四级写作常见错误及经典句型.doc

回顾历年四级作文名师改卷感悟及针对建议2009年6月CET4作文预测一、就业：Directions: for this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic jobs for graduates. you should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below: 1.大学生难找工作 2.原因很多 3.解决的办法二、四川地震（爱心）:【相关话题】为四川地震灾区的灾民写一封募捐信;为四川地震灾区的灾民写一封慰问信【相关词汇】devastating adj.破坏性的；毁灭性的a devastating earthquake破坏性地震大地震：the massive earthquake地震灾区：quake-hit area/ quake-stricken area重灾区：the worst-hit area地震灾民：quake victim震中：epicenter余震：aftershock医务工作者：medical worker救援者：rescuer伤者：the injured失踪者:the missing废墟：debris/ruin捐款：to donate money献血：blood donation捐物：to donate appliances感人的：moving, touching精神创伤：mental trauma身体创伤：physical trauma只要有一线希望，我们就要尽百倍努力：If only there is the slighted hope, we will spare no effort.只要有一个幸存者，我们就绝不会放弃：If only there is one survivor in the debris, we will never give up rescuing.三、大学是否应该允许学生在校外租房住宿？【相关话题】你是否支持在校大学生在上学期间结婚？【相关词汇】（非婚）同居：cohabitate离婚：divorce一时冲动：whim生活开支：livelihood expenditure/living expenses/living expenditure生活费：allowance类似问题：你是否支持在校大学生在上学期间炒股？相关词汇：股市：stock market本金：principal盈利：profit学费：tuition fee理财（投资）：investment靠发财：make a fortune out of /by风险：risk抗风险能力：risk tolerance破产：bankruptcy五、交通问题无车日：a car-free day单双号：even and odd-numbered license plates尾气：fog, exhaust, exhaust fumes, automobile exhaust堵车：traffic jam六、写一封申请去中西部支教的申请信七、关于节约的话题（参见2004年1月六级考题）节约：thrift储蓄：savings1.大家拿到作文题目之后，先要仔细阅读题目明确作文的类型。这一点是非常关键的因为四级相对很强调作文的结构。如果没有一个很清楚的结构，一定会失去一定的分数。四级作文一般有下面三种结构：说明文，议论文和应用文写作。说明文主要可以分为阐述主题类型的，利弊类型的，原因结果类型的，解决问题类型的以及谚语说明类型。议论文主要是就观点进行反驳类型的。应用文写作主要包括演讲词，求职求学信，邀请信，感谢信和投诉信等。所以大家必须在平时复习的过程明确各种类型的写作结构，这样在考试时候就可以在结构上不会出现任何问题，也不会因为写跑题而失分。 来源：2.开始写作文时一定要段落清楚，有明显的开头，主体和结论部分。也就是大家要学会分段落，不要象记流水帐一样，一段到底，这样就会给老师留下很坏的印象。同时在文章写作过程中，一定要学会使用一些句子之间以及引起和结束文章时候的连接词，这样的话可以使文章很自然，流畅。比如在写文章主体的时候可以用首先，其次，再次这样的连接词，或者一方面，另一方面，等这样的词。这些都是很容易引起老师的注意，可以得分的地方。 3.写文章时候尽量多用一些四级词汇，这样也可以提高老师的印象。但不是说你用的词很多，而写出的句子结构，语法错误太多。这样也会很糟糕的。因此大家一定要注意，如果自己词汇不怎么多的时候，你不要用自己不明确和不会拼写的词，还有一定要确保句子的正确性，尽量避免语法结构的错误。即使你使用的简单句，但是写的很清楚，没任何错误，也可以得到不错的分数。 4.注意文章的长度安排，短的作文一定是不可以的，也就是字数要达到要求。但是长的作文如果几乎每句话都有错误也不能得到好的分数。所以大家一定要注意，写的时候要长度适中，确保写出的句子错误很少，即使观点只是很一般，没什么新的地方。也能得到相对好的分数。一起呵英语站 5.卷面一定要整洁，字一定要写的漂亮，这可以在很大程度上影响你们分数的升降。印象分数几乎全部是这个决定的，所以大家也要主要平时handwriting的练习。四六级作文评分标准及错误总结评分标准 2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。(注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。) 常见写作错误 一、主语错误 1.主语缺失 1)Inourcountryfeelsveryfree. Peoplefeelfreeinourcountry. 2)Inmyhometownarentverybusy. Peopleinmyhometownareverybusy. 2.非名词主语 1)Richdoesntensureahappylife. Beingrichdoesntmeanahappylife./Wealthdoesntensureahappylife. 2)Keeptwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible. Keepingtwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible. 3.主谓错位 1)Readingbookscanacquireknowledge. Peoplecanacquireknowledgefrombooks. 2)NowpeopleslivescantleaveTV. NowpeoplecantdowithoutTV. 二、谓语错误 1.多重谓语 1)Inourmodernsociety,therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated. Inourmodernsociety,manyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated./Alargenumberofpeoplehavefallenvictimtovarioustricks. 2)Povertymakesmanypeoplecantstudyabroad. Povertymakesmanypeopleunabletostudyabroad./Povertymakesitimpossibleformanypeopletostudyabroad./Povertypreventsmanypeoplefromstudyingabroad./Manypeoplecantstudyabroadbecauseofpoverty. 2.非动词谓语 1)Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersagainstit. Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersareagainstit. 2)Itissaidthattheplaceworthstouring. Itissaidthattheplaceisworthtouring. 3.主谓不一致 1)IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachmeCollegeEnglish. IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachesmeCollegeEnglish. 2)Iuseadiskbecauseitholdplentyofdata. Iuseadiskbecauseitholdsplentyofdata. 4.误用词组 1)Theyinsistonpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem. Theyinsistthatpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem. 2)Iamafraidofthatitsgoingtorain. Iamafraidthatitsgoingtorain. 三、冠词错误 1)Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising. Inmyopinion,thefutureofthebicycleisverypromising. 2)Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlythegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadones. Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlygoodbookstoreadandnevertouchbadones. 四、代词错误 1.偷梁换柱 1)Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,youshouldnotplagiarize. Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,heshouldnotplagiarize. 2)Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone. Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveusandtheywillleaveusalong./Ifyoucheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone. 2.指代不明 1)Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,whichnobodybelieved. Hegaveareason,whichnobodybelieved,fornotattendingthemeeting./Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,areasonwhichnobodybelieved. 2)Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdentheyhavetobear. Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdenstudentshavetobear. 五、形容词、副词错误 1)Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferently. Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferent. 2)Surprisingenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely. Surprisinglyenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely. 六、分词误用 1)Comparingwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem. Comparedwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem. 2)Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewingthroughmycamera. Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewedthroughmycamera. 七、修饰语误置 1)SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforlearningEnglishpeople. SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforpeoplelearningEnglish. 2)Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside. Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovetothecountrysidethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside. 八、垂悬修饰语 1)Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,peopleslivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved. Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,peoplehavegreatlyimprovedtheirlivingstandard. 2)Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,theletterwaspostedatonce. Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,Ipostedtheletteratonce. 九、平行错误 1)Whilewereducethenumberofvehicles,thespeedoftrafficcanbeincreased. Whilewereducethenumberofvehicles,wecanincreasethespeedoftraffic. 2)BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmeofthedifficultyofthecourseandhowlongitlasted. BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmeofthedifficultyandlengthofthecourse./BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmehowdifficultthecoursewasandhowlongitlasted. 十、搭配错误 1)Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit. Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassohighthatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit. 2)Crowdedtrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers. Heavytrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers. 十一、破句 1)Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob.Thenyoumustpassthejobinterview. Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob,youmustpassthejobinterview. 2)Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners.Becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant. Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners,becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant. 大学英语四级作文批改常见错误归纳1. 最常见错误：从句连接词缺失，最主要的是THERE BE句型：There is a saying goes . 应为There is a saying which goes .There are many people think that. 应为There are many people who think that.或者直接说Many people think that.Its the major thing affects peoples friendship. 少了一个thatWhen we have difficulty, someone helps you right away is the real friend. 少了一个who2. NO MATTER / WHETHER错误，这是英语专业学生最容易犯的另一类错误：Friendship is important for no matter rich people or poor people. 宜改为Friendship is possible, whether for rich people or for poor people. no matter后面必须接一个小句（主语、谓语完整）3. C语类重复。所谓C语类是个句法用语，用于引导一个完整的小句，起标志作用，如that/whether等等：People are not sure that whether. that一词多余4. LACK / LACKING似乎受汉语语感的影响，多数英语学生似乎认为lack是形容词，所以时常说is lack of.5. 逻辑域错误。这个应该不难判断，但还是经常出错：If people become friends, both of them wont care about money. 可改为neither of them care about money.其他：语义重复In my opinion, I agree with the view that. agree一词本身就表示说话人的观点，可将In my opinion去掉，或把后面的一半改为the view that. is rightshare many common interests common与share属同义反复，可改为have many common interests或share many interests论断过于绝对，缺乏足够思考A person with good finance will not understand why his poor friend gets on a sardine-jam like bus and always choose to dine at some poor-condition restaurant at the roadsides. 相信富人也不至于笨到这个程度句义严重反复，缺乏变化Some people believe that financial disparity affects friendship. Some believe that financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. For my part, I agree with the latter, because financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. 不必多说了连词错误It is not difficult to imagine if those rich people have some poor friends with common interests. if一词显然应该是that，不过更通顺的说法应该是It is not difficult to imagine rich people having some poor friends with similar interests.不会使用照应语We wont ask people whether they have much money or not when making friends with other people. people和other people显然应该是同指关系，后面的other people应改为them才对作文是对语言的综合运用，可以集中体现出学习者的基本功和思维能力；语感非常重要，不过要形成好的语感还需要长期的反复训练。过去指导英语专业大四学生毕业论文，每届都发现有不少已经过了TEM8的英语专业学生的语言能力有明显缺陷。写作能力必须建立在大量阅读、用心感受和无数次练习的基础上，对此曾对学生反复讲过多次，不过由于无法立竿见影，多数学生不能很好地坚持，很是遗憾。英语四六级写作经典句型1)主语从句It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known thatIt is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent thatIt goes without saying that It is universally acknowledged thatIt is / thatwww.yeeyi.NET2)宾(表)语从句We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.3)定语从句(限定性和非限定性) As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ describedin the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table,There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds is spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.4)状语从句(时间，原因，地点，条件，让步，转折等)When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster (怪物) which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.5)分词短语做定语或状语Prof. Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.6)倒装句Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem. Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.7)被动句Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem. He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds. Many people believe that(It is believed that 8)设问句Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?9)比较1.The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that.4.It is reasonable to maintain that .but it would be foolish to claim that. 5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.6.Like anything else, it has its faults.7.A and B has several points in common.8.A bears some resemblances to B.9.However, the same is not applicable to B.10. A and B differ in several ways.11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.12. People used to think ., but things are different now.13. The same is true of B.14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.15. It is true that A . , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are .10)原因壹壹英语(www.YeeYi.Net) 1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).2. The answer to this problem involves many factors.3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that.4. The factors that contribute to this situation include.5. The change in .largely results from the fact that.6. We may blame .,but the real causes are.7. Part of the explanations for it is that .8. One of the most common factors (causes ) is that .9. Another contributing factor (cause ) is .10. Perhaps the primary factor is that .11. But the fundamental cause is that . 11)结果1. It may give rise to a host of problems.2. The immediate result it produces is .3. It will exercise a profound influence upon.4. Its consequence can be so great that.12)批驳1)It is true that ., but one vital point is being left out.2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.3) Some people say ., but it does not hold water.4) Many of us have been under the illusion that.5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.6) It makes no sense to argue for .7) Too much stress placed on . may lead to .8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that .9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that .13)举例1) A good case in point is .2) As an illustration, we may take .3) Such examples might be given easily.4) .is often cited as an example.14)证明1) N