江西省奉化市高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选编（5）.doc

浙江奉化市2016高考英语书面表达选编（5）2016书面表达训练假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点：1做家务的理由；2做家务的过程；3你的感受。注意：1短文词数不少于100；2开头部分已写好，不计入总词数； 3不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 i am an 18yearold middle school student. 【参考范文】书面表达(2014福建龙岩市一级达标学校联考)最近，“中国式过马路”成为网友热议的话题。右面的漫画反映了部分中国人闯红灯过马路的现象。请根据漫画内容用英语写一篇短文。内容要求：1.描述漫画的内容；2分析出现这种现象的原因；3发表个人观点。注意：1.短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数；2考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实，连贯；3词数：120左右；4文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇：行人pedestrian；违规者jaywalker。chinese style of crossing the roadrecently，a heated debate arose online in china about the chinese style of crossing the road._【参考范文】chinese style of crossing the roadrecently，a heated debate arose online in china about the chinese style of crossing the road.as is shown in the picture，a large crowd of people are crossing the road regardless of red lights，which prevents the vehicles from moving forward even at the sight of green lights.various reasons might account for pedestrians to run traffic lights.some people believe it is not against traffic laws and wont be fined because so many people do it together.others may argue that traffic lights are not arranged scientifically，so that they have to wait too long before they can cross the road.in my opinion，the jaywalkers should be severely punished.most important of all，people should be educated to obey laws from childhood.start out small and develop a good sense and habit of observing laws.only by improving peoples safety and law awareness can we create a harmonious society.【广东省东莞市2014模拟试题】读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。once upon a time in a land far away, there was a wonderful old man who loved everything：animals, spiders, insects. one day while walking through the woods the nice old man found a cocoon（茧）of a butterfly. he took it home. a few days later, a small opening appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole. then it seemed to stop making any progress. it appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and it could go no farther. then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon. the butterfly then came out with ease.but it had a swollen body and small, shriveled（萎缩的）wings. the man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. neither happened! in fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. it never was able to fly. what the kind-hearted man did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were natures way of forcing fluid（液体）from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon. sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our life. if we were allowed to go through our life without any hardships, it would fail us. we would not be as strong as what we could have been. and we could never fly.【写作内容】1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120个词就“个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺”的主题发表看法，至少包含以下内容要点： （1）你读了这个故事的感受； （2）叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果； （3）假如你是父母的一方，你会如何磨砺自己的孩子？【写作要求】1.你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。_【参考范文】读写任务：one possible version:a kind man cut a cocoon open in order to lessen/ ease/ relieve the pain of a butterfly when he saw it struggling out of the coccon, only to find that it could never fly because of his help.the story sets me thinking a lot. our life is more or less like this. sometimes, struggles or obstacles in our life are a must for our growth. it is these struggles or hardships that increase our willpower and contribute to our success. without these trials, we could never achieve our life goal just as the butterfly did in the story.nowadays, with only one child in most families, parents do whatever they can to satisfy the childs needs and even do for him what should be done on his own. consequently, the child is unable to look after himself without his parents presence. too much care from parents rids children of their chances to grow strong by conquering obstacles. just as a saying goes, “flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm”,if i were a parent, i would first keep him well informed that life is never easy and that he sho