高考英语 书面表达系列及参考范文（34）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（34）及参考范文作文（*） 最近你校对中学生消费情况进行了调查；请根据调查表提供的信息写一篇英语短文，简要介绍调查结果并谈谈你对中学生消费的看法。字数：120-150左右。_ 【参考范文】one possible version： as can be seen from the diagram above，nowadays middle school students spend most of their pocket money on snacks，clothes，things for entertainment and social communicationhowever，they seldom buy learning resourcesfurthermore,some of them are free to buy whatever they like without considering the income of their family and their needs in my opinion，its wrong of us students to consume blindlysuch as following the fashion，pursuing famous brands of clothes,as we know，once seeking material comforts，we will lose the motivation of learningtherefore，we should spend our pocket money on what we really needalso，we should acquire a scientific outlook of consumption and focus on studywhats more，its essential for us to develop a good habit of saving money*结束 （1） 请根据下面提供的情景, 写一篇100词左右的短文。 your friend lily tells you, i am suffering from depression (沮丧, 消沉). i have trouble sleeping. im often tired. when i think about the future i feel hopeless. i dont enjoy anything. i am never happy. i dont laugh or smile any more. you need to give her some suggestions and tell her what she should do. 参考范文第一篇：one possible version: lily, dont be upset. i have some pieces of advice for you. first of all, whenever you feel blue, try listening to some songs, because music has been proved to have great effect on smoothing pressure. if you still feel depressed, look at yourself in a mirror and smile for no less than 30 seconds, then you will believe that nothing is serious and have a good mood. of course, you had better try to find any good friend you can trust to talk to. i do hope these will help you. please believe tomorrow will be better and our life will be full of sunshine!*结束 （2） 最近，你班试行在课间播放音乐，同学们对此私下议论，看法不一。请你根据下表的信息，给你班的班主任mr edward 写一封信，客观地介绍大家的看法。 大多数同学认为部分同学认为1.播放音乐能活跃气氛1.课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期效果2.能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳2.课间需要的是安静，而不是嘈杂的声音3.它能给大家带来欢乐和美的享受3.有时上课后还沉浸在课间的音乐中 参考范文one possible version: dear mr edward, recently we have carried out the practice to play music during the class break, and the students have had many private talks about it. their opinions mainly fall into two groups. most of us agree that music should be played. as we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. besides, music brings us relaxation after hard study, which reduces the tiredness. listening to music also makes us feel happy and nice. on the other hand, some students dont think so. in their opinion, they cant get the expected result by playing music, as the break between classes is too short. what is needed during the break is peace instead of noise produced by the music. in addition, in class some students are still lost in the music they have heard during the break.*结束（3） 下面四幅图描述了格林先生和他的孩子们在周末晚上看电视的情景。尽管他讨厌流行歌曲和乐队队员，由于孩子们喜欢，他不得不迁就。请用英语写一篇短文说明两代人对电视节目的不同喜好。 注意： 1短文须包括所有图画的内容，根据行文要求可适当增加细节，使短文连贯、通顺。 2 词数100左右。 （图1中书上文字：top of the pops最新走红流行歌曲；图2中电视上文字：the gorgons一演唱组名） 参考范文one possible version： mr. green and his children usually spend some time watching tv in the evening. but they dont like the same tv program. his children like pop music very much, but mr. green hates it . one evening at the weekend, the children wanted to watch top of the pops. they told their father it was performed by the gorgons, a new group. mr. green had to give in. the children enjoyed the program very much while mr. green thought that the music sounded terrible and the group all looked like wild men. he didnt listen to them. 第二节：写作 you are supposed to write a composition on the topic making friends selectively or extensively? you should write about 120 words and base your writing on the outline given below:1. 有些人认为应该有选择地交朋友2. 另一些人认为应该广泛地交朋友3. 你的看法making friends selectively or extensively?_ _ _ _ 【参考范文】making friends selectively or extensively? when it comes to whether we should make friends selectively or extensively, there is no complete agreement among people. some people take it for granted that we should make friends selectively and carefully. however, others maintain that making friends extensively should be regarded as the better choice. those people who hold the first opinion believe that its sensible to look for friends who have similar ideal and outlook on life as well as temperament. in addition, they neednt waste time dealing with the people they dont like and prevent themselves from being affected by those people. however, still others think differently. in their opinions, the more friends we make, the easier our life will be. besides, they argue that we can absorb and learn from the advantages of different people.weighing up these two arguments, i prefer the former one. for one thing, not all friends are suitable for us and easy to get along with. for another, friends with similar goals will help us sweep off difficulties. considering these, we may reasonably conclude that making friends selectively can bring us a true friend. *写作指导*多使用过渡性词语。这样使文章更加连贯、更具有逻辑性。（1）表示增加的过渡词：also，and，and then，too，in addition，furthermore，moreover，again，on top ofthat，another，first second third等。（2）表示时间顺序的过渡词：now，then，before，after，afterwards，earlier，lat er，immediately，soon，next，in afew days，gradually，suddenly，finally等。（3）表示空间顺序的过渡词：near（to），far（from），in frontof，behind，beside，beyond，above，below，tothe right left，around，outside等。（4）表示比较的过渡词：in thesameway，justlike，justas等。（5）表示对照的过渡词：but，still，yet，however，on theotherhand，onthecon trary，in spite of，even though等。（6）表示结 果 和 原 因 的 过 渡 词：because，since，so，as a result，therefore，then，thus，otherwise等。（7）表示目的的过渡词：forthisreason，forthispurpose，so that等。（8）表示强调的过渡词：in fact，indeed，surely，necessarily，certainly，withoutanydoubt，truly，torepeat，aboveall，mostimportant等。（9）表示解释说明的过渡词：forexample，in fact，in thiscase，foractually等。（10）表示总结的过渡词：finally，atlast，inconclusion，asihaveshown，inoth erword，in brief，in short，in general，on the whole，ashasbeen stated等。*结束作文（*） 每年高三学生在高考结束后都会有一个近三个月的假期。对于如何度过这个假期，某报社近期进行了一次问卷调查，其结果如下表所示。请根据表格中提示的内容，写一篇100词左右的短文，简要陈述学生的意向，并说明你自己的观点。比例意向45在家充分休息28学习英语，为上大学做准备15到外地旅游12其他注意：为使行文连贯，可适当增加细节。_one possible version： recently a survey has been conducted among the students in grade three about what they will do during the 3-month holiday after the college entrance examstudents have different decisions about 45of the surveyed students intend to rest at homethey want to relaxthoroughly and get ready for college lifewhile 28of them prefer to attend eriglish classes for their future usemeanwhile，15of them choose to travel outside and the rest l2say that theyd like to do other thingsafter allits really difficult to get such a long holiday again after tlley enter the college personally，1 will be a little sad if i get