安徽省长丰县高考英语二轮复习 书面表达新练（4）.doc

安徽长丰县2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】新练（4）【2016高考训练】书面表达（满分25分）假如你叫李华，今年暑假即将跨入高三的学习，压力很大，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下：知心话感恩感谢父母的关心、鼓励 对父母的期望1. 多加交流2. 适时提供帮助学习打算考生自拟（至少写两点）注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。2. 词数：120左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数）作文参考范文： dear mom and dad,with the senior three approaching, i really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!during the years, i always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. thanks to your constant encouragement, i have been making remarkable progress in my studies.since it will be less than one month before the exam, im under great pressure now. i would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state.i am fully aware of the responsibilities i am shouldering. i have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for i believe hard work is the key to success.just as the saying goes,no pains, no gains. meanwhile, i will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies.mom and dad, i am quite confident about my future. wish you good health and a happy life. yours sincerely, li hua【2016高考训练】书面表达（满分25分）假定你是高一1班学生李华，在新的学校学习已一个月有余，请根据下列提示，用英语给你的朋友jane写封电子邮件，谈一谈你的高中生活。1. 介绍你的学校和班级2. 你的作息时间3. 你的同学4. 你最喜欢的老师（请将你最喜欢的老师化名为ms. wang）注意：100词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；开头已给出，不计入总词数。dear jane,ive been at senior high school for more than a month. im writing down my thoughts about my new school life._ yours li hua 【参考范文】书面表达dear jane,ive been at senior high school for more than a month. im writing down my thoughts about my new school life.my new school is a well-known school with a long history. there are 50 classes, more than 300 teachers and over 3,500 students in my school. the classrooms are amazing. every room has a computer with a special screen, almost as big as a cinema screen. and there are sixty students in my class, who are all hard-working. im getting on very well with my classmates. my favorite teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called ms. wang, whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers. she has many ways to make her classes lively and interesting. i dont think i will be bored in her class.we usually get up at 5:30 and our class starts at 7:45. i always take part in colorful after-class activities and we go to bed at ten.i am looking forward to hearing from you soon. yours li hua（2014新课标ii）一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、1、 家庭2、 工作3、 业余生活注意：1、次数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好 i often imagine what my life will be like in the future._【考点】考察半开放性作文【写作指导】本文的话题是“十年后的我”，要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活来想象十年以后的自己。文章应该使用将来时和第一人称。要点：1.十年以后的生活和现在是完全不一样，我会成为一个成年人，有了自己的家庭，甚至有了可爱的孩子。2.希望自己能够在自己喜欢的计算机行业工作，做一个程序设计师。工作顺利和同事相处融洽。3.在业余生活中经常参加锻炼，如游泳，登山等等。假期里出去旅游，生活多姿多彩。本文要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【一句多译】我希望我可以在一家电脑公司里做程序设计师。（1）i hope i will work in a computer company as a program designer.（2）i hope i will work in a company which produces computer, and i can design some kinds of very good computer。【参考范文】one possible version i often imagine what my life will be like in the future. i think my life will be very different in ten years. i will be twenty-eight years old by then. i will have my own family. probably with a lovely child. i hope i will work in a computer company as a program designer. i will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, i will do a good job in whatever i do. in my free time, i will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. on my holidays, i will travel around the world. in a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.cerely, li yue书面表达(满分35分) 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以less pressure, better life为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:同学们中普遍存在的压力：学习很努力，成绩不理想；作业太多没时间玩。我的压力：成绩好但与同学相处有困难；与父母缺乏沟通(communicate with)。缓解压力的方法：至少两项。注意: 1、文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。2、 字数：100字左右。格式已为你写好，但不计入总词数。3、 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯，不要逐条翻译。less pressure, better lifehello, boys and girls! pressure is a serious problem in todays world. students in our class are under too much pressure. thats all. thank you!【参考范文】possible version less pressure, better lifehello, boys and girls!pressure is a serious problem in todays world. students in our class are under too much pressure. some students study very hard but they are still poor in their studies. they often worry about their exams. others think they have so much homework to do that they have no time to play.im always under pressure, too. im good at every subject, but its hard for me to get on well with my classmates. i hardl