云南省西双版纳傣族自治州民族中学高考英语 书信体作文写作技巧 突破写作“壁垒”和增分技巧作文素材.docVIP

云南省西双版纳傣族自治州民族中学 高考英语作文 书信体作文写作技巧-突破写作“壁垒”和增分技巧教学目标:1. 通过例句认识几种写作中常见的句式错误。2. 通过例句和练习学会分析并解决写作中的”壁垒”长句和疑难词汇。3. 学会几种增加写作分数的技巧。4. 学会举一反三，将技巧运用于写作之中。教学重点:1. 长句的翻译技巧。2. 疑难词汇的解决之道。3. 增分的小技巧。教学难点:1. 句子正确结构的把握。2. 学会运用常见词汇进行不同表达。3. 将技巧运用于实践。教学材料：本课件所有句子均来自近五年各地高考和模拟的真题，典型错误例句选自本班学生在训练时候所写。材料贴近学生学习实际，与高考密切相关。学生分析：本班学生写作有一定基础很差，但是很多人写作时候，采取生搬硬套或者用中文式英语直译, 而且词汇量小，很多作文中的词汇不会写或者写错。教学方法:合作性学习，交际型教学教学步骤:step 1：greeting（问候）t: good morning class. do you like english writing?t: how do you think of your english writing？t: you must have some difficulties in writing. now, lets learn some skills to improve our english writing.step 2: lead in（导入）t: what difficulties did you meet in your writing?.t: today, well learn to solve these two difficulties.(看ppt) 1.遇到长句怎么写？ 2.遇到不会写的单词怎么办？step 3: break the “reefs” (突破写作“壁垒”)1. 突破长句t: now, lets look at these sentences. they are from your writings. sample sentences: 1.我是一个在你们学校学习英语的学生。 im a study english student in your school. 2.我可以和来自其他国家的学生交流。 i can communicate with come from other countries students. 3. 我很抱歉我不能参加你们下星期举行的聚会了。 im sorry i cant take part in your next week holds party.solution one：分而化之 1. 我是一个在你们学校学习英语的学生。 im a student and im studying english in your school. 2.我可以和来自其他国家的学生交流。 i can communicate with other students. they come from different countries. 3.我很抱歉我不能参加你们下星期举行的聚会了。 i heard that you will hold a party next week, but im sorry i cant take part in it.solution two：巧用从句 1. 我是一个在你们学校学习英语的学生。 im a student who is studying english in your school. 2.我可以和来自其他国家的学生交流。 i can communicate with other students who come from different countries. 3.我很抱歉我不能参加你们下星期举行的聚会了。 im sorry i cant take part in your party which will be held next week.solution three：利用非谓语代词. 1. 我是一个在你们学校学习英语的学生。 im a student studying english in your school. 2.我可以和来自其他国家的学生交流。 i can communicate with other students coming from different countries. 3.我很抱歉我不能参加你们下星期举行的聚会了。 im sorry i cant take part in your party to be held next week.practice ：练习 1.你可以在你住的宾馆门口乘坐332路公交车。(2012 天津模拟) you can take bus 332 in front of the hotel where you are living. 2. 你能不能给我一张苏琳的三岁生日照片？(2008宁海卷） could you give me a photo of sulin （which is） taken on her third birthday. 3.感谢你们在英国对我的细心照顾。 you took care of me carefully when i was in england. thank you very much. 4. 我们俱乐部开展了一项为期两个月的活动。（2010湖南） our club has an activity and it will last for two months. our club has an activity, which will last for two months.2. 突破难词method one：偷梁换柱 即当我们遇到不会写的词或者忘记其拼写的词，为了不写错别字，可将其换为意思相近的词或短语。 1.我们应该养成乐观的生活态度。（08年辽宁） 原句：we should form an optimistic attitude of life. 换词后：we should have a good attitude of life. 2.我写信是为了告诉你欢送会(farewell party)的相关事宜。（2012天津） 原句：im writing to tell you some related matters about the farewell party. 换词后：im writing to tell you something about the farewell party.method two：旁敲侧击 当我们正面没法翻译该词意思时候，我们可以根据其意思用另外的话表达其意思。 1. 我是你们报纸的忠实读者。(2011全国) 原句：im a devoted reader of your newspaper. 取巧后：i read your newspaper everyday. 2.你们的报纸兼顾国内外新闻。 原句：your newspaper covers national news international news. 取巧后：your newspaper has both chinese news and other countries news. 3.汽车导致了空气污染和交通拥堵。 原句：cars result in air pollution and traffic-jam. 取巧后：as cars become more and more, our air is no longer clear and our traffic is no longer fluent.practice：练习 1.我听说你们公司要招聘一位英文秘书。（） i heard that your company needs an english secretary. 2. 每周工作四小时，报酬面议。（2010辽宁） you need to work 4 hours everyday and we will talk about the money when we meet. 3.目前的英语教材（english textbook）话题广泛，图片丰富。（2012辽宁） the present english textbook covers/has many different kinds of topics. whats more, you can find many beautiful pictures in it. 4.苏华和李江在打篮球时发生了争执。 suhua and lijiang had something unhappy during the basketball gamestep 3：增分技巧tip one：良好的书写，合理地分段。（ppt 展示几幅学生作品的实拍图像）目的：良好的书写和合理的分段是写作得高分的保障。tip two：巧用代词，掩饰错误（对比分析）samples：原句 high exam is coming. .as we know, high exam is very important for us. can you give me some advice on high exam? i heard that you will hold a xialingying in singapore. im writing to apply to join in the xialingying.i want to join in the xialingying, because巧用代词改后：（观察不同之处） high exam is coming. .as we know,it is very important for us. can you give me some advice on it? i heard that you will hold a xialingying in singapore. im writing to apply to join in the it.i want to join in the it, because目的：巧用代词取代文中不会写的词汇，避免重复地出现错误。tip three: 不走寻常路，突出特色samples： 1.学习英语对我们很重要。 it is important for us to study english. studying english is important for us. 2. 你能不能给我一些建议? can you give me some advice? i wonder if you can give some advice. 3.我期待你的回信。 im looking forward to your letter im longing to/eager to receive your le