高考英语 书面表达系列及参考范文（7）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（7）及参考范文写作（满分25分） 假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“lets ride bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1. 目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2. 骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；节能（energy saving）注意：1.词数：120词左右；3. 演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。good morning, everyone,i am li hua form xingguang middle school. the topic of my speech is“lets ride bicycles”._ _ thank you!*结束下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1. 描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2. 结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；3. 举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。注意：1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。the burden of students has been a hot topic for years,but the load of parents has received little attention,especially from their own children.*结束 假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble) 和乱丢垃圾（to litter)的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100-120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容：1. 说明写信目的；2. 对这些行为进行批评； 3. 提出建议。注意：信的抬头、落款及信得第一句已给出（不计词数）。june 8 , 2011dear mr. headmaster ,i am li yue ,a student from class 1 ,senior ii ._yours faithfullyli yue*结束 【命题趋向】书面表达题旨在测试考生的英语表达能力，考查其是否能够运用英语知识和技能进行交际的能力。2007年全国试卷总共有19套，三套为新课标试题，广东新课标卷作文是两篇，分值为40分。山东新课标卷作文是一篇，但是分值为30分。只有海南和宁夏共同使用的新课标试卷，分值仍然为25分。其它省市试卷作文分值一般都为25分，也有几个省英语作文为3035分。字数的要求一般为100字，但是也有一部分省市试卷要求120-150字。总之分值和字数都有上升的趋势。有15套为中文提示，2套英文提示，2套为图表形式。体裁多为议论文和说明文为主。最近几年多数高考作文试题所给的材料信息很少 ，且增加了写作试题的开放性，使学生自由发挥的余地很大，有利于学生的想象力。作文主题多贴近生活，容易写的话题。.【考点透视】高考作文形式多样，多数有中文提纲，它对作文有一定的文字限制。文体有记叙文，议论文，说明文，但多为说明文，议论文，记叙文很少。【例题解析】一开放试作文：用英语描述一次春游。题目为：a spring outing写作思路：1 确定体裁：记叙文。2 要点：1、时间； 2、地点； 3、上山的路，行走困难；4、同学们互相支持； 5、终于登上山顶； 6、返回3短语和句型的选择：go to a place for an outing;on ones way;reach /get to a place;help each other;the top of the hill;4. 注意分段，并且按时间顺序来写故事。参考范文a spring outinglast thursday we went to changshan for our spring outing. we reached the foot of the hill at 9 a. m. after having a short rest, we began to climb. there was no road but stones and bushes. we had to make a way by ourselves. with the help of the grass, we moved on. while walking, the strong students helped the weak ones. after some time, we were all tried. how we wanted to have a rest, but we couldnt stop. we walked on. at last, we got to the top of the hill. on the top of the hill, we laughed and jumped. it seemed that we were the happiest people in the world. we took some photos there, and then sat down and had something to eat. at 3 p. m. we began to go down. we wished the spring of our country would be with us forever. *结束(2011陕西卷)假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫tigermom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。im the mother of a fourteenyearold. i have a rule for my daughter：be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. she has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that i put too much pressure on her. am i wrong?写作要点：1表明自己的看法；2陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；3提出至少两条建议。要求：1短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。3内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4书写须清晰、工整。hi，tigermom，what puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in china. my idea is _参考范文hi,_tigermom，what_puzzles_you_is_actually_a_puzzle_for_many_parents_in_china_.my_idea_is that it is not quite right for you to do so.although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom , emotion ，health and life attitude should never be ignored.there are many examples around us.some all a students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected .the reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.so i suggest that you take your friends advice.more importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.*结束 (2011江西卷)假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“lets ride bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题。2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活(lowcarbon life)；节能(energy saving)注意：1.词数：120词左右；2演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。good morning，everyone，i am li hua from xingguang middle school. the topic of my speech is “lets ride bicycles”_thank you!参考范文good_morning,_everyone，im_li_hua_from_xingguang_middle_school._the_topic_of_my_speech_is_“lets_ride_bicycles”as is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. however, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.how can we solve the problems then? as far as im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. for one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energysaving. for another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas. whats more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a lowcarbon city by riding bicycles. come on and join us!thank_you！*结束(一)(2011山师附中打靶考试)假设你叫李华，现是山东大学的一名新生。请你根据以下提示，给你中学的英语老师李老师写一封感谢信，表达对他的爱戴和尊敬。词数：120150。提示：1对英语老师李老师教学的评价。2回顾在校时你的心情。3对老师的理解和祝愿。信的开头已经写好，但不计入总词数。dear mr li，im very excited to write to express my thanks to you._yours，li hua参考范文dear_mr_li，im_very_excited_to_write_to_express_my_thanks_to_you._i am now a freshman of shandong university, which i have been dreaming about. mr li, i still remember the days when you taught me english. my english has been improved greatly because of your creative work. however, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed. i was tired of the warning that if i didnt do my best, i wouldnt have the chance to go to college. thanks for your encouragement; if not, i wouldnt have realized my dream. and now i really understand you. i wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. are you still so busy? how i miss you!hoping to hear from you soon.yours，li_hua (2011山师附中打靶考试)假设你叫王平，现在在英国工作，你的朋友陈立写信告诉你他打算赴英留学，想知道初到英国可能会遇到的困难。请你用英语给他写一封回信，信的内容应包括：1可能会遇到的困难：语言方面的障碍、饮食的不习惯、想家孤独等；2鼓励他并表示愿意帮助他。注意：1词数：120150。2.信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。dear chen li，im glad to hear from you. you asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here in uk._yours，wang ping参考范文dear_chen_li,_im_glad_to_hear_from_you