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1 ContinuationWriting 2 Thecostofasmile Reflection 1 Haveyougotahighscoreinthiswriting 2 Whatproblemsdoyouhave OrWhydoyoufailtogetagoodresult 3 Doyouthinksuchkindofendingacceptable 1 Charliemovedtoanothercitywithhissonordaughter 2 Charliewasthebossofabigcompany soheaskedKathytoworkwithhiminhiscompany 3 TowinKathy ssmile CharliegavelotsoftipstoKathy Thentheywereinlovewitheachother ButCharliewasseriouslyill thefuneral Makesurethestorydevelopslogicallyandreasonably 4 Whendoingcontinuationwriting whatshouldwepayattentionto thegivenpassage Howmanywordsshouldwewrite Howmanygivenunderlinedwordsshouldbeused Howmanyparagraphsshouldwewrite thecontinuationwritingpart Ingeneral howmanywordsarethere 5 1 续写材料是一段350词以内的材料 一般为记叙文 2 所续写短文的词数应为150左右 词数少于130词 从总分中减去2分 3 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语 4 续写部分分为两段 每段的开头语已为你写好 5 续写完成后 请用下划线标出所使用的关键词语 注意事项 6 Onedayhedidn tcometotherestaurant Shecalledhishome onlytohearanansweringmachine Withnervousnesswrappedintoanxiety Kathywenttohishouseandfoundoutfromhisneighborthathehaddiedthepreviousnight Onhearingthebadnewsshefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn thelpcryingbitterly BecauseCharliehadnofamilyorclosefriends Kathyputherselfinchargeofhisfuneralarrangements Sheandtheneighborweretheonlypeopletoattend 范文欣赏 Usevividdetaileddescriptiontoshowcharacters 7 Severaldaysafterthefuneral Kathyreceivedaveryimportant lookingletterinthemail ItwassenttoherfromCharlie slawyer Enclosedwasacheckforalmost 600 000 Kathynearlyfainted 晕倒 butthenshenoticedahandwrittennotewhichread DearKathy bythetimeyoureadthis Iwillbegone HereIhaveleftformybestfriendasmalltoken 表示 ofmygratitudeIcanneverrepayyouforwhatyou vegivenme foryousee Kathy asmileisworthmuchmorethan 20 Indeed asmileispriceless Conveypositivemessage Asmilecostsnothing butitiswortheverything 8 message positive development logical reasonable language vivid 9 ChildrenofHeaven ContinuationWriting 电影 天堂的孩子 10 Readforinformation Whatisthetypeofwriting A narrative 记叙文 B exposition 说明文 C argumentation 议论文 Howmanycharactersarethereinthepassage Whoarethemaincharacters Many ThemaincharactersareAliandhisyoungersister Zahra Character 11 Backgroundinformation 1 WheredidAliandhisfamilylive 2 Howwasthefamilycondition How Aliandhisyoungersister Zahra livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks AliandZahralivedina neighborhoodwiththeirparents Thefamily tomakeendsmeet poor struggled 对某人盯得特别紧 12 AlilostZahra sshoes Themainstory AliandZahrakeptitsecretby Oneday Thedayofrace Apieceofnews Alongdistanceracewouldbeheld Thethirdprizewasapairofnewshoes Start Halfway Nearthefinishline Hehadastrongstart Hegotexhaustedbutpersisted Hecrashedtotheground Itseemedthat 13 Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 Para 4 Readforstructure information ofthestory ofthestory ofthestory Thefamilystruggledtomakeendsmeet AlilostZahra sshoesandsharedhisshoeswithZahratogotoschool AlidecidedtotakepartinalongdistanceracetowinanewpairofshoesforZahra Aliwasknockeddownanditseemedunlikelyforhimtofinishthird Background Beginning Development Climax 高潮 14 Paragraph1 Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead Paragrap2 Filledwithdelight Aliwalkedhomequickly ContinuationWriting Ali Zahra shoes race prize excitedly promise runners third collided DidAliwintheprize Yes OrNo 15 possibilities Hewonthethirdprize Hewasawardedforhisbravery TherunnerwhocollidedhimgavetheshoestoAli Hedidn tfinishtherace Hefinishedfirst DidAliwintheprize Whatevertheresultwas AlieventuallywenthomewithapairofnewshoesforZahra 16 Paragraph1 Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead Paragrap2 Filledwithdelight Aliwalkedhomequickly ContinuationWriting Whatwouldyouwrite Describetheactionandfeelingafterthecrash Action Whatwouldyouwrite DescribethejoywhenAlibroughtshoesbackhome DescribeZahra sreactiontoAli Feelings 站起来往前冲咬紧牙关挥汗如雨 nervoushappyexcitedmovedgrateful Ali Zahra shoes race prize excitedly promise runners third collided 17 DescribeAli sactionafterthecrash struggletohisfeet grithisteeth runasfastashislegscouldcarryhim gatherallhisstrength dripwithsweat withsweatdripping dashforward DescribethejoywhenAlibroughtshoesbackhome DescribeZahra sreactiontoAli can tconcealhisexcitement Happytearswelledupinhereyes beoverwhelmedbyenormousjoy throwherselfintohisarms Withtearyeyes theyhuggedtogether 18 Whatisthethemeforthewriting Alikepthispromisebecauseofhis braveryperseveranceloveforhissister 19 Assignment Writethepassage 20 Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead Refusingtogiveupatthispoint hejumpedtohisfeetandranasfastashecould Hedashedacrossthefinishlineandwonthefourthprize Thinkinghewouldlethersisterdown Alicouldn thelpsobbing JustthenhesuddenlyheardtheannouncementfromthebroadcastthathewonthethirdprizeastherunnerwhocollidedwithAliwasdisqualifiedforbreakingtherule Holdingtheshoesclosetohischestduringtheawardceremony Alifeltoverjoyedandrelievedasheeventuallywontheshoesforhissister 21 Filledwithdelight Aliwalkedhomequickly Hecouldnotwaittoseehissisterandsharethethrillingnews Onhisarrival AlifoundZahrawaswaitingoutside Shewasreallynervouswhetherherbrotherhadbroughtherwhatshewasexpectin