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历年考题分析及准备谨以此文献给可爱的骆诗递同学，预祝她高分通过四级2009.61. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习3. 你对于网络的看法 2008.121. 一次性塑料袋给人们生活带来便利，广为使用2 由此带来的问题， 举例子 3 限制使用塑料袋的意义，理论与实际相结合2008.6娱乐活动多种多样2. 娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能有危害性3. 作为大学生我们的看法 2007.12各大学开设了多种多样的选修课2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3、以你自己为例 2007.61.活动主要内容 2.加入好处 3.如何加入 2006.12许多人喜欢看cctv 春节晚会2、但有的人认为应该取消3、你的看法 2006.6校学生会组织暑假社会志愿活动，现场招聘志愿者本次志愿者活动的目的、内容及安排报名调价即联系方式规律：1.主要为记叙文；2.三段式，前两段叙述，后面一段是议论；3.最后一段大多需要谈自己的看法；老师批英语试卷时：判卷时，每个老师桌子上都会有一大叠卷子，远远超过我们平时桌子上的复习资料，你想，只要是个人，谁会有耐心仔细看那么多的英语文章，而且必须规定每天批多少份试卷，每天关在小屋里看偶们这些无聊低级的文章，心情烦躁，不许上网，不许QQ，不让开MSN，更不可能写博客，好人也会被折磨疯的。所以他们判卷时，一般只看开头和收尾句，再大体看一下字数够不够，有的心情好的老师，还会看有没有简单低级错误的单词，因此针对这样的情况：1.我们的目标不是写一篇惊世骇俗的文章，而是尽量在三十分种内不说一句错话，不写一个错单词；2.写作文时，最好用黑色笔，而不要用其他颜色的，另外，千万要注意书面整齐，一般判卷老师大都是近世眼，对于黑色他们更为敏感，更习惯；3.书写也是，越整洁，批卷老师看得越清晰，心情就越好，那么分数也就越高！如果遇见写错了单词，千万不要胡成一团，用一个轻斜杠轻轻划掉，老师说不定看不见，但是整体上是整洁的。如何准备：1.背几个经典句型，尽量用在每段的首末句，一般一个作文三段，则背六个句子就行了，想法用在每段的首末句，经典句型见下面；2.在作文中用闪光词，经典的闪光词见下面；3.段中填充一些题干中的一些事实、要求描述进去，尽量不要出现汉语拼音和错单词，则最多十分钟能写一个中上档的作文。经典替换词：1、individuals,characters, folks替换(people, persons)2、positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good3、dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad ，如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换Eg：An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4、(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。Eg：Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.5、a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some6、harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语，所以要加that)7、affair ,business ,matter 替换thing8、shared 代 common9、reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits )10、for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion11、Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg：Sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12、little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly13、beneficial, rewarding替换helpful14、shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer15、exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very16、hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替换 unnecessary, avoidable17、sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in18、capture ones attention替换attract ones attention.19、facet,dimension,sphere代aspect20、be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear21、give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.22、There are several reasons behind sth 替换.reasons for sth23、desire 替换want.24、pour attention into 替换pay attention to25、bear in mind that 替换remember26、enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)27、interaction替换communication28、frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth29、to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance30、next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！如何写一篇高分作文，仔细揣摩本文，肯定能写高分作文：高分作文标志1：是否长短句交叉；2、是否会使用插入语；3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge替换enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。Computer and I By SimmyI never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 verythrilling 替换 excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.google 替换 searchan army of 替换 a lot ofThe dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popularCoincident with 非常地道的句型，表达“与一致”的意思，替换 With Advancement 替换 developmentPour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter intoCurrent ( currently )替换 nowAppeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be GREatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin withWe can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动Additionally 替换 In addition / BesidesDeliver 替换 sendThere is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,*, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm toEmerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing )Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sidesComputers do play ，do 强调Positive 替换 important / good 等A slice of 替换 a part ofUnfavorable 替换 badImpacts 替换 effects / influencesWe should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入语Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage )Facet 替换 aspect一个简单模板（供参考）Nowadays, there are more and more 某种现象 in 某种场合. It is estimated that 相关数据. Why have there been so many 某种现象? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is 原因一. Besides, 原因二. The third one is 原因三. To sum up, the main cause of 某种现象 is due to 最主要原因. It is high time that something were done upon