高考英语 书面表达系列及参考范文（40）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（40）及参考范文第二节：写作假设你叫李明，下面是你的一位外国笔友kristie给你写的电子邮件，询问有关小悦悦事件的情况。dear li ming,i learned from a news flash that a two-year-old baby girl was ignored by more than a dozen passers-by after being run over twice in a south china townim very shockedi used to think the chinese were hardworking and kindhearted, and they really were when i was on a visit in china two years agoso i doubt whether it was true newscan you tell me what you learned about this incident?sincerely yours,kristie请你给她回一封邮件，要点如下：1社会陷入自责和反思；2某些路人的冷漠或另有原因，可最终还是有一名拾荒婆婆挺身而出；3单个事件不能代表中国，助人为乐一直是中国传统美德。注意：1不能照抄原信件语句；2可自由发挥添加细节；3词数120左右；4回信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：伦理道德- ethical and moral （adj）; 美德- virtue （n）dear kristie,i was in very low spirits believe me, kristie, and believe in the chinese people!sincerely yours,li ming【参考范文】one possible version:dear kristie,i was in very low spirits when hearing this shocking news, and so was the whole nationall the people have been undertaking a thoughtful review of the ethical and moral challenges we are faced withwhile we blame those hardhearted passers-by, there might be deep reasons behind the scenesfor various reasons there is a growing tendency for people to keep away from being involved in such accidentshowever, on no account shall we tolerate this heartless behaviorluckily in the story you mentioned, an old lady, who earned her life by collecting rubbish, came to the little girls aid and helped rush her to hospitalso we have every reason to believe that the chinese traditional virtues of being ready to help others will remain foreverbelieve me, kristie, and believe in the chinese people!sincerely yours,li ming*结束 请你根据右面表格中的内容写一篇英语短文，介绍2010年上海世博会的情况。 注意： 1短文需包括表格中的全部内容，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 2词数：100左右。参考词汇：世博会the world expo；遗产heritage；促进promote时间2010年5月1日至10月31日地点上海主题better city，better life规模占地面积528平方公里，200多个国家及组织参展目的1保护城市遗产，关注城市发展2寻求发展中国家城市的发展模式3促进人类社会的交流和理解_【参考范文】-one possible version:from may 1st to october 31st, 2010, shanghai will be the focus of the whole world, for the world expo is to be held there and thenits theme is “better city, better life”the large garden, which covers 528 square kilometers, will attract more than 200 countries and organizations to take partthere will be three main things to be done at the expothe first one is how to protect city heritage and concern about the development of citiesthe second is to seek for the best way for city development in the developing countriesthe last aims at promoting the communication and understanding of human societyshanghai is well prepared to welcome friends from all over the world本文是一篇介绍上海世博会的说明文。文章应使用第三人称it或shanghai；文章的时态应用一般现在时。根据表格内容按一定的逻辑顺序展开介绍，把总体概括性内容划为第一段，重点、核心内容放在第二段，最后总结全文。*结束2013高考英语：写作综合训练 【写作书信篇】 假设你叫李明。2010年4月14日，我国青海玉树自治州发生强烈地震，造成严重人员伤亡和财产损失。你校组织赈灾活动，希望每人献出一份爱心，捐献一件学习用品。假如你捐献了一副心爱的圆规（或书包、铅笔盒、图书等），请根据下列提示写一封短信给这位不知名的灾区同学。1. 了解灾区情况，表示同情；2. 你珍爱这件学习用品的原因3. 鼓励灾区同学重建家园并提出自己的建议。注意：1.词数：不少于120个; (信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息；4生词提示：一副圆规： a pair of compasses；玉树自治州：the autonomous prefecture of yushu。dear friend,_hoping to get your early reply. yours truly li ming【参考范文】-one possible version:dear friend,when we learned over the radio and in the newspapers that the autonomous prefecture of yushu was struck by a terrible earthquake on april 14th,2010, making more than 2,000 people killed and even more injured .we became very worried. it is said that many houses were ruined, so you cant have your classes as usual. i wonder if things have improved by now.id like to send you a pair of compasses, which were a present given to me by my sister on my last birthday. i hope it will be of some help to your study.as for yourself, dont lose heart and do be strong-minded when facing the great difficulties for the people all over the country are standing by you. and please keep in touch with me and i will try my best to help you , in addition, the government is trying to help the people in the disaster-hit areas rebuild their homes. i believe the day will soon come when you overcome all the difficulties and live a new life.hoping to get your early reply. yours truly, li ming书信类书面表达是高考常用的一种形式。本文通过玉树地震这一事实，让学生给灾区的学生写一封信，文章素材真实，贴近学生生活，容易激发学生情感，使他们有话可说。文章用第一、二人称叙述；时态用现在时。文章要点：1. 了解灾区情况，表示同情；2. 你珍爱这件学习用品的原因；3. 鼓励灾区同学重建家园并提出自己的建议。*结束写作【看图写话篇】a假如你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“a volunteer day”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图所提供的情景，叙述去年12月5日（the international volunteer day）你班志愿者日活动的完整过程。注意： 1、短文的开头已为你写好。2、词数不少于60。提示词语： patrol vt. 巡视 trim vt. 修整 【参考范文】-possible version:last december 5th our class organized an activity to celebrate the international volunteer day. we decided to spend the afternoon doing something for our school instead of having classes. at the beginning of the first class in the morning, we gathered in our classroom and our monitor told us what we would do. as soon as we were divided into four groups we began to work separately. i was in group 1. my classmates and i were responsible for the security of the school. we patrolled the campus with the guard to make sure everyone was safe at school. the students of group 2 went to the garden to take care of the plants. some were watering the flowers and trees while the others were trimming the bush. the third group helped the cook prepare for the dishes. they washed the vegetables and cut them into small pieces. group 4 worked in the lab where they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order. having got the work done we all felt a sense of achievement. at the end of the last afternoon class we got together again in our classroom and elected the top ten volunteers for the day. what a valuable experience i had in the high school! ill remember it forever. (184)本文为一篇记叙文，其主要考查学生综合运用语言的能力。本题相对比较容易，因为题目中提供了比较具体的情景，而且是学生常见的语言情景。但要注意表达要点要全面并按照时间顺序展开叙述。考生在写作的时候，要尽量避免逐条翻译以及过于平铺直叙。在每一幅图画描述的过程中，可以在紧扣文章的基础上，增加适当的发挥和议论。图画作文若想得到高分，一定要让阅卷人看到文章的时候。有一种身临其境，饶有兴趣的感觉。还要注意表达内容要点时要使用丰富多样的表达方式。包括词汇多样、句法多样，段落结构多样。以上是本题获得高分数的关键。*结束【看图写话篇】b请仔细观察下面两幅图画，理解其含义，然后就“人与自然”这一话题写一篇英语短文。注意: 1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 词数：120左右。【参考范文】-a one possible version：nature is to us what water is to fish. yet we dont always realize it until it is too late. with the development of modern technology, there are more and more people on the earth and fewer and fewer resources left. whats worse, pollution is getting more and more serious and the climate is becoming warmer and warmer. so we must do something to protect not only our next generation but also ourselves. as is shown in the pictures, we plant trees and we will enjoy the shade ourselves as well as our grandchildren. if we do something good to nature, it will do more to us.本题是一篇议论类看图写话。本文应用第一人称、时态用一般现在时。内容要点：1.论述人与自然的关系；2.结合图画进一步阐述人与自然关系的重要意义。本文也可采取下面的写作方式：1.介绍图画的基本内容并引出论点；2.根据前文的论点展开论述。第二节：作文假如你是李华，今年上高三，高考在即，看到大家每天为自己所做的一切，深有感触。请根据下表提示，写一篇120左右的短文，可增加细节，适当发挥。家长生活上的照顾学校提供方便(延长图书馆的开放时间)老师学习上的帮助（鼓励，答疑解难）你自己（自由发挥，至少两点）【参考范文】one possible version:im a senior 3 student. the college entrance exam is on the way .everyone aroun