高考英语二轮限时高效训练 短文改错18.doc

2014高考英语二轮限时高效训练：短文改错181.假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该词下面写出该加的词。修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。thanks very much for your story. the plot is very touched. ok, now listen to me carefully. its very funny. one day, a young man was going from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all his new neighbors. outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog sitting on the sidewalk. well, he thought that it was belonged to the people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. he just pressed the bell, and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. he greeted them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of coffee and some cookies. well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the plate, and sat in his knee. the young man dont want to seem rude, so he petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. anyway, when it was time to go, he thanked them and left. when the young man left, the woman called after him, “excuse me, dont forget to take your dog!”2.下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。a young man called low-carbon brother become a hit on the internet in 2011 he suggests living a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air for example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something while he is watching tv, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving some people think what he is doing is just a show no one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us as far as i am concerned, i am strongly in support his idea and his behavior although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。im writing to invite you to visit china and spending the summer vacation with me. i have made wonderful plan for it. first, we can go to qingdao, there it is cool and mild, and have funs at the seaside. then we were to participate in a taiji camp in the wudang mountains. you are curious about chinese kongfu, but i believe this is a good chance to learn it. last of all, i have also been longed to take you to the countryside. we can stay there for a few days and visit to some relatives of me. i hope this plan suits you good and i am looking forward to your coming.4.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。 today, at the local convenience store that i work, an elderly man with a guidedog come in. he went to the shelf where there were all kind of greeting cards to choose one for his wife. he picked up a card, held it up extreme close to his face, and struggled read it. just as i was about to walk over to help him, i found the little girl, who was about ten years old, asked him that he needed help. before heard his answer, she started to read him almost every single greeting card out loud until when the elderly man smiled. he said, “thats perfect! his wife will love that one!”5.假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该词下面写出该加的词。修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。mrs smith was unable to fall sleeping at night and was tired during the day to do anything, even the simple things that she used to enjoy doing. she had headaches more often, it prevented her from reading or watched tv. the more she thought about her conditions, the more worse she felt. at last she went to see her doctor, whom she had known for year. the doctor listened to his heart and said, “there is nothing serious wrong with you, and i accept the fact that you dont feel well. now, i will give you some pills that will help. come tomorrow morning and tell me how you felt. ”6.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）。并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。i just came back from britain last week. i was luckily enough to be one of the students from different country to visit the uk from feb. 16 to 28. we paid a visit to a good many of places, like london, oxford or the lake district. i learned muchabout british culture and history in london, where was my favorite. i also liked oxford, in which i saw much more old buildings. the lake district was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. the most excited thing for me in britain was that i make a lot of friends there.试卷答案1.thanks very much for your story. the plot is very touched. ok, now 1. touchinglisten to me carefully. its very funny. one day, a young man was going from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all 2. because 3.himselfhis new neighbors. outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog sitting on the sidewalk. well, he thought that it was belonged to the 4.去掉waspeople in the house, but he paid no attention to it. he just pressed the bell, 5.soand the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. he greeted 6.toothem with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of 7.the coffee and some cookies. well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the plate, and sat in his knee. the young man dont want to seem rude, so he 8.on 9.didntpetted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. anyway, when 10.gentlyit was time to go, he thanked them and left. when the young man left, the woman called after him, “excuse me, dont forget to take your dog!”2.a young man called low-carbon brother become a hit on the internet in 2011 he suggests becameliving a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the airfor example, she always picks up some waste paper on thereduce hestreet or uses the blank side to write somethingwhile he is watching tv, he always turnsandup the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the lighttherefore, he goes to workdown besidesby bike instead of drivingsome people think what he is doing is just a showno one canlive such a simply life with so many modern invention around usas far as i am concerned,simple inventionsi am strongly in supporthis and his behavioralthough what he is doing has no hugeofeffect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life 删除3.im writing to invite you to visit china and spending the summer spendvacation with me. i have madewonderful plan for it. first, we can ago to qingdao, there it is cool and mild, and have funs at the seaside. where funthen we were to participate in a taiji camp in the wudang mountains. are you are curious about chinese kongfu, but i believe this is a good so/andchance to learn it. last of all, i have also been longed to take you to longingthe countryside. we can stay there for a few days and visit to some relatives删除 of me. i hope this plan suits you good and i am looking mine wellforward to your coming.4.today, at the local convenience store that i work, an elderly man with a guide wheredog come in. he went to the shelf where there were all kind of greeting cards to came kindschoose one for his wife. he picked up a card, held it up extreme close to his face, extremelyand struggledread it. just as i was about to walk over to help him, i found the to alittle girl, who was about ten years old, asked him that he needed help. before heard whether/if hearinghis answer, she started to read him almost ev