高考英语二轮书面表达基础训练题（4）(1).doc

2014高考英语二轮书面表达基础训练题（4）及答案【辽宁省葫芦岛市2014一模试题】书面表达（满分25分）假设你是李华, 你的英国朋友tom要来你校任教。为了方便， 他打算在学校附近租房子，发来邮件向你咨询合适的房源。 请你根据下表提供的信息回复邮件。房子地点：龙湾大街面积布局：2楼，一室，一厅，70m, 朝南。家具齐全。环境交通：小区优美、安静；附近有体育馆可以健身；购物、交通便利。每月房租：4500元联系电话注意：1.词数不少于100。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：公寓 apartmentdear tom,_ yours,li hua【参考范文】书面表达dear tom， iamwritingtotell youthat ive found an apartment which may meet your needs. its on the second floor, facing the south, with an area of 70 square meters. it has a bedroom and a sitting room, fully furnished. located in longwan street, it offers convenient shopping and easy traffic. the apartment is in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood. and there is also a gym nearby where you can go and take exercise regularly. the rent is 4,500 yuan per month. if you are interested in it, please call if you need any more help, just let me know.lookingforwardtomeeting you soon.yours,li hua【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学三模试题】读写任务 (共25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。as we all know, life is full of dreams and having a good dream is of great importance in our daily life. without a good dream, people cant make progress; without a good dream, countries cant develop; without a good dream, the world cant become so beautiful! and i hold the strong belief that everyone, whether he is old or young, poor or rich, junior or senior, does have a good dream! after all, dreaming is certainly a positive part of our life, and wishing for good things, however, costs nothing!whats more, it is important to fly our dreams, especially for those who are senior 3 students. it is high time for them to fly their dreams. if they cant let their dreams fly, the dream would just die!therefore, it is no wonder that so many people have a dream since their childhood. with a nice dream, china succeeded to host the 29th olympic games in 2008; with a nice dream, hong kong returned to the motherland peacefully in 1997; with a nice dream, yuan longping rids the world of hunger; with a nice dream, michael jordon becomes the most popular basketball star; with a nice dream i can stand on this stage to compete in the final english speech contest. and with an aim of achieving success, i must do the best!so my good friends, if you want to realize your dream, please do not be afraid in face of difficulties or give up in face of failure nor lose your dream in face of pains. you must keep going forward bravely! just fly your dream highly above the sky!【写作内容】 1. 阅读短文后用30词左右概括短文的要点。2. 就“放飞梦想”为主题，以120词左右发表自己的看法，并包括以下内容要点：（1）列举自己或身边现实生活中中学生梦想成真的一件事例；（2）结合自己的实际，谈谈你现在的梦想，并说明打算如何实现。【写作要求】 1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】one possible version:dreams play an important role in our daily life and a good dream is the motivation to success. to realize a dream, one should learn to defeat difficulties through constant struggles as well as persistence.it is a dream that enables one to do better in life. like most classmates, there was a time when i dreamed of being an excellent student in english after entering junior middle school, though my english was very poor then. to catch up with my classmates, i made up my mind to learn english well and made pen-friends with some foreign students so as to practise my spoken english and improve my written english. although some of my classmates often went to the movies in the evening, seldom did i take part in such activities. instead, i set aside to concentrate on my english and won the final english speech contest around the city this term, realizing my dream.at present, i also have another dream. as a senior 3 student, i hope that i can be admitted to a key university after graduation from middle school. of course, whether my dream will come true depends largely on my personal efforts. although life is full of ups and downs, i choose to go forward bravely. i strongly believe that where there is a dream, there is hope and there is a way.（b）（20分钟）阅读下面的短文， 然后按照要求写一篇150左右的英语短文。dear patti, im writing to you for some advice on my studies. as you know, football is very popular sport in the world and i am attracted to it and i have fallen in deep love with it, which makes me so crazy. i have been spending lots of time doing many things related to it, like watching football matches, reading newspapers and magazines, and searching the web for more information about football. as a result, it has certainly disturbed my normal study. though i know to be a football fan is my hobby and my major objective is to learn more knowledge in school, i cant concentrate on my lessons and gradually i am tired of them. i am still a senior two middle school student, and ill have my own business even when grow up, so i am not likely to do a job in the field of football. but now i cant stop myself from getting involved further with football. so i feel very depressed and want to know how to deal with the contradiction between my studies and hobbies.写作内容：假设你是李明的笔友patti, 请根据他信中所诉说的苦恼回封信。以下是回信的内容（信的开头和结尾已为你写好）：1. 以约30个词概括李明的苦恼；2. 以约150个词发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：（1） 你认为李明应该如何处理好他的学习和业余爱好的关系，并说明你的理由；（2） 表达你对他的希望；写作要求：1. 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。dear li ming,thank you for your letter. from your letter, ive known something about your situation. _. yours sincerely, patti 【参考范文】dear li ming, thank you for your letter. from your letter, ive known something about your situation. you are very depressed because of the contradiction that you cant tear yourself away from football, which has been disturbing you so much that you cant concentrate on your lessons. hobbies are very important to a person, without which life wont be as colorful as itshould be. they cant cheer you up and improve your comprehensive abilities, but they also require time and devotion. you are still a student, whose main task should be gaining knowledge, so you must know which is more important to do in different life periods, otherwise you would regret having been too much addicted to that in the future. a hobby is like gold under the ground, for it will not come to you unless you dig it out yourself. if you can treat your study as one of your hobbies, it will be more enjoyable. i hope you can find yourself in the right place and have fun from your study. yours sincerely, patti【皖南八校第二次联考】书面表达（满分25分）某英语报社开辟了中学生习作专栏。本期的话题是：注重外貌日常学习、工作和生活中的细节。因为细节往往决定成败。请你以“we should pay much attention to details”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些看法。注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.短文中不能出现本人相关信息。we should pay much attention to details_【参考范文】one possible version:we should pay much attention to detailssome people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldnt pay much attention to details. but sometimes it is the details that determine our success, for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what were doing.since we have realized the importance of details, what should we do? first, we should form the habit of being careful, because a careful person will rarely overlook details. whats more, we should learn to keep the balance of quantity and quality. we may find that when faced with lots of work, the faster we do it, the more mistakes we will make. why? because when we work at high speed, the only thing we care about is quantity in which case we are more likely to neglect the details.as far as im concerned, we should keep it in mind that quality comes first, without which quantity is of no significance.高中英语书面表达中的高级结构英语书面表达在高考中日益显得重要，高考书面表达已不只局限于把话说清楚，把意思表达完整，而是要给我们的句子润色，让我们的句子靓起来。如何让我们的英语句子靓起来呢？很多人都强调用连词、介词等词汇手段迅速提高语言水平。但这种方法需要一定的积累，也 需要一定的基础。而我觉得通过对低级句型的改造，可以迅速达到这一目的。强调句：可以将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。it was not until i arrived home that i realized i had left the bag on the shop counter. it was then that i realized the importance of english. 倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句，便可将其提前，变成倒装句。only when i turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me. only by this means can he escape from the big fire. with引导的伴随结构：可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with结构。with the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, i went to school in high spirits he always likes to sleep with the windows open. 巧妙地使用非谓语动词：可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词。hearing that, the drivers wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking. (=when he heard that, ) 恰到好处的被动句：适合应用于较简短的句子，这样显得语言简洁生动，宾语一般是 nothing、anything、everything等不定代词。i searched all my pockets, but nothing was found.感叹句：通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛，凡是“i feel ”之类表达感情的句子皆可 如此改造。how terrible i felt today! i failed again in the math exam. 高级定语从句：若定语从句中的动词带有介词，只需将介词移至先行词后。we came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before. 进行时态：有时会含有一定情绪，尤其要使用always这样的富含感情色彩的副词。i am always feeling terrible when i take a bus. 婉转表达