浙江省苍南县勤奋高级中学高考英语复习 书面表达专练8 (2).doc

高考书面表达专练（共八节）第八节）通知(announcement)与海报（poster）美文欣赏（enjoy reading） 口头通知boys and girls, may i have your attention, please? i have an announcement to make.the student union is going to hold a party on saturday evening, august 15, to welcome our friends from the united states. the party will be held in the roof garden of the main building. it will begin at 7:30 p.m. there will be music, dancing, singing, games and exchanging of gifts. everybody may bring a small gift for this purpose. remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes.dont forget: 7:30, saturday evening, roof garden, main building. there is sure to be a lot of fun. everybody is welcome.这是nmet94参考范文，略做修改。学习时请注意以下几点：1. 口头通知的套话及格式；2. 文中所用表示将来的不同形式；3. 时间、地点从小到大的排列方式；4. 主动、被动不同句式及肯定、否定祈使句的应用。5. 多项并列时单词词性的对等问题。（划线部分）推荐背诵文段 书面通知english teaching & research groupnoticethere will be an english lecture on the differences between american english and british english by a famous english professor ,mr. alexander, the author of follow me and new concept english which are well known to us all. it will be given in the lecture hall from 7:00 to 9:00 on saturday evening, september 23. those who are interested in it are warmly welcome. and you may also invite your friends of other schools to attend it.be sure not to be late. after the lecture, you may have a picture taken with mr. alexander.september 20,2003书面通知的三大特点：1. 句子较长，结构相对复杂；2. 无称呼，有标题：notice/announcement;3. 发文单位置于顶部或右下角，时间多置于左下角。推荐背诵文段 海报 posterfriendly basketball matchall are welcomeorganized by the student union of our school, a friendly basketball match will be held between no. 2 middle school team and ours on the basketball court at 4 p.m. on saturday, june 10,2003.thursday, june 8 the school student union仔细读读，会发现：1.“海报”的写法与“书面通知”是相同的！2. 标题的位置与写法。推荐背诵文段常用表达法(useful expressions)（一） 通知种类：口头通知和书面通知（二） 格式要求：书面通知和海报1. 要有标题：notice 或announcement；poster;2. 单位名称：写在最上方或正文下方右侧；3. 通知日期：写在左下角或省略。美国习惯：may 15(th),2003;英国习惯:15(th) may,2003。4. 通知人称：发受双方多用第三人称或依据题目要求。5. 语言文体：多用书面语。亦可用一些常见符号（特别是海报中）&(and), (email),$(dollars)等。 (三) 基本要点 力求简明扼要，抓住五个要点1 什么时间2 什么地点3 有何事情4 谁来参加5 注意事项（三） 常用套语：口头通知1. saluteladies and gentlemen; boys and girls; comrades 一律顶格写。 美国人在称呼后用冒号，英国人用逗号。2. getting silencemay i have your attention, please?attention please, everyone!be quiet, please.please stop talking.3. beginning an announcementi have an announcement to make. i have good news for you all. i have something important to tell you. theres been a change in our time schedule（表）this week.4. body(1) 发通知单位可在正文中提及，也可不说；(2) 发通知时间不必说；(3) 可用口语体或缩略式(4) 多用将来时态或表示将来的时态或形式。 be going to do the student union is going to hold a party on saturday evening, august 15,(nmet94) will do somethinga. on saturday 22 july there will be visits to different places.(met89)b. the party will be held in the roof garden of the main building.(nmet94)c. well have our picnic lunch there in the small woods by the lake.(nmet95) be to do somethinga.we are to visit the museum after lunch.b.the meeting is to be held on friday. the imperative mood(用祈使语气)a do come!(nmet95)b dont forget:7:30,saturday evening, roof garden, main building.(nmet94) the present indefinite(用一般现在时)the meeting starts at 6 pm.注：仅限于某些动词：be,get,start,set等。 the present continuous(用现在进行时)were so glad you are coming to join us on sunday.(nmet95)注：仅限于某些动词：go ,come,待leave, have, stay, do ,play, return等 be about to do somethingthe american guests are about to leave at 5 in the afternoon.5. ending an announcementthats all. thank you.thank you (for your attention).dont forget, will you?everyone is welcome.dont be late, please.please be there on time.写作练习1.请依据以下信息写一则通知。（120词左右）活 动英语演讲比赛（english-speaking contest）目 的提高英语口语组 织 者学生会(the student union)参加范围高中(senior)学生报名时间5月25日以前 (报名:sign up)报名地点学生会办公室比赛时间6月9日下午4：00比赛地点教学楼5楼礼堂（auditorium）奖 励前5名 2.(met89)一个国际青年团正在访问我国城市，你负责安排他们的参观活动。请起草一份通知，准备向参观团团员宣读。通知必须用一段话说明以下几点：1） 参观日期：7月22日，星期六。时间：早餐后8点出发。午餐在参观地点吃。下午回来。2） 参观内容：分四组，每组参观一个地方：工厂、学校、农场或医院。3） 欢迎每人参加一组活动。请选择好参观地点，并在今晚9点前到服务台（the service desk）签名。习作点评noticein order to improve the speaking ability of students, the students union has decided to organize a english speaking contest.the english speaking contest is going to be held in the schools auditorium in the fifth floor at 4:00 p.m. on june 9th. all the students who are in senior school are welcome to this activity. those who want to take part in the contest are requested to sign up for it at the students union office before may 25th. if you are one of the first five students, you will receive a beautiful present from the students union.the students union本篇习作符合书面通知的格式要求，表达也较为流畅、清晰，且运用了较多的句型结构。但要注意如下几个问题：1.准确用好原题所给词汇，如the student union, the english-speaking contest；2.注意细节问题，如划线部分；3.最后一句中，用one of the first five winners似更为贴切。ladies and gentlemen,welcome to our city. id like to show the case so that you can have a good trip.we will visit the city on july. 22nd, saturday. after we have a breakfast, we will set out at eight. it is in the place which we visit that we have lunch. and then we will go back in the afternoon.the members will be divided into four groups. and each group will visit a place: factory, school, farm and hospital.welcome to attend a group for everyone. do remember: choose the place and write your name on the service desk tonight.此口头通知存在较多的问题：1.开头与结尾缺少必要的套语；2.要点不够完整准确（通知大忌！）：9点前签名；3.冠词用法错误：after we have breakfast, visit a place: a factory, a school, a farm and a hospital;请对照参考范文改正划线部分不妥之处。参考范文 notice we are going to have an english-speaking contest for senior students so as to improve our oral english. it will be held in the auditorium on the 5th floor in the teaching building at 4 pm june 9th. those who want to take part in the contest are supposed to come to sign up at the office of the student union before may 25th. all the senior students are welcome to join in the cont