But when I learnt how to play the drum, my parents had to pay for the lessons.The most popular extra classes at my school were piano lessons and drama club. Both classes offered exams students could take. Students with many hobbies sometimes feltstressed than those without any. But the students with hobbies left school with many extra (skill).I havent continued any of the hobbies I (begin) at school. But I have never regretted taking .My (good) friend today is someone I met in my gymnastics class. 3、阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Imagine life as a game in which you are playing some five balls in the air. You name (they)work,family, health, friends and spirit ,and youre keeping all these balls in the air.You understand that work is a rubber ball .If you drop it, it will bounce back. But the other four balls are made of glass. If you drop one of them, it will be scuffed(磨损),damaged or even broken into (piece).They will never be the same. You must understand the balance in your life. How?Dont compare yourself with others. It is because we are different and each of us (be) special. Dont set your goals by what other people consider important. Only you knowis best for you. Dont givewhen you still have something to give. Nothing is really over until the moment you stop(try).Knowledge is weightless,treasure you can always carry (easy).Dont run through life so fast that you forget not only where youve been, where you are, but also where you (go).Life is not a race, but a journey to (enjoy) slowly each step of the way. Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, and today is a gift. Thats why we call itthe present. 4、阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。 According to a recent survey, violence did exist in schools. Students showed their fear and parents and teachers also (express) their great concern about it. Experts hopewhole society pays more attention to the mental health of adolescents. Nowadays, school violence is a hot issue. I think this is a phenomenon, which (call) for our great concern. We should make every effort (prevent) school violence happening at school, for more and more students would drop out of school if their personal (safe) could not be guaranteed. In fact, violence can be learned.(actual),children learn violence behavior from adults or fromthey see on television or on the Internet. If I meet with school violence, I will not answer violence with violence, for it will result in (much) fighting. I will tell my teachers or parents about it. I think they will help me deal with it well and they will protect me from the bad guys.All in all, we students should behave (we) and keep awayviolence. 评卷人得分二、短文改错5、下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it. 6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处;每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school,and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time,they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden,that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.beside,they often get some useful informations from the internet.When summer came,they will invite their students pick the vegetables! 7、 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically. and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time,car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kings of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days. 8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Today I am talking to my dad Matthew, my hero. The reason why I admire him is because he starts every day with smile. And his smile always brings happy to my families. He has been looked after us carefully since many years ago. He often encourages me to keep going and not give it up. Whats more, he real does care and show his love to everyone he meets. I believe that he is a true person of compassion or carefulness. He had so many good personal quality that we all respect him. 参考答案： 一、语法填空 1.答案： but; is; to receive; it; that/which; medicines; by/on/at/in; returned; trying; from 解析： 本文是一篇记叙文。屠呦呦是中国第一个获得诺贝尔医学奖的女科学家,她带领她的团队发现了青蒿素,从而挽救了数百万人的生命。考查连词。空前语境为“青蒿在中国是一种常见的植物”;空后语境为“它有治愈致命疾病疟疾的能力”。 根据空处前后语境可以判断,两句为转折关系,故填转折连词 but。考查时态和主谓一致。根据该句中的“who uses the plants special power”可知,该句应用一般现在时。又因主语为 Tu Youyou,故填 is。考査动词不定式。根据该句中的“ the first native Chinese person”可以判断,该句应用动词不定式做person 的后置定语。考査it的用法。分析该句结构可知,动词不定式短语to fight for the health of all humans做真正的主语,it做形式主语。考查定语从句。分析该句结构可知,该句为定语从句,先行词为medicine,空处在从句中做主语,故填 which或that引导该定语从句。査名词的数。根据该句中的them可以判断,空处应填名词复数。考查介词。by hand意为“用手”;on hand, at hand,in hand意为“在手头”。根据语境可知这四个介词都对。考查时态。根据下句的“ Her little daughter didnt recognize her”可知,这里陈述的是过去的事情,故用一般过去时。考査非谓语动词。spend time doing sth.为固定搭配,意为“花费时间做某事”,故填trying。考査动词短语。suffer from为固定搭配,意为 “(因疾病、痛苦等)受折磨”。 2.答案： to see; of; usually; are; which/that; more; skills; began; them; best 3.答案： them; pieces; is; what; up; trying; a; easily; are going/are to go/will go; be enjoyed 4.答案： expressed; the; calls; to prevent; safety; Actually; what; more; ourselves; from 二、短文改错 5.答案： My old classroom was interesting because three of the classroom were made glass. I enjoyed close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroomalso splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around . Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me like I was dreaming. I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it. 解析： 第一句:sidesides,side是可数名词,前面有three修饰,side 要改为sides。第一句:fromof,be made from由制成,看不出原材料;be made of由制成/组成,看得出原材料,所以from要改为of。第二句enjoy后加动名词形式,所以sit要改为sitting。第三句:easyeasily,修饰动词see应用副词,所以easy改为easily。第五句:iswas,时态误用。全文用的都是过去时,所以要把is改为was。第六句it代词误用。这里指代的是park,所以要把them改为it。第七句:删掉could后的not根据上下文可知这里应该是表肯定,所以把not删掉。第九句:在第一个in后加a固定短语in a hurry仓促;匆忙。第十句:feltfeel,make sb. do sth.使某人做某事,所以felt要改为feel。第十一句:IfAlthough/Though,句意:虽然我在那个教室学习时还是个孩子,但是我永远都忘不了它。根据句意可知要把If改为Although或Though。 6.答案： Mr. and Mrs.Zhang(or all) work in our school.They live far from the school,and it takes them about hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time,they are in planting vegetables in their garden, is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up and water the vegetables together.They have also bought forsome gardening tools.,they often get some useful from the internet.When summer ,they will invite their students pick the vegetables! 解析： 第一处:考查both和all的用法,both的主语是两个,而all的主语是三个或者三个以上,故将all改为both.第二处:考查冠词,因为hour音标的首字母与是元音,所以应用an,故将a改为an或one.第三处:考查形容词,由于此句的主语是人,而interesting的主语是物,故将interesting改为interested.第四处:考查非限制性定语从句,非限制性定语从句需要用which引导,故将that改为which.第五处:考查副词,earlier是形容词比较级,不能修饰动词get up,故将earlier改为early.第六处:考查动词,bought是及物动词,后无需跟介词,故将