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短文改错精讲精炼02 6.on saturday afternoon, li hua and wang ping, members from “green eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. they picked it out and found it wounded. thinking it should die without timely help, they took it home. under their treatment and care, the lucky bird got recovered soon. when time came for them to fly the bird, they felt a bit of pity but very delightful i think its worthwhile for him to do such a thing. here i call on the public to show respects for the nature. only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.【答案】on saturday afternoon, li hua and wang ping, members from “green eyes”, was having an wereenvironmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. they caughtpicked it out and found it wounded. thinking it should die without timely help, they took it home. under up might/couldtheir treatment and care, the lucky bird got recovered soon. when time came for them to fly the bird, they felt a bit of pity but very delightful i think its worthwhile for him to do such a thing. here i call on the 去掉of delighted thempublic to show respects for the nature. only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we 去掉the in which/ that/去掉get along well with it.7.our english teacher is a middle-aged woman，who had been teaching english for more than 20 yearsshe is always working hardfor a model teacher for many years， she is kind and friendly to us and very strict with us. in class，she always encourages us speak and read english as much as possible she is quite good at teaching and try to make her lessons live and interestingin her spare she in time，she often teaches us english song and helps us to put on english short playsshe loves us so 10 much as she is always ready to help usin the fact，she is not only our good teacher but also our good friendwe all respect and love him our english teacher is a middle-aged woman, who had been teaching english for more than has20 years. she is always working hard. for a model teacher for many years, she is kind and friendly as / beingto us and very strict with us. in class, she always encourages us speak and read english as but tomuch as possible. she is quite good at teaching and try to make her lessons live and interesting. in tries livelyher spare time, she often teaches us english song and helps us to put on english short plays. she songs loves us so much as she is always ready to help us. in the fact, she is not only our good teacher but that (删除as亦可) also our good friend. we all respect and love him. her8.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号【】，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线【】划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者【从第11处起】不计分。 the day is my dads birthday. this afternoon i went to the shopping center downtown, and bought present for him. then i took the subway train to home. sitting on the train, i thought my dad will be very happy when she saw the present. at the next station, an old lady with two heavy bag got into the train and stood in front of me. she looked tiring. i hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat to her. the old lady thanked me a lot and sat down. seen her smile, i felt happily. i will always ready to help others in the future.第二句present前加a；第三句home前的to去掉；第四句will改为would,she改为he; 第五句bag改为bags,into改为on;第六句tiring改为tired;第九句seen改为seeing, happily改为happy;第十句always 后加be9.【2012银川一中模拟】i just come back from britain last week. i was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the uk from feb.16 to 28. we paid a visit to many places, like london, oxford or the lake district. i learned much about british culture and history in london, where was my favorite. i also liked oxford, in which i saw much more old buildings. the lake district was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. the most excited thing for me in the britain was that i made a lot of friends there.短文改错：i just come back from britain last week . i was luckily enough to be came luckyone of the student from different countries to visit the uk from feb.16 to students 28. we paid a visit to many places ,like london, oxford or andthe lake district. i learned much about british culture and history in london, where was my favorite. i also liked oxford, in which i saw much which manymore old buildings . the lake district was beautiful, but it was pity a that it rained heavily when they were there. the most excited thing we excitingfor me in the britain was that i made a lot of friends there.10.nowadays more and more people are concerning about their health, but how to keep health? first,it is necessary to take any exercise every dayresearch shows that get plenty of exercise makesthe heart beat fast and the lungs work hardersecond, eat more fruits, vegetable and less meatthird, getting rid of bad habits as smoking and drinking is also important way to keep healthysmoking and alcohol drinking injures ones health a great deal, and therefore should be given upif people follow these three ways of keeping fit, theyll great improve their health【参考答案】第一句中的concerning改为concerned，考察词组be concerned about sb/sth关心、挂念某人/某事；health改为healthy，因为keep为连系动词，后面要跟形容词。第二句中any改为some，an