三一口语6级自选话题稿---宠物小鸡.docx

云舟学校三一口语金牌导师6级优秀自选话题稿三一口语6级自选话题稿宠物小鸡My Little Chicks云舟学员：郭思远 报考级别：三一六级 云舟指导老师：李蓓蓓云舟李老师点评：郭思远是云舟的老学员了，五级的时候也是跟着我学的，当时自选话题就用的这个话题，并且取得了五级优秀的好成绩。准备六级话题时，我和孩子商量，决定还是就他熟悉并且有信心的以前用过的话题，修改内容和讲述点，增加6级的语法点，所以继续使用这个话题。Question 1：What do my chicks look like?Last Qingming Festival, my mother gave my sister and me two newborn chicks. She hoped us to learn how to take care of the small animals. When we saw the chicks, we were so excited. Because the chicks were so lovely and small. They had yellow fluff, a pair of small and round eyes, as well as a sharp and small mouth. They looked like two yellow balls. I put them on my hands, touched their fluff. Their fluff was very smooth and very soft. As they grow up, their yellow fluff drop， and their clows are stronger than before. 云舟李老师点评：很多人都有养宠物的经历，但是小作者的妈妈是想让孩子从中学会如何照顾小动物，有爱心。Question 2: How do I look after the chicks? First,We prepared them a big cardboard box, covered with thick paper inside,as their home. we prepared their food everyday. We put millets with water into a small bowl. They were very fond of the food .That period of time, every day when I came back from school , I immediately went to see my chicks. Sometimes they stepped into the bowl, making the millets everywhere in their home. We had to clean for them. After one week, they could drink water, I must make sure that they have enough fresh water to drink. And it was my job everyday! Besides ,grandma and I also gave the chicks another food that made by corn flour mixed vegetable with water.They were very fond of these food that we prepared for them. But they were very naughty, they often sprinkled the water. If no one is at home, they have to be thirsty all day! Whats more, I also took them out of their home to let them have a sunbath on the balcony for a few hours at noon.云舟李老师点评：从中，你是否看出来小作者对小鸡的照顾，真是细致呢。Question 3: What was the most amusing thing that has happened?When the chicks grew bigger and stronger, they were more and more curious about the outside world. They stretched their necks trying many times to jump out of their nest. All of us thought they were too little to jump out of the box.However, one unexpecting thing happened. One day, when I came home from school , I found that the chicks were not in the nest. They were playing happily in our living room. Unexpectedly, the two naughty guys made the living room a mess! They ate up my mothers favorite flowers,only several pieces of leaves were left! Whats worse, there were a few piles of smelly shit on the clean floor .It was too terrible! My mother was very angry, and ordered us to put the chicks back in the nest. But the chicks preferred the outside world, they still jumped out of their nest often, and they had done a lot of bad things. My mother had to look for a higher and larger box as a new nest for the chicks.云舟李老师点评：小家伙也很淘气，每次小作者都声情并茂的讲述这段，非常有趣。Question 4: Where do we bring the chicks to go to play?After dinner, we often played with the chicks in the yard. When I put the chicks on the grass, they run around happily , they ate the ants on the grass, they also ate the leaves. The chicks were very clever, in order not to be caught, they often hid in low bushes. When we played the slide, we also let chicks play with us together . My sister put the chicks on the slide, and pushed them down the slide gently, and I was ready to catch and hold the chicks .We had great fun.云舟李老师点评：看到这还真让人开眼了，小作者和小鸡的游戏还真是挺多的。Question 5: Why was only one chick left later?After a month was the Labors Day, our family went to Tianjin to travel. Before leaving, we prepared for the two chicks plenty of food and water. Along the way, I often worried about my chickens. My mother said to me, do not worry, you have prepared enough food for them. Three days later, we returned to Beijing . When my mother opened the door, I felt very nervous, I had a sense of foreboding. I even didnt have time for changing shoes and ran to see my chicks.The unfortunate thing happened, one chick died. I cried sadly, I held out the dead chick and buried it under a tree in the yard. Grandma gave food and water for the living chick. The only chick must be hungry and thirsty, it did not stop drinking and eating.I blamed on myself, if I gave them enough food,the chick wouldnt starve. Since then on, I was more careful to take care of the only surviving chick.云舟李老师点评：不幸的是一只可爱的小鸡饿死了，这可让小作者自责不已。Question 6: Where do we have to sent the chick to ? It is a pity that we didnt keep the lovely chicks for long. Because when the Summer vacation was coming, my mother said to me and my sister that, our family would go overseas for a holiday. But it meaned that the chick had to stay alone at home for two weeks ,it would starve to death.Therefore, we had to give her to someone else.We were reluctant to give the chick back to the aunt, because my mom bought the ch