陕西省延长县高考英语二轮复习 作文品析（5）.doc

陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）作文品析（5）【2016高考训练题】写作 (满分25分) 距离高考剩下不到一年的时间了，紧张的高考备考已经拉开序幕，但是很多同学还不知如何处理学习、健身和休息与高考备考之间的关系。请根据图中的内容写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对这一问题的建议。注意：1词数100字左右，开头语已为你写好，2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。how to get prepared for the college entrance examswe are going to attend the college entrance exams in less than one year. _【参考范文】one possible version:how to get prepared for the college entrance examswe are going to attend the college entrance exams in less than one year. however, many students still dont know how to coordinate their study, rest and physical exercise when preparing for the exams. they usually devote too much time to their study, which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning. as the proverb goes, early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. wed better leave ourselves enough time to sleep since it enables us to learn our lessons more efficiently. whats more, a strong and healthy body is the base for our further study and our future work and creative activities. therefore, as we are preparing for the exams, dont forget. 假设你是某中学学生李明，请你给在美国的网友mike写一封信，告诉他你的一次难忘的聚会，主要内容如下：1简述与朋友或同学的难忘的聚会；2描述当时聚会的情况；3谈谈自己的体会和感受。注意：1词数不少于120(信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；2可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯；3文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。dear mike，i have been interested in the adventurous and colorful stories you told me in your school time._ _hoping to get your early reply.sincerely yours，li ming【参考范文】dear mike，i have been interested in the adventurous and colorful stories you told me in your school time. now i will tell you something of my own to share with you. it is an unforgettable party in my life which happened in my high school.on a snowy day, owing to a careless slip on my way to school i fell onto the ground, only to find that my feet were seriously hurt. i was told by the doctor to lie in bed for one month or so, which deeply frustrated me. still more disappointedly, my classmates and i had planned a trip to dongjiang lake park to celebrate my birthday the following sunday. however, my plan melted into the air. there was no doubt that i would have a lonely and boring birthday.to my surprise, on the afternoon of my birthday, several classmates turned up in my home with a bunch of flowers and wonderful gifts. we had a merry chat, singing karaoke and playing cards. all of us were bubbling over with enthusiasm. when they were leaving, they wished me a speedy recovery. i was deeply touched by their thoughtfulness and kindness, and the impressive birthday party will stick in my mind forever. isnt it moving and unforgettable?hoping to get your early reply.sincerely yours，li ming书面表达近年来，由于全球环境日渐恶化，自然灾害频繁发生，给人们的生命与财产带来了极大的危害。假如你是高中学生李华，就此事向报社写一篇英语文章，呼吁人们从自我做起，保护环境，爱惜生命，使我们居住的环境得到彻底的改善。要求：1.可适当增加细节以使行文流畅。2词数：100左右。_one possible version：dear editor，more and more disasters have taken place on end recently，which have brought in many deaths and loss. its high time we realized the importance of protecting our environment. i am strongly appealing to people acting for our surroundings.people always take a lot from the earth, for example, cutting more trees for houses，digging more mines for a better life, giving more green house gases into the air and so on. high carbon life makes people comfortable and high technology makes people warring. all this makes our life more difficult and our earth not easy to live on.it is everyones duty to protect our environment. i hope everyone should play a role in making our earth easier to live on. do from now on. more giving，less taking and greed so as to make our environment more beautiful.yours sincerely，li hua【2016高考训练】书面表达 （满分25分）假设你叫李华，你所在的城市要为明年暑假招聘英语导游，你打算应聘。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇面试稿。1. 对英语有浓厚的兴趣，口语熟练，经常与英国网友(net-pal)聊天；2. 性格开朗，思维敏捷，善于与人沟通；3. 本地人，熟悉所在城市的历史与文化。注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。hello! my name is li hua. its a great honor to be here to have this interview for an english guide in the summer vacation._ thank you . 【参考范文】书面表达hello! my name is li hua. its a great honor to be here to have this interview for an english guide in the summer vacation.to begin with, as a senior high student, i am crazy about english and can speak it fluently. im used to practising speaking english in everyday life. for example, i often chat with some english net-pals in my spare time, which really contributes to my fluency in oral english. besides, im open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of social practice,which i think is a quality that a good guide should have. above all, as a native of the city, i know a lot about its history and culture. so i;m sure that the foreigners will appreciate my work and enjoy their stay in our city.if iam given the chance to be a guide, ill spare no effort to do it well. in a word, im looking forward to it. thank you.书面表达随看经济的发展和人们生活水平的提高，越来越多的私家车出现了，请根据自己的了解，简单描述利与弊，并针对私家车带来的弊端阐述自己的见解。 注意：1.文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数；2词数：100左右。with the development of economics as well as the improving life standard, more and more people possess private cars._ _one possible version：with the development of economics as well as the improving life standard, more and more people possess private cars.there are advantages, of course. it will bring great convenience to us. besides, it is good to the development of economics in turn.but as each coin has two sides，there are disadvantages as well. first of all，the air and noise pollution is undoubtedly going from bad to worse. it is not only of great harm to the environment around us，but also to our human bodies. in addition, it may ca