高考英语短文改错抓分练习（2）.doc

2014高考英语短文改错抓分练习（2）及答案【甘肃省武威六中2013模拟题（4）】短文改错(共10小题；每小题i分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。may i have your attention, please? i have an announcement make.the student union is going to hold a party in saturday evening, august 15, to welcome my friends from the united states. the party will be hold in the roof garden of the main building. it will begin at 7:30 p.m. there will have music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gift. everybody may bring a small gift on this purpose. remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wish.dont forget: 7:30, saturday evening, roof garden, main building. there is sure to be a lot of fun. everybody is welcomed.答案may i have your attention, please? i have an announcement make. tothe student union is going to hold a party in saturday evening, august 15, to onwelcome my friends from the united states. the party will be hold in the roof garden our heldof the main building. it will begin at 7:30 p.m. there will have music, dancing, singing, begames and exchange of gift. everybody may bring a small gift on this purpose. exchanging gifts forremember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wish. wishesdont forget: 7:30, saturday evening, roof garden, main building. there is sure to be a lot of fun. everybody is welcomed. welcome【解析】1、 该句子用的是have sth to do而不是have sb do, 在make前加to 。2、 指某一天的上下午时用介词on而不用in。3、 此处的fiends应是讲话一方的朋友，是复数概念，将my改为our。4、 根据句意，此处是将来被动，应将hold改为held。5、 表示从在的有用there be不是there have, 应将have改为be。6、 此处的exchange与dancing, singing,是并列关系，应将exchange改为exchanging。7、 此处的gift是大家交换，是复数，应将gift改为gifts。8、 根据句意，此处是为了这一目的，应是for this purpose; 而on purpose“故意”。9、 此处的wish应是复数概念，所以将wish改为wishes。10、welcome一次即可作动词，又可作形容词，所以，应将welcomed改为welcome二多余词多词一般为：冠词/连词/介词/系词be 助词等。【1】连词多余：*they did not want breakfast because that they were going out early in the morning.解析：连词多余，故此去掉 (that)，原句是状语从句。【2】介词多余：*the crowd waiting for to greet them in england was very surprised.(for)解析：没有宾语，所以去掉for。【3】冠词多余：*suddenly i caught a sight of my english teacher in the crowd.解析：固定短语，catch sight of :偶然看见。【4】系词/助词多余：*my mother was asked : “have you taken medicine ?”解析：根据句意，是妈妈问：故为主动语态。三：缺词缺词一般为：冠词/连词/介词/系词be 助词/【1】缺介词*he was looking for a glass the cupboard (in)解析：根据句意，in the cupboard 做状语。【2】缺冠词*however, the popular teacher is at same time the one who should be strict with students.(the)解析：形容词same 和the 搭配使用,故给same前加 the。【3】缺连接词*in one class, i learned it rained (why)解析：根据句子意思可知，缺连接词，句意为：“在一节课上，我知道了下雨的原因”。【4】缺系词*what your favorite sport ? (is)解析：句子中缺系词，在what加is.【专题训练与高考预测】此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行做出判断，如无错误，在刻行右边横线上画一个勾（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行在边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词注意：原行没能错的不要改passage 1 miss chinaguan qi, a 21-years-old college student from jilin 1._ province, had won the miss china 2003 beauty pageant 2._ in sanya, hainan province, on september 21. 3._ besides judged on their looks, the 32 competitors 4._ were tested on their write ability, english skills, 5._ team-work and generally knowledge. miss guan qi 6._ impressed the judges who present with her excellent 7._ replies during the question or answer section. she will 8._ represent(代表) chinese in the final of miss world 9._ to be holding in sanya on december 6. 10._ key:11. 21-years-old -21-year-old 2. had won -won3. 4. judged- being 5. written- writing 6. generally- general 7.去掉 who 或 who -were 8. or -and 9. chinese- china 10. holding- held 【甘肃省天水一中2013模试】 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分） （请在答题纸上作答，否则无效）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 last saturday, mom and i went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. when we got to a big store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. there were so many of them that it spent us quite a while to decide which one to buy. finally, under the help of the shop assistant, he selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. immediately, we returned back home to show itto my grandpa. seeing it, he was very happy and couldnt wait to put on. but we were annoyingto find something was wrong with the zipper. hurriedly, i took it back to the store and explained the shop assistant the problem .to my satisfaction, she is very kind and helped me choose another one patiently. stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, smilingcontently. how delighted i was! 参考答案 may 18，2013短文改错：last saturday, mom and i went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. when we got to a big store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. there were so many of them that it variousspent us quite a while to decide which one to buy. finally, under the help of the shop assistant, took withhe selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. immediately, we returned back home to show itweto my grandpa. seeing it, he was very happy and couldnt wait to put on. but we were annoying it annoyed to find something was wrong with the zipper. hurriedly, i took it back to the store and explained the shop assistant the problem. to my satisfaction, she is very kind and helped me choose to was another one patiently. stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, standingsmiling contently. how delighted i was! 短文改错today i showed some foreign friend around our city. 1._we started off in car from the friendship hotel at 8:00 a. m. 2._we first got to jinshan park. we are all struck by its 3._beautiful flowers on show. then, we visited the city museum. 4._we saw plenty of valuable things, from that we learned a lot 5._about the city. after that, they drove to jinshan temple. that is 6._a beautiful place of interest in our city, but there we enjoyed 7._the wonderfully scenery of the sea. we had a delicious lunch at the 8._seafood restaurant and we returned back at noon.all the foreign 9._friends were pleased with my arrangement. we did have the 10_wonderful time today.key 21.friend-friends 2.in by 3.arewere 4right 5.thatwhich 6.they-we 7.butand 8.wondef