高考英语 书面表达系列及参考范文（38）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（38）及参考范文第二节：写作 你是21世纪英文报（21st century）的读者，也经常向该报投稿。她的这就是生活栏目 (thats life) 的下期话题是：failure happens when you quit. to go on till you succeed is what life is all about.该栏目编辑向你约稿，请你发表你的观点并陈述理由，字数100左右。【参考答案】sample writing my understanding of life is to achieve goals, big or small, through efforts. to succeed doesnt necessarily mean having much money or power; it means we try hard to live a rich life rather than give up easily. life is sweet and full of challenges. if we give up too soon, we may miss good opportunities to arrive at our destination in time or even worse, we may drive ourselves into difficult situations. take robinson crusoe for example. if he had been the kind of person to give up without trying, he would have no chance of survival on the deserted island for 27 years. it was hope and perseverance that made his survival possible. so bear this in mind: failure happens when we quit and to go on till you succeed is what life is all about. *结束（广东卷）写作(共两节，满分40分)第一节：基础写作以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道基本信息：书名：battle hymn of the tiger mother作者：amy chua，美籍华人，耶鲁*大学教授出版时间：2010年内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛*和耶鲁录取*耶鲁：yale 哈佛：harvard写作内容根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：1.图书的基本信息2.图书的相关报道写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯【参考范文】 published in 2010, battle hymn of the tiger mother, whose wrtier is amy chua, a chinese american professor in yale university, is about a story that the author applied the chinese traditional educational method to instruct her two daughters. the books with chinese edition were sold in china at the beginning of the 2011. as a result, it caused a heated discussion on which is better, the chinese way or american. accidently, most of the chinese mothers are not in favour of what the writer did. however, the latest news shows that her 17-year-old daughter was admitted into harvard and yale university.2011年广东省高考英语基础写作是一篇说明文，让考生对battle hymn of the tiger mother这本书进行介绍。今年的基础写作题材较新，有些考生可能不知道虎妈教育孩子的事情，但不影响本文写作，考生只把它当作一本图书介绍即可。试题详细地给出了内容要点，为控制性写作。在文章结构方面，一定要紧扣考题已给出的写作提示：1.图书的基本信息；2.图书的相关报道。要写好此文，考生需要注意四点：一、要认真审题，确定体裁、人称和时态等；二、要运用适当的句型，合理地组织文字；三、切忌照译，要适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。四、在句型方面，为了用五个句子表达全部内容，复合句的使用依然是考查的重点。*结束（广东卷）写作(共两节，满分40分第二节：读写任务阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文when sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. he thought he would be able（） to go home every weekend. when he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.he was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. he started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. he was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. he tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. he started feeling homesick (想家) 安定wanted to go homes as soon as possible.he got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. he could not concentrate in the classroom. all he could think was being at home with his family. he had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents. he was angry and felt lonely. he thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.写作内容1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的经历，内容包括：时间、地点和起因；想家给学习和生活带来的影响；你（或你朋友）是如何应对的。写作要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容何时，语句连贯。【参考范文】the story is about what sam felt about his first boarding school life. as a child, he never left his parents, so he didnt get used to dealing with everything in school independently. once i had a similar experience. i finished my junior middle school in a boarding school. at the age of 13, i never delt with the daily things, such as washing clothes, taking care of money etc. especially i felt lonely because i hardly knew any people. at first, i could not get on well with my classmates and i always looked forward to being on holiday to meet my parents. i could not concentrate on my subjects. as time went by, i gradually adapted myself to the school life. i made several friends with our classmates and often took part in the activities, in which i improved my communicating skills. as i had a lot of interesting things to do, i finally enjoyed my school life. now, whenever i think of my first boarding school life, i think it instructive and unforgettable.【解析】1.这是一篇记叙文写作。此话题贴近生活，因为几乎每个学生都进过寄宿制学校，所以真实的经历让学生有话可写；2. 本写作具有一定的开放性。它要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力并运用熟练的语言知识将其表达出来。这充分考查了考生的能力。3. 注意文章的写作内容要齐全，按要求该文章应分为二段。第一段：以30词概括记叙文的主要内容；第二段：结合自己或朋友的实际情况描述自己想家的经历。内容包括：(1)时间、地点和起因；(2)想家给学习或生活带来的影响；(3) 你（或你的朋友）是如何应对的。4.文章应以过去时态为主。*结束下面五幅图画叙述了胡先生热爱动物的一段经历。请根据图画内容,写一篇100词左右的短文,描述他的经历并发表一点你的个人看法。 参考范文mr. hu is one of the men who like animals in such a way that all he does only causes harm to animals, because he likes animals only for the purpose of satisfying his own needs. he kept some birds in cages for fun and wore clothes made of wild animalsfur and skin. worse still, he even ate wild ani- mals in restaurants and fixed some heads of rare animals on the wall of his living room to show off. in the end, he caught saps and had to stay in hospital.in my opinion, we should treat wild animals as our friends instead of catching or killing them, or well be punished.*.(典型题)*结束2013高考英语：写作综合训练 发言稿篇90后出生的学生，思想特殊、行为方式和价值观令人担忧。假如你是一名90后出生的学生刘林，请根据下表中所提供信息以do trust us-a generation born in the 90s为题写一篇英语演讲稿，以消除人们的忧虑。90后的境遇面临更多的升学和就业烦恼，所处环境竞争更加激烈。人们的忧虑1注重自我，轻视合作，.2缺乏毅力，容易气馁，.3盲目追求，渴望成名，.我们的长处敢于挑战，.（请考生联系自己拟定内容，再列举两至三点。）注意：1对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。【参考范文】-one possible version:good afternoon, everyone!the topic of my speech today is “do trust usa generation born in the 90s”.living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed. under these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which has raised peoples concern. they worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do. besides, they consider us as lacking in perseverance, and this is what it takes to do any job well. without it, we may easily give up in time of difficulty. they are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future.however, we, a generation born in the 90s, have our own advantages despite some weaknesses. firstly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks, which helps realize our dreams. in addition, we are quick-minded and creative. we can do our work more efficiently. yet, we still need to learn more from those experienced. please do trust us!thank you for your listening!faithfully, li hua文章针对90s后的特点，让学生写一篇演讲稿。文章素材贴近学生生活实际，他们本身作为90s后所以他们感到格外亲切，有话可说。文章人称用第一、三人称；时态应用现在时态。 第二节 写作 以“a short genius”为题介绍乒乓运动巨星邓亚萍。姓名：邓亚萍，出生：1973，身高1.50米。1、运动生涯：共获冠军132个，其中4次奥运冠军。2、工作经历：北京奥运会奥运村副部长。3、学习经历：退役后求学11年。曾在清华大学（tsinghua）、英国诺丁汉（nottingham）大学、剑桥(cambridge)大学学习。2008年12月30日获剑桥大学经济学博士学位。4、影响：运动巨星获博第一人。改写剑桥大学800年校史。要求：1. 词数120左右；2. 可适当增减细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已写出，不计入总词数。a short geniusdeng yaping, born in 1973, once a national pingpong athlete, is only 1.50 meters high.【参考范文】one possible writing versiondeng yaping, born in 1973, once a national ping pong athlete, is only 1.5 meters high. during her