29观点论证.ppt

观点论证 主题 时间比金钱重要 论点 Peopleoftensaytimeismoney butinfacttimeismorevaluablethanmoney 用论据 论证 Whenmoneyisspent wecanearnitback butwhentimeislost itwillneverreturn Thetimewehaveinallourlifeislimited anditisevenmorepreciousforusseniorstudents Timeiseasilylostbecauseofthefactthatitisnotscarcethoughitislimited soitshouldbevaluedmost 结论 Inaword weshouldgetintothehabitofsavingtimeandneverleavewhatcanbedonetodayuntiltomorrow 灵活运用超级模仿 观点论证也就是议论文体 作者提出某个观点 然后通过摆事实 讲道理等方式阐明理由 证明自己的观点 然后得出结论 即 论点 论证 结论 观点论证常用一般现在时 但述说过去的事实时 可用过去时态 预测将来时 要用将来时态 也经常使用被动语态 有时假设一种虚拟情况时 还需要用虚拟语气 一 句式模板1 提出论点 Inmyopinion nolessonismoreimportantthanoneonpersonalsafety 2011揭阳一模 Itis ofcourse notrightforchildrennottotakeonanyresponsibilityinthehousehold 2011广州四校联考 3 Inmyopinion detention 留堂 hasitsadvantagesineducatingmisbehavedstudents 2 得出结论 Andonlywithagoodsenseofself protectioncanweliveasafeandhappylife 2011揭阳一模 Soifpossible I llcertainlychoosetogetuplate 2011珠海一模 Allinall thestudentsshouldbetaughttorelievestressinamoregentle peacefulandreasonablewayratherthanhittingawall 2011华附三模 二 超级仿写建设绿色校园的重要性 2011梅县东中 论点 Itisofgreatimportancetobuildagreencampus 论证 Obviously agrowingnumberofpeoplearebeginningtorealizethatitisourdutytodothejob sincetheconceptofagreenworldhasbecomethefocusofthesociety Notonlyisgreencampusenvironmentally friendly butalsoithasagreatinfluenceonstudents health 结论 Therefore creatingagreencampusisofgreatbenefittous 2 读写任务 2009佛山二模 Ifyougot100 000dollarsbychance howwouldyouspendit Herearesomeanswersofourreaders ElizabethStahl Iwoulddonateittoanartsprogramforyoungboysandgirls Thedecreaseinthecreativeartsprogramssuchasmusic artanddramaintheschoolshaveleftmanyyoungartistsoutinthecoldinacademics Muchlikesports artinanyform cananddoesmakeadifferenceinyoungpeople slives MarjorieC AlthoughIagreewithElizabethStahl100 I dgivemymoneytoeachofmychildrentoensuretheverybestofeducationsformytwogranddaughters Clark Withonehundredthousanddollars IwoulddistributeitamongthosewhomIknowthatareinneedandaskthattheyinturnthensharehalfofwhatthey vereceivedwithothersthattheypersonallyknowareinneed CarolWilson First Iwouldtakecareofallmydebtsandgaingoodcreditagain andthenIwouldspendtherestonanewcar Afterallsaidanddone takeanicelongvacation 写作内容 美国某网站的论坛就 HowWouldYouSpend100 000Dollars 为主题进行调查 上文是一些网友的回复 你阅读了上文后 准备就该主题发表自己的观点 内容要点包括 1 以约30个词概括上述网友的观点 2 然后以约120个词谈谈你的观点 并包括以下要点 如果你有1百万 你想做的一件或几件事情 说明你这样做的理由 你的结论 写作要求 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点 也可以参照阅读材料的内容 但不得直接引用原文中的句子 评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯 Peoplewouldspend100 000dollarsindifferentwaysiftheygotitbychance Somewoulddonateittocharityforvariouspurposeswhilesomeotherswouldtakecareoftheirownbusinesswiththemoney IfIhadthechancetogetthatmoney Iwouldfirstsetaside20 000dollarsformyuniversityeducationandthendonatetheresttothechildrenwhosufferedfromadevastatingearthquakelastMay 论点 Thereisnodoubtthatagoodeducationisofvitalimportancetoaperson 论据 Itisthrougheducationthatknowledgeandinformationarereceivedandspreadthroughouttheworld Anuneducatedpersonisshutofffromtheoutsideworldbecauseheisclosedtoalltheknowledgehecangain Incontrast ane