重庆市渝中区高考英语二轮复习 短文改错（4）.doc

短文改错（4）短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。【参考答案】短文改错：though great progress has made in science these years, there beenare still many people lived in poor conditions. they make their living livingby collecting and selling used thing. their children cannot go to school thingsbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there.why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? dothe answer lies on the population explosion. a president of a developing incountry once said: “it is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to weproduce child without limit.” although these few words sound simple enough, childrenbut they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion. clearly2012模拟短文改错mtoday we went to climb the west hillearly in morning 1_we started out and arrived an hour latethen we began 2_to climbthe hill was high and some of us got tired 3_soon, and all of us were very excitedwe cheered 4_happily when we got the topwe had our lunch there 5_and had enjoyed ourselves very muchunfortunately， 6_when we walked down the hill，we were caught by 7_a rainwe remained calmly，shared umbrellas and 8_raincoats and walked carefullyfinally we both reached 9_the parking lot safelyin spite of the unexpecting rain 10_and wind，we had a good time【参考答案及解析】1. morning前加the 考查冠词的用法。注意习语in the morning。 2. late改为later 考查副词比较级的用法。此处表示“迟到了一小时”，故用比较级。 3. 正确 经分析本句正确。 4. and改为but 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据文意此处为转折关系。5. got后加to或got改为reached 考查动词的用法。此处the top作宾语，故改为got to 或及物动词reached。6. 去掉had 考查动词时态。根据句中的and可知，前后是并列关系，时态应一致。 7. by改为in 考查介词的用法。解题关键：掌握动词catch的用法，be caught in意为：遭遇。 8. calmly改为calm 考查形容词的用法。此处remain为系动词，其后接形容词。9. both改为all 考查代词的用法。根据文意没有两者的范围。 10. unexpecting改为unexpected考查分词的用法。此处unexpected意为：意料之外的。2012模拟短文改错n of all my teachers ,mr. moore is the one who impress me 1_most. he is 34, so he looks young for his age. and hes one of 2_the most popular teacher in our school. mr. moore pays more 3_attention to his way of teaching, comparing with other teachers. 4_he tries different ways to make his classes actively and lively. 5_in his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but understand 6_“why”. so, instead giving us answers immediately, he encourages us 7_to think by myself whenever he puts forward questions. with his help, 8_weve learned from how to settle problems. he leads us to such a 9_wonderful world of “why” as we all admire and respect him. 10_【参考答案及解析】1. impress改为impresses考查主谓一致。此处先行词one前有the，故其后定语从句的谓语动词应和one保持一致，用单数。 2. so改为but考查句间的逻辑关系。根据语境此处应为转折关系。 3. teacher 改为teachers 考查名词的单复数。根据句中的one of 可知，后面的名词应用复数形式。4. comparing改为compared 考查固定短语。和。相比应用compared with/to。 5. actively改为active考查形容词的用法。此处make 后接形容词作宾补。6. 正确 经分析本句正确。7.instead后加of考查固定短语。根据后面的giving可知，其前应用介词of。8. myself改为ourselves考查代词指代一致。根据文意反身代词应和us相一致。故用ourselves。 9. 去掉from考查动词的用法。learn from意为：向。学习，此处不合文意。10. as改为that 考查固定句型。此处考查such。that。句型。2012模拟短文改错otime seem limited for us senior three students. 1_ therefore, more and more student are studying from early 2_ morning till lately afternoon, even during the ten-minute 3_ break. in my opinion, take a break between classes is 4_ not necessary. otherwise, we will feel tired both physically 5_ and mentally. during the break, we should do something 6_to get rid of tiredness. what they need is to have a real rest, 7_instead getting more tired. my break is always pleasing. 8_sometimes i take some simple exercise. sometimes i had a free 9_chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. while the 10_next class begins, i feel fresh again.【参考答案及解析】1. seemseems 考查主谓一致。此处time是主语，谓语动词用单数。2.studentstudents 考查名词的单复数。根据后面的are可知用复数形式。3.latelylate 考查形容词、副词的用法。修饰名词afternoon应用形容词。4.taketaking考查动名词的用法。此处动名词短语作主语，故用动名词形式。5.去掉not 考查语境的理解。根据文意应为肯定意思。6. 经分析本句正确。7 they.we 考查代词指代一致。通篇文章都在谈论我们的事情，故用we。8. instead 后加of 考查固定短语。根据后面的getting可知用instead of。9.hadhave 考查动词时态。根据时间副词sometimes可知用一般现在时。10.whilewhen考查状语从句的连接词。根据文意用when“当。的时候”。2012模拟短文改错p the other day my father called me, that at first made 1._me very glad because of he seldom calls me. i was extra 2._happy for that day was his birthday and i thought he 3._remembered the date. but to my disappoint, our talk was 4._so short and ended so soon. my father called only tell me 5._that he has put another 1,000 yuan to my account, then hung 6._up after i could even tell him that it was my birthday. tears 7._of sadness came to my eye. honestly, i understand that he 8._ loves me just as true as my mom, but id prefer to hear 9._him say it out to me on my birthday 10._【参考答案及解析】1.that改为 which 考查非限制性定语从句的关系词。 此处which替代前文整个句子的内容。2.去掉of 考查状语从句的连接词。根据后面的句子he seldom calls me可知用because。 3. his改为my 考查代词指代一致。根据文意应是“我的生日”。4. disappoint改为disappointment考查固定短语的用法。此处to是介词，其后用名词。5. only后加to 考查不定式作目的状语。父亲给我打电话只是告诉我。6.has改为had 考查动词时态。根据文意“存钱”在“打电话”之前，故用过去完成时。7. after改为before 考查句意的理解。我还没有来得及告诉他那天是我的生日就挂掉了。此处before意为：没来得及。就。8. eye改为eyes 考查名词的单复数。此处指双眼用eyes。9. true改为truly 考查副词的用法。修饰动词love用副词。10. 正确 经分析本句正确。【2014高考英语四川省绵阳市二模试题】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。nowadays many young students are like cigarettes. one reason is because they feel its a kind of fashion. by smoke, they can look cool. some teenagers think smoking is good to social contact, so that they can develop social skill. some others want reduce stress and become relaxing, so they join smokers. and in fact, smoking is a d