英语人教版八年级下册Unit 6 Writing.doc

Unit 6 An old man tried to move the mountains Writing: Cinderella(教学设计) By Panjuan Dayuan middle school in Shishou教学目标1. 能掌握故事的结构特点并能用一般过去时准确地描述自己所熟悉的故事。 2. 学生能从所描述的故事中体会故事所蕴含的哲理。教学过程Step 1. Greeting and leading Watch a video about Cinderella and give student two questions :Step 2. Before writing Having a discussion1. who were the characters in the video?2. what did he/she/they do?Showing the writing task and deciding the person and tense 灰姑娘是一个闻名世界的童话故事。以A girl called Cinderella 为题，写一篇不少于80词的文章。内容包括： 1. 故事发生的原因。父亲死后，继母让她天天做家务而不让她参加舞会。 2. 故事的经过。仙女使用魔法为她变出了马车、漂亮衣服和水晶鞋。 3. 故事的结局。和王子结婚，过上幸福的生活。 要求：语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整； 提示的内容要全部用上。 The third person and the past tenseFinding some useful sentencesOnce upon a time, there wascalledShe lived with . .had to spend all day doing . .got an invitation to the palace. .left the poor girl alone Fairy Godmother appeared. .turned .into .with her magic stick. .fell in love with .Finally , .got married to.Extensive languages：Famous saying，proverbs and Classical sample sentences (1) God helps those who help others. 助人者天助也. (2) Where there is love, there are always wishes. 哪里有爱，哪里就有希望。 (3) Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.心之所愿，无事不成。Step3:While writing 8 minutesStep4: After writingSelf check Sharing 请和同伴交换习作，相互欣赏与修改习作。修改习作时可使用这些符号： 优美句子； 漏词； 错处：； 删除； 语法错误 G ； 人称错误 P； 时态错误 T； 拼写错误Sp Step5: Summary : How to write a story.Step6: Homework: Write a story you like best.Show Time优秀作文分享 Cinderella Once upon a time, there was a girl called Cinderella. She lived with her stepmother and two stepsisters . She had to spend all day doing work around the house. One day an invitation to the palace arrived from the prince. The stepmother and stepsisters went to the party and leave the poor girl alone on the night. She was very sad, but sudenly her Fairy Godmother appears. She turned Cinderellas old clothes into a beautiful dress with her magic stick. Cinderella became very beautiful. As soon as the prince saw Cinderella, he fell in love with her. Where there is love, there are always wishes. Finally , the prince got married with Cinderella and they lived happily ever after. Cinderella Long long ago, there was poor girl called Cinderella. As soon as her father died, her stepmother and stepsisters treated her very badly . One day ,they got an invitation to a party from the prince. Cinderella wanted to go to the party but she hadnt beautiful dresses and shoes. On the night they left the poor girl alone at home. She was very sad, but suddenly her Fairy Godmother appeared. With the help of the fairy , Cinderella went to the party . As soon as the prince saw her, he fell in love with her. Finally, they got married and lived h