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f单元书面表达目录f单元书面表达1f1书面表达记叙文1f2 书面表达议论文4f3 书面表达说明文11f4 书面表达应用文12f5书面表达夹叙夹议文20f1书面表达记叙文【英语卷（解析）2015届河北省邯郸市馆陶县一中高三7月调研考试（201407）】f1第二节 书面表达（满分25分）一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、1、 家庭2、 工作【来.源：全,品中&高*考*网】3、 业余生活注意：1、字数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好 i often imagine what my life will be like in the future.【范文】one possible version i often imagine what my life will be like in the future. i think my life will be very different in ten years. i will be twenty-eight years old by then. i will have my own family. probably with a lovely child. i hope i will work in a computer company as a program designer. i will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, i will do a good job in whatever i 【试题分析】考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语 be different 不同；get along well with 与。相处融洽；in my free time在我的业余时间；take exercise锻炼；i often imagine what my life will be like in the future.在这个句子出现what引导的宾语从句；i will do a good job in whatever i do这个句子中whatever引导名词性从句。in a work, my life will be much richer and more colorful.,在这个句子运用比较级，表示越来越。【英语卷（解析）2016届云南省玉溪一中高一下学期期末考试（201407）】f1 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的作文如下。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或者修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处）不计分。ive learned that you reach beijing last month for chinese learning. how are you getting along your chinese studies? im pleasing to tell you that ill go to beijing to take part in an english speech contest this summer vacation. however, i have a trouble preparing it. i dont know how to gather useful information of your speech. and i am unfamiliar with the language style of the speech article, that is total different from the common article. could you give me some advices on the above problems?looking forward to hear from you!解析：第一行：reach改为reached：last month 是一般过去时时态的时间状语。 along后加with：get along with 是固定句型。第三行：pleasing改为pleased：表示“感到”用v.ed；表示“令人”用v.ing.第四行：去掉trouble前面的a；trouble是不可数名词，前面不可以放不定冠词； preparing后加for：prepare for，为做准备。第五行：your改为my；根据上下文逻辑关系，应当是我的演讲；that改为which：非限制性定语从句不能用that引导。第六行：total改为totally：修饰形容词用副词； advices 改为advice：advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式。最后一行：hear改为hearing：look forward to 中to 是介词，后面用动名词做宾语。【英语卷（解析）2016届广东省湛江第一中学高一下学期期末考试（201407）】f1 vi. 写作 第一节 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）厦门方特梦幻王国(xiamen fangte magic kingdom)是我国新建的一座大型主题公园。假设你叫张娟，请根据以下内容给外国朋友凯特写一封邮件，介绍这一主题公园，并邀请她暑假一起到那里游玩。 写作内容 位置美丽的海滨城市厦门开放时间2013年4月28日面积约240公顷特色以科幻和互动体验而出名，将高科技与中国传统文化相融合，创造出一个充满幻想和刺激的神奇天地主要活动精彩表演、多种娱乐活动 参考词汇 公顷 hectare 科幻 science fiction 互动interaction 高科技 high-tech , im very glad to have a chance to introduce a wonderful theme park to you . why not come to visit it with me this summer holiday? im looking forward to your early reply. yours, zhang juan 【答案】dearkate,im very glad to have a chance to introduce a wonderful theme park to you.xiamen fangte magic kingdom, which lies in xiamen, a beautiful city by the sea, is a newly-built theme park. the kingdom, opened on april 28, 2013, covers an area of nearly 240 hectares. the theme park is famous for science fiction and interaction experience. whats more, by combining high-tech with traditional chinese culture, the kingdom creates a magic world full of fantasied and excitement. you can take part in a variety of entertainments and enjoy performances there.why not come to visit it with me this summer holiday? im looking forward to your early reply. yours,zhangjuan【思路点拨】 本文是一封email，主要内容已经给出，学生很容易把握要点。注意写作要求是用5个句子表达出主要内容，考察学生的概括能力。【解析】该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用定语从句加同位语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了whats more等连接词。本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，是一篇佳作。f2 书面表达议论文【英语卷(解析)2015届安徽省六校教育研究会高三第一次联考试卷（201408）】第二节 书面表达（满分25分）现在的孩子由于被父母管教,呵护太多,渐渐失去一些自我管理和生活能力。当独自一个人时就会难以自律,甚至会加剧一些不良习惯。假如你一个人在家时,你觉得你该怎样做才能有利于自己的成长？请以alone at home为题写一篇短文。要求：1内容需涵盖2-3个具体做法。2字数：120左右。【答案】【知识点】f2 书面表达议论文【范文】alone at home at present, most parents are worried a lot about their children, so they care about them too much. under the parents control, the children have lost interest in many things. when we are at home, we often lose control of ourselves, so our parents will feel more worried and promise never to let us alone at home. to comfort our parents, what should we do while alone at home? in fact, there is a lot interesting to do except surfing on the internet, playing games and so on. in my opinion, we should read books and do our homework first. then, we may listen to some music and read some books and newspapers. also, we can take some exercise to keep fit. i believe that if we do so, our parents will give us more free time and never be worried about our being alone at home. 【思路点拨】 本文主要从父母对孩子管制太多以致于不敢让孩子单独呆在家里入手，引出孩子在家应该做些什么以让父母放心。第二段作者提出了自己的观点，单独一人在家应该做些什么，多做些有益身心成长的事情，这样父母就不会再为孩子担心了。 文中使用了under the control of，keep fit等高级短语；也使用了our being alone at home动名词短语作宾语；还使用了believe的宾语从句，从句中又加入了if条件句；还使用四次了不定式等等，充分说明该作者深厚的语言功底。【英语卷(解析）2015届浙江省温州市十校联合体（温州中学等）高三上学期期初联考（201408）】第二节：书面表达（满分30分）假如你叫李华，今年暑假即将跨入高三的学习，压力很大，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下：知心话感恩感谢父母的关心、鼓励 对父母的期望1. 多加交流2. 适时提供帮助学习打算考生自拟（至少写两点）注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。 2. 词数：120左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数）。dear mom and dad,with the senior three approaching, i really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!_mom and dad, i am quite confident about my future. wish you good health and a happy life. yours sincerely, li hua 【答案】【知识点】f2 书面表达议论文【范文】dear mom and dad, with the senior three approaching, i really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you! during the years, i always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. thanks to your constant encouragement, i have been making remarkable progress in my studies. since it will be less than one month before the exam, im undergreatpressure now. i would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state. i am fully aware of the responsibilities i am shouldering. i have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for i believe hard work is the key to success.just as the saying goes,no pains, no gains. meanwhile, i will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myselffromthe heavy work of studies. mom and dad, i am quite confident about my future. wish you goodhealthand a happy life. yours sincerely, li hua【思路点拨】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。【英语卷（解析）2015届云南省玉溪一中高三上学期第一次月考（201409）】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）人们常说“字如其人”。据一项调查显示，有858的中学生说自己的字迹不好看，而他们又不想改善字迹，其理由有很大差别。请根据下图内容用英语写一篇短文，说明该现象并发表看法。注意：1词数120左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）； 2可适当增加细节。nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting._ 【答案】【知识点】f2 书面表达议论文【范文】nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting. according to a recent survey, about 85. 8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. yet for various reasons, many students dont want to improve their handwriting. 51. 5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32. 3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice . 10. 9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.as the saying goes, “writing style shows the man ”. beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.【思路点拨】该文是一议论文，主要讨论学生应该不应该改善写字状况，并清晰表述人们的观点，故应用一般现在时和第三人称。 文中使用了宾语从句，there be句型，so that引导的结果状语从句，as引导的非限制性定语从句等；还使用的高级词汇survey，beneficial，emphasis等；还使用了according to，yet，therefore等连接词，让文章一气呵成，等等这一切亮点都在告诉我们作者的英语功底深厚。【英语卷（解析）2015届江西省师大附中等五校高三第一次联考（201408） (1)】第三节：书面表达（满分25分）在英语课堂上，你的周围有一些学习效率高的同学，他们表现突出，这与他们良好的习惯是分不开的。请就此话题用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，举一两个例子说明他们的良好习惯，并谈谈你的看法。【答案】【知识点】f2 书面表达议论文【范文】some students have always been very efficient at schoolwork, among whom, li, monitor of our class, is an example. he distinguishes himself as the most productive student in the class.when asked why he is always so productive, li responded that it was some good habits that benefited him greatly and enabled him to be quite effective at schoolwork. li always has a strictly-followed plan, for he believes that efficiency depends on good organization. besides, he makes full use of his time. he listens attentively and takes notes in class, keeping close pace with the teacher. after class, he not only finishes the homework but also makes sure that consolidation work has been done. moreover, he attaches great importance to critical thinking, with which he never accepts anything blindly. from li we can learn that a students good performance and success is closely connected with his good habits. good habits are very important. we may benefit from them or suffer from the absence of them.【思路点拨】 本文是议论文，要求学生就好的学习习惯可提高学习效率进行讨论并举例说明，故应用一般现在时和第三人称。 文章使用了现在完成时、一般现在时兼有一般过去时，且使用得当，足见作者语言功底。文中使用了when与过去分词连用做状语；高级词汇efficient，enable，suffer from，distinguish等；还使用了besides，moreover等关联词以及with which引导的非限制性定语从句等让文章一气呵成，堪称佳作。【英语卷（解析）2015届湖南省师大附中高三第一次月考（201409）】directions: write an english composition according to the instructions given below in chinese.不吃饭则饥，不读书则愚。十余年书海泛舟，哪一本是你的最爱呢？请以my favorite book 为题，介绍这本书的大致内容并说明它给你的启示。注意：1.书名可以用汉语拼音。2全文不少于120词。_one possible version：【答案】【知识点】f2 书面表达议论文【范文】my favorite bookreading books not only broadens our horizon, but also enriches our minds. some books are to be overlooked, others are to be tasted, and some few to be chewed, digested all life long. so far, i have read numerous books, such as magazines, novels, story books and so on. yet one of the books that i like best is my life story.it was created in 1902 by an american writerhelen keller, a blind, deaf and dumb person. in the book, she wrote that she had not been able to see, hear or speak since the age of one year and seven months, which made her desperately sad. when she was seven years old, she knew miss sullivan, her private tutor. helen was getting happier every day. then, miss sullivan helped her learn how to write english words. at first, miss sullivan wrote some words on helens hands with her own fingers again and again. helen tried as much as possible to remember words and her efforts paid off. after that, she wrote and published many famous works, among which is my life story. my life story described her hard struggle to become an outstanding writer and educationist across the world.it shows us a universal truth: nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it! this is why i like it best.【思路点拨】 本文是说明文，主要介绍学习自己最喜欢的一本书，学生很容易把握要点，也容易写出自己的感想和评价。【解析】该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用动名词短语做主语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了someothers等连接结构。文中使用了被动语态、非限制性定语从句、when引导的时间状语从句、if引导的条件状语从句等等。本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，是一篇佳作。 【英语卷（解析）2015届广西桂林十八中高三上学期第一次月考（201409）】笫二节 书面表达（满分25分）据报道，某女青年持假文凭就职某公司。她能力较强，工作出色，但后假文凭被查出，公司以她缺乏诚信为由解雇了她。你认为公司这种做法如何？我们应该看重诚信还是能力? 请谈谈你的看法。注意：词数100左右 参考词汇：假文凭 fake diploma 诚信 honesty【答案】【知识点】f2 书面表达议论文【范文】【思路点拨】范文作者针对“有能力女青年因论文造假被开除而引发的能力与诚信的讨论”一事发表自己的观点。开篇使用了短语in favor of (支持) 点明自己的观点。紧接着又用一句话指出了诚信比能力重要。然后又通过举例子，列事实来证明自己的观点。最后一段作者再次点明自己的观点。本文论述结构严谨，条理清晰，词汇丰富，句式多变，长短句交替使用。整篇作文使用较多语法，如状语从句、非谓语动词、定语从句，给文章增色不少。【英语卷（解析）2015届浙江省重点中学协作体高考摸底测试（201408）】f2 第二节：书面表达（共1题，满分30分）最近，不少城市发出了“减少白色污染”的倡议，得到广大市民的支持。请以“ people should not be encouraged to use plastic bags ”为话题在博客上发表简单评论。注意：词数120左右。参考词汇：可分解的degradable 窒息choke_ _【答案】plastic bags are very popular in our daily life. people go shopping with plastic bags in free markets, super markets, or departments. but plastic bags are one of the major pollutants. we can see littered plastic bags thrown everywhere, especially along the railways or highways, in the parks or in the rivers. because plastics is not degradable, once it is thrown in the environment, it will exist for a long time and pollute soil and water. they are even dangerous to wildlife as thousands of sea animals are killed each year when they eat or are choked by plastic bags. whats more, “white pollution” creates a bad image for china.so government should make a law to forbid the use of plastic bags in department stores and supermarkets. meanwhile, people should be encouraged to replace them with paper bags or cloth bags.【思路点拨】 本文是一简单评论，主要内容已经给出，学生很容易把握要点。本文应使用一般现在时，并使用第三人称。【解析】该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构和词汇的应用基本正确，特别是使用了once和when以及as引导的状语从句，使用主动语态和被动语态等以及especially，littered，image等高级词汇的应用恰如其分；自然地使用了语句间的连接成分，如：but，meanwhile，whats more等的使用，使全文流畅结构紧凑。f3 书面表达说明文【英语卷（解析）2016届云南省玉溪一中高一下学期期末考试（201407）】f3书面表达(满分25分)假设你是育才中学的学生刘超，你的美国朋友steven发邮件告诉你，今年暑假他将来北京。请你给他写一封回信，要点包括： 1.问候； 2.推荐（景点、美食等）；3.表达期待。注意：1、词数：100左右 ；2、开头已为你写好；3、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 。dear steven，how are things going? yours,liu chao one possible version:dear steven, how are things going?im so glad that you are coming to beijing this summer vacation. you asked many questions in your letter, and now let me answer them. to start with, beijing, the capital of china, is a charming city with a long history. you can find all kinds of delicious food in beijing, of which the most famous is the roast beijing duck. i hope youll enjoy it. besides, there are a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting, such as the great wall, the summer palace and the forbidden city. these scenic spots attract millions of tourists each year. i guarantee you will have a wonderful time here in beijing. i really miss you so much. looking forward to your arrival.yours,liu chaof4 书面表达应用文【英语卷(解析)2015届浙江省“温州八校”高三返校联考（201408）】第二节：书面表达 （满分30分）请根据下列提示以 “helping others can help you” 为题写一篇参加志愿者活动给我们带来的益处的英语短文。1. 获得生活经验和技能；2. 结交有趣的朋友；3. 回报社会，消除理解障碍；4. 你自己的看法。注意：120词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）。 helping others can help youvolunteering has a meaningful, positive effect on your community. but did you know that it can have many benefits for you, too? 【答案】【知识点】f4 书面表达应用文【范文】helping others can help youvolunteering has a meaningful, positive effect on your community. but did you know that it can have many benefits for you, too? to begin with, volunteering enables you to gain some valuable life experience as well as work skills, which i think lays a solid foundati