高考英语 书面表达系列及参考范文（4）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（4）及参考范文 第四部分：书面表达(满分35分) (2012海淀期末)近期某网站就校车安全问题进行了一次社会调查，结果见下图。请根据图示用英语写一篇短文，介绍调查结果并谈谈你的看法，供有关部门参考。词数不少于60。注意：1.文章的开头已经给出。2提示词：报废车abandoned vehiclesrecently, a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website._范文借鉴recently,_a_survey_on_school_buses_has_been_conducted_on_a_website. as can be seen from the pie chart, only 36.13% of the interviewees trust the school buses, while 40.34% of them show their distrust. 23.53% of them are not clear about it. of those who show their disbelief, 35.29% are afraid of abandoned vehicles being used and 24.37% worry that school buses are often overloaded, which can cause serious traffic accidents. about 21.35% of them worry that the school buses are not equipped with safety equipment like safety belts. another 18.49% blame drivers for breaking the speed limit.i think effective measures should be taken to ensure the safety of students. more money should be invested to improve the quality of school buses. meanwhile, all the school buses should be examined regularly. *结束(201*江南十校联考)假如你是某家英文报社的编辑，昨日收到一位中学生读者王丽的来信。请根据来信内容和所给的要点提示用英语写一封回信。词数100左右。dear editor，i am a hardworking girl and want to be the number one in my class. but in the exams, i always make mistakes that i should have avoided. i really worry about it. what can i do to improve my performance in exams?wang li提示：1.不要压力太大；2如有问题，请教老师或同学；3考试时合理分配时间并尽量抽出几分钟检查。注意：1.可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；2书信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：分配distributedear wang li，its good that you know what prevents you achieving satisfying scores in exams._ _editor【参考范文：dear wang li，its good that you know what prevents you achieving satisfying scores in exams. but remember, even the very best student can make mistakes sometimes. so, dont put too much pressure on yourself.learning from the errors youve made in the past exams is an effective way to avoid making the same mistakes next time. if you have problems you cannot solve, turn to your teacher or classmates for advice.when you attend an exam, plan how to distribute your time according to the number of questions. spare a few minutes to review your paper in order that you can spot the silly mistakes.enjoy the challenge each new exam brings. i believe a good learning habit can eventually help you gain success.editor*结束1.（2011陕西卷）书面表达（满分30分）假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫tigermom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。im the mother of a fourteen-year-old. i have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. she has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that i put too much pressure on her. am i wrong?写作要点：1.表明自己的看法； 2.陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；3.提出至少两条建议要求：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。 hi，tigermom， what puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in china. my idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.although high grades are an important factor in evaluating syudents and their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude school never be ignored.there are many examples around us.some all-a student in school have turned out not to be ac successful in society as they were expected.the reason is often that the pressure from their parents alloes them almost no time for other activities.furthermore,purishment is by no means a wise choise to help them grow up mentally and physically.so i suggest that you take your friendsadvice.more importansly,let her live like a lovely girl;let her have more friends and social activities;and let her make takes of her own as we teenagers often do.*结束 (2011浙江卷)假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(to scribble)和乱丢垃圾(to litter)的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容：1说明写信目的；2对这些行为进行批评；3提出建议。注意：信的抬头、落款及信的第一句已给出(不计词数)。june 8,2011dear mr. headmaster，im li yue, a student from class 1, senior . _ _yours faithfully，li yue参考范文june_8,_2011dear_mr._headmaster，i_am_li_yue,_a_student_from_class_1,_senior_. i am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among as students: littering and scribbling. it makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. i always feel ashamed whenever i see this. it is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. i wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. at the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. i believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.thank you for your consideration.yours_faithfully，li_yue*结束 (2011江苏卷)右面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家的妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；3举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。注意：1.可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。2词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。the burden of students has been a hot topic for years，but the load of parents has received little attention，especially from their own children._ _ _ _参考范文the_burden_of_students_has_been_a_hot_topic_for_years,_but_the_load_of_parents_has_received_little_attention,_especially_from_their_own_children. the picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. realizing her mom must be very tired after a days work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. in response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.all this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. but, totally engaged in my own study ，i seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing i could do in return. now i know i can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mothers daily burden. the picture convinces me it is even more important be a good daughter than a “good” student.*结束(2011辽宁卷)假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知b&b公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点：1年龄；2学习情况及英语水平；3兴趣和特长；4性格特点。注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语和结束语已为你写好。june 8dear sir/madam，i learned from the newspaper that your company needs an english secretary_ _im looking forward to your reply.sincerely yours，li hua参考范文june_8dear_sir/madam，i_learned_from_the_newspaper_that_your_company_needs_an_english_secretary. im really interested in this position and hope i can work for you.im 18 years old and will be garduating from xinxing foreign language school this july. im an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. im good at english, especially spoken english. i often use the computer and i type very fast. in my spare time, i read a lot. poems are my favorite. i enjoy music very much too. being an active young person, i like sports and outdoor activities. besides, im easy to get along with and i like to make friends.im_looking_forward_to_your_reply.sincerely_yours，li_hua*结束 假定你是李华，你所喜爱的global mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1说明你是该报的忠实读者 2赞赏该报优点： 1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事 3提出建议： 刊登指导英语学习的文章注意： 1词数100左右，开头语己为你写好； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 今 dear editor-in-chief, congratulations on,the,5h anniversary,of global mirror!_ sincerely yours, li hua书面表达 dear editor-in-chief, congratulations on,the,5h anniversary,of global mirror! im a regular reader of your newspaper. i like it very much mainly for the following two reassons. first, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, i can learn all important things that have happened during the week. equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.as a young student, i suggest that global mirror carry articles to guide us in our english leaarning, and i hope that it will become even more popular.sincerely yours,li hua*结束第四部分：书面表达(满分35分)(2012自贡二诊)如今世界粮食短缺，价格飞涨，给部分地区造成社会动荡。请就下面表格所提供的内容进行陈述并谈谈你的看法。造成的原因1.气候变化，造成粮食减产。2工业发展，城市化加速，耕地减少。应对的措施1.注重环保，改善生态。2严格保护耕地。你如何做出自己的贡献观点1；观点2