2014北京英语一模作文总结.doc

海淀74. One possible version:Hi！Anna，Im glad to hear from you. I have benefited a lot from teamwork and Id like to share my own experience.I joined the relay race on the sports meeting last year. I was the third runner. Although I could run very fast, it was still difficult for me not to drop the stick. So before the race, my team members practiced with me again and again after school every day. They were patient to teach me the skill and tell me not to be nervous. It was their company and encouragement that helped me learn how to take the stick and pass it on very well. Finally, we won. All of us were happy and excited to win. Moreover, we realize the importance of teamwork. We know that working together and helping each other make our team strong and help us to succeed. Yours, Li Hua朝阳 文段表达（15分）根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和名字。假如你叫李华，你和你美国朋友Betty经常通过邮件谈论各自的生活，她想了解中国孩子上课外辅导班情况。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。提示词语：send，money，spend，hate, relaxBetty Do you have any training classes during the holidays? What problems do training classes cause? What do you think of training classes?To: BettyFrom: Li HuaSubject: Training classesHi! Betty,Im glad to hear from you.Yours,Li HuaHi! Betty.Im glad to hear from you. In recent years, some parents always send the children to all kinds of training classes during their holidays to help them study better. I am no exception.As a student, I think this may bring some problems. First, parents spend lots of money on these classes, but many students feel bored because thats not what they want to learn. Second, a lot of time is wasted. It not only influences their study but also gives them too much pressure. Third, it probably makes them hate studying.I think we should be given some time to relax and do some things that we want to do, such as playing basketball, football and computer games. We really need a colorful life.YoursLi Hua丰台.假如你叫李明，你的美国笔友Mike通过邮件，想知道三年来你在学校记忆最深刻的一件事，如：在运动会上，出游活动中，你与老师或同学日常生活中或其它活动中发生的事。请根据他邮件中提出的问题回复邮件。l What do you remember best at school in the past three years?l What was it?l Why do you remember that?提示词语：a sports meeting, a school trip, a New Year Party, hurt, take photos, sing, help, moved, confident, happyDear Mike,Im glad to hear from you._What do you remember best at school? Write and tell me.Yours,Li Ming文段表达（15分）One possible version:Dear Mike,Im glad to hear from you. I remembered a sports meeting best. It was last year. I took part in the school sports meeting and ran the 100-meter race. After I started to run, I fell to the ground and hurt my leg badly. My friend Li Hong took me to the hospital. After the doctor examined and put some medicine on my leg, Li Hong took me home. He not only paid for the medicine but also took care of me. I felt very thankful to him, so I will remember it for ever.What do you remember best at school? Write and tell me.Yours，Li MingOne possible version:Dear Mike,Im glad to hear from you. Our school organized a lot of activities in the past three years. I remember the mountain climbing best.Last term, my classmates and I had a school trip to Xiangshan Park. There, we were divided into 7 groups to take a competition. The first group that topped the mountain would win a big prize. Of course, everyone was looking forward to winning the game.Our group tried our best to climb as quickly as possible. But I felt dizzy and was out of breath for climbing too quickly midway. I was so tired that I couldnt keep going. I fell down to the stairs suddenly. Everyone in my group came to me immediately. At that moment, I felt really sorry because I made the group stop and maybe we couldnt win the competition. But none of them complained me. They were all kind and friendly. Some of them gave me candies so that I could get more energy. Others carried the bag for me so that I could climb the mountain easily “You can do it!” everyone encouraged me. At that time, I felt really powerful!At last, we topped the mountain. Although we didnt win the game, I felt so proud and warm. We were the best because we were such a united group!What do you remember best at school? Write and tell me.Yours,Li MingOne possible version:Dear Mike,Im glad to hear from you. Many things happened in the past three years. But I remember one thing best which happened at the last New Year party.That party would be the last party we would have in this school. We decided to make dumplings in the party. So we, the students, ourselves, brought everything we needed from our homes. And we made the dumplings together. Everyone was very busy and we were so happy that laughter and cheer could always be heard. The most exciting thing was that I could make the dumplings instead of eating only. Even if they were not as beautiful as my teacher made. Just at the moment, I felt that we were such a good class that we were just like a happy family. I was moved so much that I couldnt help running tears in my eyes. Thats the reason why I remember it best.How about you? What do you remember best at school? Write and tell me.Yours,Li MingOne possible version:Dear Mike,Im glad to hear from you. At school I remember the most unforgettable thing that happened between my English teacher and me.Once I was not good at English, especially when I began to learn English. I found it too difficult. I also became upset easily. I always failed in the exams and almost gave it up. My English teacher, Miss Li, noticed my problem. She had a talk with me patiently and taught me how to learn English well. After that, she spent an hour helping me every day. Little by little, I became interested in English and felt more and more confident. Now I not only do well in English but also try to help others with their English when they are in trouble.I still remember that because I think I am so proud to be one of Miss Lis students. I have learned a lot from her. When I grow up in the future, I hope I will become a teacher like her.What do you remember best at school? Write and tell me.Yours,Li Ming西城 十文段表达(15 分)根据中文和英文提示,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于 50 词的回信。信的开头和结尾 已给出,其词数不计人所要完成的回信内。所给提供的英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。74.假如你叫李明,你的笔友 David 要来北京旅行。他给你发来邮件,想了解北京的情况。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。提示词语：the Summer Palace, the Great Wall, amazing, fantastic, crowded1. When is the best time to visit Beijing?2. What are some good places to visit in Beijing?3. What other things do I need to know about Beijing before I come?To David From Li MingHi! David,_Im glad to hear from you.Yours, Li Ming书面表达Possible versionHi! David, Im glad to hear from you. The best time to come to Beijing is dur