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Writing 1 最近几年越来越多的大学生加入打工的队伍 请你结合下表 就这一现象写一篇短文 参考词汇 调查survey家庭教师tutor经济地economically视野outlook Writing 2 Writing 3 1 形式 2 人称 3 时态 4 文体 图表 第一人称第三人称 一般现在时态一般将来时 说明文 审题 4 5 话题 6 内容要点 审题 大学生打工 现象25 的大学生打零工 数字将增至72 常做的零活有 家教 服务员 售货员等 原因支付学费 经济上独立意义获得实用的知识 丰富我们的生活 5 7 结构 一现象二原因三意义 审题 6 Asisshownintherecentsurvey thereareabout25percentofcollegestudentsdopart timejobs Thenumberofcollegestudentsdidpart timejobsincreasingto72percent Theyoftendotutors waitersandsalesmen Writing 7 Asisshownintherecentsurvey thereareabout25percentofcollegestudentsdopart timejobs Asisshownintherecentsurvey about25percentofcollegestudentsdopart timejobs Asisshownintherecentsurvey thereareabout25percentofcollegestudentsdoingpart timejobs Writing 8 Asisshownintherecentsurvey thosewhodopart timejobsmakeup25percent Wecanseefromthesurveythatthosewhodopart timejobsaccountfor25percent Writing 9 Thenumberofcollegestudentsdidpart timejobsincreasingto72percentinsummer Thenumberofcollegestudentsdoingpart timejobswillincreaseto72percentduringsummervacation Thefigurewillincreaseto72percent Writing 10 Theyoftendotutors waitersandsalesmen Theyoftenworkastutors waitersandsalesmen Writing 11 根据最近的调查accordingtoarecentsurvey打零工dopart timejobs当 从事 workas数字将增至72 Thefigurewillincreaseto72 Usefulexpressions 12 Whysomanycollegestudentsdidpart timejobs Becausetheywantedtoearnmoneytopayforthemoneyofschool Theotheristheywantedtobuysomethingwhattheyneed Writing 13 Whysomanycollegestudentsdidpart timejobs Whydotheywantpart timejobs Becausetheywantedtoearnmoneytopayforthemoneyofschool Becausetheywanttoearnmoneytocovertheincreasinghighercollegetuition Writing 14 Theotheristheywantedtobuysomethingwhattheyneed Besides theywanttobuysomethingtheyneed Besides theywanttobuywhattheyneed Writing 15 买一些他们想买的东西buysomethingtheywantbuywhattheywantbuywhatevertheywant Usefulexpressions 16 挣钱earnmoney支付日益增长的学费covertheincreasinghighercollegetuition经济独立beeconomicallyindependent Usefulexpressions 17 Collegestudentsdopart timejobsisverynecessary Onlybyadaptingthesocietyassoonaspossiblecanyouhaveasuccessfullife Writing 18 Collegestudentsdopart timejobsisverynecessary Itisnecessaryforcollegestudentstodopart timejobs Writing 19 Onlybyadaptingthesocietyassoonaspossiblecanyouhaveasuccessfullife Onlybyadaptingtothesocietyassoonaspossiblecantheyhaveasuccessfullife Writing 20 获得一些实用的知识acquiresomepracticalknowledge开阔视野broadentheiroutlook丰富生活enrichtheirlife提高能力improvetheirskills Usefulexpressions 21 第五档作文 很好 完全完成了试题规定的任务 覆盖所有内容要点 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误 但为尽力使用复杂结构较高级词汇所致 具备较强的语言运用能力 有效使用了语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑 22 Seeingfromthesurvey weknowthatthecollegestudentswhodopart timejobsmakeupabout25 Duringsummervacation thisfigurewillincreaseto72percent Collegestudentsareworkingastutors waitersandsalesmen Apossibleversion 23 Thereasonwhythecollegestudentsdopart timejobsisthattheywanttoearnmoneytohelpcovertheincreasinghighercollegetuition Besides theyhopetobeeconomicallyindependentaswellandbuywhatevertheywant Apossibleversion 24 Doingpart timejobsissomeaningfulthatthecollegestudentscanbenefitalotfromit Foronething itenablescollegestudentstogainsocialexperienceandbroadentheiroutlook Apossibleversion 25 Foranother itcanprovidecollegestudentsw