连贯与句式的运用.ppt

连贯与句式的运用 连贯 coherence 指文章语意的通顺和语言形式的紧密衔接并符合一定的逻辑关系 要使文章前后衔接紧密 可采用以下方法 提示1 恰当使用关联词如when so if because sothat等 提示3 适当使用过渡性语句Thereasonsareasfollows Everycoinhastwosides Ontheotherhand Onthecontrary 提示2 巧妙使用意思有联系的词或短语如First Second Third Soon What smore Asaresult等 连接词 句型的选择1 递进关系 肯定 否定 2 时间一 就不久然后同时 Besides What smore Also Inaddition Furthermore What sworse Evenworse Worsestill Tomakemattersworse Themoment Ondoing assoonas immediately directly Itwasnotlongbefore Afterawhile Soon Afterthat Then So Next Atthesametime Meanwhile 3 转折4 顺序5 条件6 强调 however but onthecontrary Ontheotherhand yet First Second Third Last Next Then If Aslongas Solongas onconditionthat Itwas that who Soshedid Idohope Shedidhelpme Itreallyworked 7 其它不得不做某事havetodosth havenochoicebuttodosth havenothingtodobutdosth 有必要做某事Thereisnoneed forsb todosth Itisnecessary forsb todo 最好做某事You dbetterdosth It sbettertodosth 做某事没困难havenodifficultyindoingsth havenotroubleindoingsth 感谢某人thanksb bethankfultosb expressone sthankstosb begratefultosb Thanksto 求助某人turntosb forhelp asksb forhelp withthehelpof withone shelp惊奇Toone ssurprise Insurprise Surprisingly only 不定式 表意外结果 原因如下 很多 Thereasonsareasfollows Therearemanyreasonsforit 浪费金钱 时间 It sawasteofmoney time 结果Asaresult Therefore Thus So总结Inaword Inshort Aboveall Afterall表达观点Inmyopinion Ithink Ibelieve I msure Iguess AsfarasI mconcerned Asforme Task1请在下列句子中 间 填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语 XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet heheardsomeonecryforhelp HeadvisedthatIhireacar Icouldtravelaroundinthewest Itwasnotlong thepolicecame heheardthecryforhelp hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl when sothat inorderthat before Assoonas Immediately Directly Themoment Doyouagreewithmyarrangement dowritetomesoon Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping wecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinterest Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends Isaved 80 Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth itmaymakeusfat Ifnot What smore Besides Also Furthermore Inaddition Asaresult Therefore What sworse Evenworse Tomakemattersworse 语篇填空Jane 1 walk roundthedepartmentstore Sherememberedhowdifficult 2 wastochooseasuitableChristmaspresentforherfather Shewishedthathewasaseasy 3 please ashermother whowasalwaysdelightedwithperfume 4 shoppingatthistimeoftheyearwasnotapleasantexperience peoplesteppedonyourfeetor 5 push youwiththeirelbows 肘部 hurryingaheadtogettoabargain Janepausedinfrontofacounterwheresomeattractivetieswereondisplay Theyarerealsilk theassistanttriedtoattracther Worthdoubletheprice 6 Janeknewfrompastexperiencethatherchoiceoftieshardlyeverpleasedherfather Janestoppedwhereasmallcrowdofmenhadgathered Shefoundsomegoodqualitypipesonsale Shedidnothesitateforlong 7 herfathersmokedapipeonlyonceinawhile sheknewthatthiswasapresentwhichwasboundtopleasehim 8 Janegothome withhersmallbutwell chosenpresentinherbag herparentswerealreadyattable 9 have supper Hermotherwasexcited Yourfatherhasatlastdecidedtostopsmoking Jane 10 inform 1 waswalking2 it3 toplease4 Besides5 pushed6 But7 Although8 When9 having10 wasinformed 练习 一 用替换词代替划线词 Pollutionisabigproblem Pollutionisamajorproblem 2 Suchmistakesmustbeeliminated Suchmistakesmustbegotridof 3 ManypeoplearenowstudyingNewConceptEnglish ManypeopleareatpresentstudyingNewConceptEnglish 4 Thetwosideshavebeengettingonfastwiththenegotiations Thetwosideshavebeenmakingrapidprogresswiththenegotiations 5 Thegovernmentlookslessandlessabletotackletheseproblems Thegovernmentappearslessandlesscapableoftacklingtheseproblems 练习 一 动词及短语动词学习 翻译成中文 1 Hedrewup pullupatthetrafficlights 他在交通灯处紧急刹车 2 Thegovernmentisdeterminedtoputabrakeonpublicspending 政府决定消减公共事业开支 3 Nothingcouldtakemymindoffthesadnews 我无法不去想那令人悲痛的消息 4 Hisconfidencegrewashisknowledgeincreased 他的信心随着知识的丰富而增长 5 Theyemployedanexperttolayoutthegroundsofthemansion 他们雇佣了一位专家来设计这栋大厦的庭院 6 Theaudiencewascarriedawaybythewonderfulmusic 听众被美妙的音乐吸引 陶醉 7 Sicknessoftenresultsfromeatingtoomuch Eatingtoomuchoftenresultsinsickness 疾病常常是由于吃得过多而引起的 吃得过多会引起疾病 8 Someofthereporterscookedupfalsenews 有些记者编造假新闻 9 Applyyourmindtoyourwork 专心干你的工作 10 Igotaletterfromafriendofminelastweek butIhaven tgotroundtoansweringityet 我上周收到一个朋友的来信 但我还没抽出时间回信 11 Therobberswerecaughtred handedatlast 最终盗贼被当场捕获 12 Listenoutforyournametobecalled 仔细听着 等着叫你的名字 13 Wearelisteningforthebellattheendoftheclass 我们等着下课铃声 14 Don ttrouble bothertogetdinnerformetoday I lleatout 今天不用麻烦给我做饭了 我出去吃 15 Janestudiedtill12andthendecidedtocallitaday 珍尼一直学习到12点才决定休息 二 短语搭配学习 翻译成中文 Coffeeismycupoftea 咖啡是我的最爱 2 Heissecondonlytomyownsoninmyaffections 在感情上讲 他仅次于我的亲生儿子 3 Duringfoggyweatherthetrainsarelatemoreoftenthannot 碰到有雾的天气 火车往往晚点 4 Thetrafficissobusytherethat asoftenasnot youcannotevencrossthestreet 那里的交通车流量大 你多半过不了马路 5 YouasmuchastoldmethatIwasafool 你实际上等于是说我是个傻瓜 6 It saseasyasanythingelse 这非常容易 7 Youarealuckydog 你是个幸运儿 8 Sheisperfectintermsofpersonality 就人品方面来言 她无可挑剔 9 Salebegantodropandthecompanywassooninthered 销售额降低 公司很快出现赤字 10 Ididn twanttooffendhim soItoldawhitelieandsaidIdidn tknow 我本不想得罪他 所以我对他我不知道 说了个小谎 11 Icanworkouttheproblem It sapieceofcake 我可以算出该题 这太容易了 12 Don tspeakatonce Oneatatime please 不要一起说 请你们一个一个来 13 You llcometothepointintime 你迟早会明白的 14 Greenplantsallhaveonethingincommon theirneedforwater 绿色植物共同点是需要水 15 Intelligencedoesnotalwaysgosidebysidewithyoursuccess 聪明不是总和成功相随的 16 Everyonegetsupsetsfromtimetotime 胃部偶尔发作每个人都会碰到 17 Theexpertsfromallovertheworldsucceededindesigningthegyminthelongrun 来自全球的专家们终于成功设计出这个体育场 18 Jimmyhithislittlebrotherintheeye buthedidn tdoitonpurpose 吉米打了小弟的眼睛 可不是故意的 19 Ithasbeenrainingonandoffforafewdays 这雨时断时续地下了有好几天了 20 Theboytriedinvaintoclimbthemountain 这个男孩企图登山是徒劳 句式的运用 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思 能增加文章的文采 基本句型 1 感叹句e g 1 HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter 2 Whatakindboyheis 3 Howdisappointedhewas 2 强调句e g Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny 3 倒装句e g 1 Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem 2 Therecomesthepolicecar 3 Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman 句式的运用 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思 能增加文章的文采 基本句型 4 省略句e g Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus 5 with短语e g Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand 6 定语从句e g Inmyopinion cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation 7 各种名词性从句e g That swhatIshoulddo 8 各种状语从句e g Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit Task2按要求改写下列句子 使其更具文采 1 Tomsavedthedrowninggirl 强调 2 IhopeIcanpayavisittoyounextyear 强调 3 Tomwaspuzzled 感叹 4 Itisgreatfuntoclimbthehill 感叹 5 TomandMarylikesingingsongs 肯定倒装 6 Johnlikestostudyandplay 否定倒装 7 Soonthefirefighterscame 表时间句型 ItwasTomthat whosavedthedrowninggirl IdohopeIcanpayavisittoyounextyear HowpuzzledTomwas Whatgreatfunitistoclimbthehill Tomlikessingingsongs sodoesMary NotonlydoesJohnliketostudy but also helikestoplay Itwasnotlongbeforethefirefighterscame Task3WritingPractice请你给 中国日报 写一篇稿件 谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法 原因 1 家庭贫穷 供不起儿童上学 他们不得不在家赚钱养家 2 部分家长认为女孩上学无用 不愿让她们上学 3 部分儿童对功课不感兴趣 不愿上学 看法 1 每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会 2 全社会都应重视儿童教育 他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用 要求 1 不要逐字逐句翻译 2 语句要连贯通顺 3 字数100个左右 Nowinthecountryareas therearemanychildrenoutofschool Mostfamiliesarepoorandcan taffordtheireducation Theyhavetostayathomeandmakemoney Somepar